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Udassiyon Ke Sabab Jo Likhna - 30th December 2011, 08:50 AM

Udassiyon Ke Sabab Jo Likhna
Toh Yeh Bhi Likhna
Ke Chand Taare Sab Badal Gaye Hai
Wo Zinda Lamhe Jo Teri Raahon Mein
Tere Aane Ke Muntazir The
Wo Thak Ke Saayon Mein Dhal Gaye Hai
Wo Teri Yaadein Khayal Tere Ranj Tere ILzaam Tere
Wo Teri Aankhein Sawaal Tere
Wo Tumse Mere Tamam Rishte Bichar Gaye Hai

Udaasiyon Ka Sabab Jo Likhna
To Ye Bhi Likhna
In Honton Pe Na Mukkammal Hone Waali Duaon Ke Suraj
Pighal Gaye Hain
Ab Tamam Sapne Hi Jal gaye Hai


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ahsaas acche lage..........keep writing :-)


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Love 30th December 2011, 03:03 PM

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Udassiyon Ke Sabab Jo Likhna
Toh Yeh Bhi Likhna
Ke Chand Taare Sab Badal Gaye Hai
Wo Zinda Lamhe Jo Teri Raahon Mein
Tere Aane Ke Muntazir The
Wo Thak Ke Saayon Mein Dhal Gaye Hai
Wo Teri Yaadein Khayal Tere Ranj Tere ILzaam Tere
Wo Teri Aankhein Sawaal Tere
Wo Tumse Mere Tamam Rishte Bichar Gaye Hai

Udaasiyon Ka Sabab Jo Likhna
To Ye Bhi Likhna
In Honton Pe Na Mukkammal Hone Waali Duaon Ke Suraj
Pighal Gaye Hain
Ab Tamam Sapne Hi Jal gaye Hai
nice thoughts....thanks for sharing

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30th December 2011, 03:58 PM

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Udassiyon Ke Sabab Jo Likhna
Toh Yeh Bhi Likhna
Ke Chand Taare Sab Badal Gaye Hai
Wo Zinda Lamhe Jo Teri Raahon Mein
Tere Aane Ke Muntazir The
Wo Thak Ke Saayon Mein Dhal Gaye Hai
Wo Teri Yaadein Khayal Tere Ranj Tere ILzaam Tere
Wo Teri Aankhein Sawaal Tere
Wo Tumse Mere Tamam Rishte Bichar Gaye Hai

Udaasiyon Ka Sabab Jo Likhna
To Ye Bhi Likhna
In Honton Pe Na Mukkammal Hone Waali Duaon Ke Suraj
Pighal Gaye Hain
Ab Tamam Sapne Hi Jal gaye Hai
Thanks For Nice Sharing ......... Lavina Ji !!!!




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Behad khoobsurat Ehsaas....acha laga aapko padhkar


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Udassiyon Ke Sabab Jo Likhna

Toh Yeh Bhi Likhna
Ke Chand Taare Sab Badal Gaye Hai
Wo Zinda Lamhe Jo Teri Raahon Mein
Tere Aane Ke Muntazir The
Wo Thak Ke Saayon Mein Dhal Gaye Hai
Wo Teri Yaadein Khayal Tere Ranj Tere ILzaam Tere
Wo Teri Aankhein Sawaal Tere
Wo Tumse Mere Tamam Rishte Bichar Gaye Hai

Udaasiyon Ka Sabab Jo Likhna
To Ye Bhi Likhna
In Honton Pe Na Mukkammal Hone Waali Duaon Ke Suraj
Pighal Gaye Hain

Ab Tamam Sapne Hi Jal gaye Hai
   
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