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Post kaisa ye CHAND he - 15th November 2005, 09:15 PM

Kaisa ye chand he, kaisa ye chand he,
Khuda ne khud sa banaya ye chand he….

Koi kehta he chand si ho, koi kehta he chand ho tum,
Kabhi kisi ki tanhaiyo ka sahara ye chand he….

Narm hawaon ka, makhmali fizaon ka,
Sagar ki lahron ka dulara ye chand he….

Kavi ki kavita ka, shayar ki shayri ka,
Kabhi aasra to kabhi inta shikar ye chand he…

Chamkati chandani ka, timtimate taron ka,
Dhadakate dilon ka chaheta ye chand he….

Gumsum andheri raton me farishton sa,
Phir bhi kitna Tanha akela sa ye chand he….

Kaisa ye chand he, kaisa ye chand he,
Khuda ne khud sa banaya ye chand he….



Me shayar nahi par banane ki koshish ki he, koi galti ho to maf kijiyega, or koi opinion ho to zaroor likhiyega: Dev
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16th November 2005, 01:40 PM

hey Dev
wonderful man, aur kehtey ho key tum shaaher nahi yeh kaisye ho sakta hai? itna khoobsoorat likhaa hai key bass mat poocho, waisey chaand key saath mera gehra lagaho hai is liye chand pey kuch bhi likha hooa ho i love it...........

meri tanhahi kaa saathi

yeh jo tum ney 2nd last shair likha hai i guess summary kuch aisi hai key kitna akela hai yeh chand ..... to bohot hi sahi likhaa hai

take care


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16th November 2005, 01:47 PM

Well written Dev jii
Bahut badhiya
Agar aap shayar nahi hai to shayar kahte kise hai ye hume batana plz

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17th November 2005, 07:48 PM

Dhanywad Star Ji, Abhishek Ji....
   
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18th November 2005, 02:21 PM

kya baat hai dev sahab ...
lagta hai ab hamara chand aapka ho gaya...
keep writing....
per please chand ko hamare liye chod de....
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21st November 2005, 05:39 PM

thanks ruchika ji.....

Chand to aap hi ka tha par aapne use khud se itna dur kar liya ki wo tanha sa ho gaya... bus usko tanha dekhkar hi humne ye sab kuch likha he....
Chand aapke paas hi he bus thoda mahsoos karne ki jaroorat he..

Wo Mahsoos karna nahi jante...
Jo kahte he ki Khuda he to kahan he...


sorry kuch jyada likh diya hoto
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