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ro rahi thi main... - 22nd November 2005, 04:12 PM

Dosti ka janaza uth raha tha …
Aankhen nam thi, dil ro raha tha…

Arthi ke ek kandhe per mera vishwas tha…
Dusre ko thame dosti ka ehsaas tha…
Tisre per mera maasum sa apnaapan tha…
Aur chothe ko thame us dost ke liye nisswarth pyaar tha…

Mann hi mann ro rahi thi main…
Is arthi ko akele dho rahi thi main…
   
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22nd November 2005, 05:54 PM

Bahut Bahut Khub.....

Kya composing ki he apne...
soch raha hun likhna chhod dun...

realy nice one...

Bus dua he ki ye shayri hi bani rahe.....
Khush Raho....
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23rd November 2005, 03:54 PM

Wonderful ruchika, bilkul aik naya aur alag topic
keep it up
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23rd November 2005, 04:20 PM

thanks ....

gath agar lag jaye to... rishtey ho ya dori...
khulne main waqt to lagta hai...
   
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23rd November 2005, 09:44 PM

Ruchika ji...

sabse pehle aapko ek compliment dounga aapka naam mujhe bohat pasand aaya ... na jane ye naam mujhe itna pasand kyuN hai ruchika...

khair aapka kalaam bhi aapke naam ki tarah behad asardaar tha ... par shayri ki takneek se jara hat ke laga .. par khayaloN ka jama jo aapne pehnaya .. behad pasand aaya ... umeed hai aap yuN hi likhti rahengi aur nikharti raheNgi ...

apna khayal behad acche se rakhiyega ....

aapka apna

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24th November 2005, 09:35 AM

hi kunal

thanks for the compliment...

ek baat khungi... ki main shayr nahi...
mujhe shayri ki koi defination nahi maloom...
bus dil ki baat likhne ki koshish karti hoon....
isliye ....sayad shyari se kuch hut ke ho jata hai....
mujhe bahut bhari words bhi nahi aate bus... kuch sidhe n simple words main khud ko express karne ki koshish kar leti hoon...

aap bhi apna achche se dhayan rakhiyega....
aur main bhi...
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