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dil dukhane ki bat karte ho - 7th October 2007, 08:17 PM

muskurane ki bat karte ho .
dil dukhane ki bat karte ho.
ho hasin aur ba wafa bhi ho.
kis zamane ki bat karte ho.
sochta hun ke aur kya sochun
tum bhulane ki bat karte ho.
ishq jhokha hawa ka hota hai.
kya chupane ki bat karte ho.
neend aakhon me aai hi kab thi.
jo jagane ki bat karte ho.
   
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Smile hi - 7th October 2007, 11:15 PM

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muskurane ki bat karte ho .
dil dukhane ki bat karte ho.
ho hasin aur ba wafa bhi ho.
kis zamane ki bat karte ho.
sochta hun ke aur kya sochun
tum bhulane ki bat karte ho.
ishq jhokha hawa ka hota hai.
kya chupane ki bat karte ho.
neend aakhon me aai hi kab thi.
jo jagane ki bat karte ho.

hi rehnuma ji pehle to aap ka yaha swaagat hai.
aap ne aate hee jaadu kar diya mahotrama. bahut sahaj aur khoobsurat alphaazo men aap ne apne dil ke dard ko bayan kiya hai, padh kar sach men men khud apne dil ka dard mehsoos karne lagaa. bahut khoob likha hai,

dil se mubarakbaad kabool kare aur ynhee likhatee rahe mahotarma
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aacharya ji - 7th October 2007, 11:22 PM

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8th October 2007, 11:57 AM

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muskurane ki bat karte ho .
dil dukhane ki bat karte ho.
ho hasin aur ba wafa bhi ho.
kis zamane ki bat karte ho.
sochta hun ke aur kya sochun
tum bhulane ki bat karte ho.
ishq jhokha hawa ka hota hai.
kya chupane ki bat karte ho.
neend aakhon me aai hi kab thi.
jo jagane ki bat karte ho.

waah huzuur!behad khuub-suurat Ghazal aap ne ataa kii hai,mujhe behad behad pasand ayee.. mere jaanib se daad haazir hai qubool keejiye..



buraa jo dekhan mai.n Chalaa, buraa naa milyaa koye
jo mann Khojaa apnaa to mujh se buraa naa koye


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Rehnuma ji Adaab............Aapka ek umda kalaam padha dil khush ho gaya ehsaas ek asar chod gaye apka kalaam ek ek ashaar ke kya kehne aur is kalaam per meri daad kubool ho unhi likhtey rahiye khush rahiye........aapka bhai


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wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
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8th October 2007, 01:59 PM

aadaab ar^z!
saHeb! aapkii ghazal paDhii ... khoob lagii! aik naz'r is qalaam pe Daale to meharbaanii hogii!

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aashiyaane kii baat karte hoN
dil dukhaane kii baat karte hoN.

hamko apnii khabar nahii jaanaaN
tum zamaane kii baat karte hoN.

saarii duniyaa ke ranj o gham daikar
muskuraane kii baat karte hoN.
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aik zamaane me.n Reshma ji kii gaayii ghazal ke chand sher yaad aa gaye, so likh diye! shayar kaa naam nahii

jantaa! aapkii ghazal ke kayii misreN is mash'hoor ghazal se milte haiN. misra ya sher agar tarah ke liye istemaal

kiyaa jaaye to bhii aik hii lete hai! agar zyaadaa ho jaayeiN urdu dano ke hisaab se ghalat hai!ya yuN kahe ki woh

ghazal ki originality pe sawaal uThaate hai!
maine aapkii pichhlii tehreereN paDhii hai,aap achchhaa likhte hai! aur mujhe lagtaa hai ki ye it'tefaaq ki hii baat

hogii ki misreN kisii aur ghazal me.n pehle se hii the!
to iltejaa hai ki aap is qalaam pe fir se gaur kareN, aur inheN isme se haTaaye!

aage aapkii marzii! meraa kaam aik naik raa'ye denaa thaa!

ijaazat!
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deer ji - 8th October 2007, 03:00 PM

dheer ji aapka ishara ham samajh gay aur achcha bhi laga lekin sach ye hi hai ki ye mahjh ittefaq hi hai warna meri shakl jaisi bhi ho meri khwahish yahi rahegi ki meri aulad ki shakl shirf mujhse mile isi tarah har gazal bhi meri achchi ya buri ho mere nam se jani jay
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16th October 2007, 12:47 PM

Quote:
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muskurane ki bat karte ho .
dil dukhane ki bat karte ho.
ho hasin aur ba wafa bhi ho.
kis zamane ki bat karte ho.
sochta hun ke aur kya sochun
tum bhulane ki bat karte ho.
ishq jhokha hawa ka hota hai.
kya chupane ki bat karte ho.
neend aakhon me aai hi kab thi.
jo jagane ki bat karte ho.



Ishq jhonka hava ka hota hei
kiya chupane ki baat karte ho

waaaaaaah kiya khub hei sher ye hazrat apka

Aap bauhat hee umd kehte hein rehnuma sahab

Jaanae kaise ashaar hote hein apke jo di l pe seedha acar kar jate hein

saadgee se bauhat puracar lehje mein aap dilki baat kiss qadar sehal andaz se kar jate ehin apko shayed andaza he nai hei

muskurane ki baat karte ho
dil dukhanae ki baat karte ho

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

khub !!!

kitne ajub andaz se kaha gaya matla


Apko parhna , Rehnuma ji , Maham ko buahat acha lagta hei

apni ata jaaree rakhiye ga hazrat .......


Eik baat kahe Maham ap se agar jo apko buree na lage tou

Aap apne hur sher ke baad ENTER key zaroor press kiya kijye

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hmmm?

Theek hei na ?

waise apki apni marzi hei zahir hie ke ap kaise isko post karen magar najnae kyun hamara dil chaha apse yeh kehte chalain

I m really sorry agar apko bura lagi ho ye jurrat hamaree

acha to hum chalte hien

Is bakamal ghazal ke ata karne ke liye thanx hazaroun gulistan

wid all my due respects , sir,

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