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bewafa to nahi - 23rd September 2007, 08:18 PM

tere bare me mujhko pata to nahi
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kab talak mai tujhe maf karta rahun
aadmi hun koi dewta to nahi

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24th September 2007, 12:36 AM

aadab rahnumaa ji...

bahot khoob kia baat hai...apki pahli hi nazm ki...keep it up...




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kab talak mai tujhe maf karta rahun
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kyun nigahen milane se darta hai tu
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likhna daqdeer ka mere bas me nahi
nasle adam se hun mai khuda to nahi
salaam rahnuma ji

sabse pehle main aapka yahan sawagat karta hun. umeed karta hun, k aage bi aapki kalam padne ko milegi.

aur janad, aapne to pehli hi post mein kamaal kar diya. bahut khub likha hai janab. daad hajir hai, kabul kijiye.

yuhin likte rahein aur khush rahein

aapka dost

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tere bare me mujhko pata to nahi
aadmi mai bhi itna bura to nahi

kab talak mai tujhe maf karta rahun
aadmi hun koi dewta to nahi

kyun nigahen milane se darta hai tu
sach bata tu kahin bewafa to nahi

likhna daqdeer ka mere bas me nahi
nasle adam se hun mai khuda to nahi


Simply awesome!

Bohat khuub! beh'r-e-mutdariiq salim muccaman me.n aap kii yeh Ghazal bohat khuub hai! mujhe yeh Gahzal behad behad pasand aaye hai... dili daad aur mubaaraq baad deta huu.n, qubool keejiye!

is forum me.n aap ka swaagat hai!

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24th September 2007, 09:10 AM

bazm meiN aapka swagat hai miyaaN


aur aapki Ghazal bohat pasaNd aayi, bohat zyada pasaNd aayi, ummiid hai ke aapke aur kalaam bhi padhne ko mileNge


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Thumbs up ni - 24th September 2007, 12:55 PM

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kab talak mai tujhe maf karta rahun
aadmi hun koi dewta to nahi

kyun nigahen milane se darta hai tu
sach bata tu kahin bewafa to nahi

likhna daqdeer ka mere bas me nahi
nasle adam se hun mai khuda to nahi
SALAAM...............Rehnuma ji...........Aap ka yanha isteqbal hai apko yanha dekhker bahut khushi hui aur haan apki gazal to bahut hi umda hai bahut pyare ehsaas pesh kiyen hain apne......unhi likhtey rahiye hame apki aurbhi shayri ka intezar rahega..........khush rahiye


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bahut khoob saHeb!!
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urdu se muhabbat karne walon - 18th November 2007, 08:53 PM

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tere bare me mujhko pata to nahi
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kab talak mai tujhe maf karta rahun
aadmi hun koi dewta to nahi

kyun nigahen milane se darta hai tu
sach bata tu kahin bewafa to nahi

likhna daqdeer ka mere bas me nahi
nasle adam se hun mai khuda to nahi


Adab arz hei ,

Jis shayer ko aaj tak Maham parhtee aarahee thee vo kabhi buahat khudsupurdagi liye nazar ata tha , kabhi buahat bekhudi , kabhi talkhee hotee uske ashaar mein kabhi shidat buahat jazbon mein kabhi buahat hidat ehsas mein

magar aaj jis shayer ko parha vo na jazbaat ki rau mein baha nazar aya , na kisi ki yaad mein duba , na hee pyar mein madhsoh ,

ye shayer bara sright fwd nazar aya

bauhat to the point ' matter of fact ' wala insan

jo saaf saaf baat kar raha hai

bina kisi narmi ke kisi chashni ke bina hee vo apni baat keh gaya hei

aur is shayer ka ye andaz se se zyada dil moh le gaya

kyun ke is seedhe saadhe stright fwd sache khare lehje mein baaree mohabat nazar ayee ,

'aar ya paar' walee kaifiyat aur kisi bhi romantic conversation se barh ke ye andaz e bayaan bauhat dil mein utar jata hei ke is mei shidat sachayee hotee hie ,


khub raha apka ye kalaam

aur tamaam kalamon ki maanind

daad haazir hei

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kab talak mai tujhe maf karta rahun
aadmi hun koi dewta to nahi

kyun nigahen milane se darta hai tu
sach bata tu kahin bewafa to nahi

likhna daqdeer ka mere bas me nahi
nasle adam se hun mai khuda to nahi
wah! kya khoob likha hai aap ne!
sab se zyaada to ye achha lagaa:
kab talak mai tujhe maf karta rahun
aadmi hun koi dewta to nahi
wah! kya baat hai!


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to ek dharkan - 19th November 2007, 08:33 PM

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Very Nice

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kab talak mai tujhe maf karta rahun
aadmi hun koi dewta to nahi

kyun nigahen milane se darta hai tu
sach bata tu kahin bewafa to nahi

likhna daqdeer ka mere bas me nahi
nasle adam se hun mai khuda to nahi
bahut khoob likha hai rehnuma janaab aap ne, aap ka yeh kalaam jigar ke par ho gaya, behar se abhi tarha se mukammal is kaavish par dil se daad kabool kare, yunhii likhate rahe janaab

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20th November 2007, 11:03 AM

rahnuma ji..........behad behad behad........khoobsurat lafazo.n se sajaya hai aapne gazal ko aur ahsaas to masha.allah....bahut khoob


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Ye ham kaise bataa sakte hain....zarur is duniya ki bheed me kho gaye honge shayed aap...just kidding..

aapki ghazal padhi ..bohat hi saade lafzon me bohat hi khoobsurat khayaal hai...yuhi likhte rahiye...yuhi mehfil me aaya karein..

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Wah Rehnuma ji, bahot hi ache ehsas pesh kiye hai aap ne,
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kab talak mai tujhe maf karta rahun
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kyun nigahen milane se darta hai tu
sach bata tu kahin bewafa to nahi

likhna daqdeer ka mere bas me nahi
nasle adam se hun mai khuda to nahi


acha likha hai aap ne likhte rahiye..................


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likhna daqdeer ka mere bas me nahi
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janab kya khoob kaha hai aapne

daad dilse

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