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geet ek pardeshi ka - 12th October 2007, 12:03 AM

jhoot bolun to mujhe bat bahut aati hai
sach to ye hai ke teri yad bahut aati hai.

jagta raheta hun na ki soya raheta hun
rat bhar bas teri yadon men khoya raheta hun

na samajh ke nahi ahsase judai mujhko
ye hai majburi jo pardesh le aai mujhko

chor kar tumko mai dur bhala kyun aata
apne hi shaher me gar kam koi mil jata
jhut bolun to...................................

jab nigahon me budhi ma cehra aata hai
lahu ragon me kuch pal ko thaher jata hai.

bhai baheno ka wo aate me lipat kar rona
ab bhi jari hai mera takiye me simat kar rona.

sitam to tumne kiya aate me bas itna kahkar
kapte hoton se ro ro ke alwida kahkar

jhut bolun to mujhe.............................
sach to ye hai ke teri..........................
   
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12th October 2007, 04:31 AM

namaskaar rahnuma ji,

aaj aapko humne pehli baar pada hai. aapne jo dard bayaan kiya hai, wo hum samaj sakte hain. dard-e-dil ache andaaz mein bayaan kiya hai. dard ko dil mein mat rakeiyga. hum to yahi dhua karenge k, aap humesha khush rahein.

aapka dost

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hello rahnuma ji,

Fabulous song and very well expressed. take care!
   
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Tarife Kabil likha dost - 30th April 2008, 09:39 AM

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jhoot bolun to mujhe bat bahut aati hai
sach to ye hai ke teri yad bahut aati hai.

jagta raheta hun na ki soya raheta hun
rat bhar bas teri yadon men khoya raheta hun

na samajh ke nahi ahsase judai mujhko
ye hai majburi jo pardesh le aai mujhko

chor kar tumko mai dur bhala kyun aata
apne hi shaher me gar kam koi mil jata
jhut bolun to...................................

jab nigahon me budhi ma cehra aata hai
lahu ragon me kuch pal ko thaher jata hai.

bhai baheno ka wo aate me lipat kar rona
ab bhi jari hai mera takiye me simat kar rona.

sitam to tumne kiya aate me bas itna kahkar
kapte hoton se ro ro ke alwida kahkar

jhut bolun to mujhe.............................
sach to ye hai ke teri..........................
Naya Hun, Tarif nahi ati par aapne achchha likha.
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jhoot bolun to mujhe bat bahut aati hai
sach to ye hai ke teri yad bahut aati hai.

accha likha hain aapne rehmumaji..........nice words

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jhoot bolun to mujhe bat bahut aati hai
sach to ye hai ke teri yad bahut aati hai.

jagta raheta hun na ki soya raheta hun
rat bhar bas teri yadon men khoya raheta hun

na samajh ke nahi ahsase judai mujhko
ye hai majburi jo pardesh le aai mujhko

chor kar tumko mai dur bhala kyun aata
apne hi shaher me gar kam koi mil jata
jhut bolun to...................................

jab nigahon me budhi ma cehra aata hai
lahu ragon me kuch pal ko thaher jata hai.

bhai baheno ka wo aate me lipat kar rona
ab bhi jari hai mera takiye me simat kar rona.

sitam to tumne kiya aate me bas itna kahkar
kapte hoton se ro ro ke alwida kahkar

jhut bolun to mujhe.............................
sach to ye hai ke teri..........................
Rahnuma jee...........bahut badiya likha aapne....ahsaas dil-fareb haiN


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