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sare kante chaman ke - 12th October 2007, 09:26 PM

darde dil ki mere wo dawa le gaya
har nishani wo apni utha le gaya.

sirf kagaz ke tukre kinaron pe the
teri tahreer dariya baha le gaya.

jane kaisi saza usne phulon ko di
sare kante chaman ke chura le gaya.

fhir wahi bhul jane ka dawa kiya
fhir nigahen wo mujhse bacha le gaya.

hath failaye jab bhi dua ke liye
mera dushman bhi mujhse dua le gaya.
   
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14th October 2007, 12:58 PM

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darde dil ki mere wo dawa le gaya
har nishani wo apni utha le gaya.

sirf kagaz ke tukre kinaron pe the
teri tahreer dariya baha le gaya.

jane kaisi saza usne phulon ko di
sare kante chaman ke chura le gaya.

fhir wahi bhul jane ka dawa kiya
fhir nigahen wo mujhse bacha le gaya.

hath failaye jab bhi dua ke liye
mera dushman bhi mujhse dua le gaya.
Bahut khuub likha hai aapne...! Maqta hamein khaas taur
se pasand hai...!

Mehfil ko roshan karte rahiyegaa

Duaaon ke saath...!



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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6th November 2007, 07:06 AM

rahnuma jee,

bahut hi pasand aayi aapki yeh Ghazal
khaskar
hath failaye jab bhi dua ke liye
mera dushman bhi mujhse dua le gaya.

regards
aarya


khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii

lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii

ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii


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6th November 2007, 09:26 PM

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darde dil ki mere wo dawa le gaya
har nishani wo apni utha le gaya.

sirf kagaz ke tukre kinaron pe the
teri tahreer dariya baha le gaya.

jane kaisi saza usne phulon ko di
sare kante chaman ke chura le gaya.

fhir wahi bhul jane ka dawa kiya
fhir nigahen wo mujhse bacha le gaya.

hath failaye jab bhi dua ke liye
mera dushman bhi mujhse dua le gaya.
uffffffff najanae aap kiya aur kaise soch lete hein ye sab aur phir lafz kaise de dete hein ais sehal andaz mein hazrat ,

heran heran apki tehreer pe sada hee ruk jaatee hei maham ,

kamal ka andaz e bayan apka sach kehtee hon ,

kayee ashaar iske baarhaa parhe magar dil nahi bhara ,

dekhiye na kiya likh gaye aap

khud dekhiye :




dard e dil ki vo dava le gaya
hur nishani vo apni utha le gaya


sirf kaghaz ke tukre kinare pe the
teri tehreer dariyaa baha le gaya


jaane kaisi saza us ne phulon ko dee
sare kante chaman ke chura le gaya


uff kiya khayal ki wusat hei kiya lafzon ka bahaou hei kiya gehrayee hei apke ehsas ke samandar mein ke bata nahi saktee maham ,

ap ki tehreer parh ke taader dil khush rehta hai hazrat

apni ata ko yunhee jaaree rakiye ga


Seraab hota hei apki tehreer ke sahil pe Maham ka zehan jo achae ashaar ka matlaashi raha karta hei hamesha ,

Aapke qalam ki madah,

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wow.................. - 2nd December 2007, 07:35 PM

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darde dil ki mere wo dawa le gaya
har nishani wo apni utha le gaya.

sirf kagaz ke tukre kinaron pe the
teri tahreer dariya baha le gaya.

jane kaisi saza usne phulon ko di
sare kante chaman ke chura le gaya.

fhir wahi bhul jane ka dawa kiya
fhir nigahen wo mujhse bacha le gaya.

hath failaye jab bhi dua ke liye
mera dushman bhi mujhse dua le gaya.
Rehnuma jee aap ki yaha post kee sab ghazale maine padhi, sach men aap kamaal ka likhate hai,aap ki har ghazal dil ko chho jaati hai,
aap ki yeh ghazal uffffffffffffffff kyaa kahiye..........................
Ghazab likha hai aap ne.................har sher khud men jaise ek kahaani bayaa kar raha hai, dil se daad kabool kijiyega is behtareen ghazal par.

aise hee likhate rahiyega
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