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' Naye Mehboob Ko Uss Ne Yahi Naam Diya...! ' - 4th December 2007, 06:28 PM

Kahin mehfil hamein bhuul na jaaye, so ek nayaa kalaam pesh kar rahe hein...!

Guzre hein zindagi ke hum uss maqaam se
Nafrat si ho gayi hai mohabbat ke naam se

Shakeel Ji

Kudrat ne na jaane kyon ek ko maikada tamaam diya
To kissi aur ke haanthon main bas ek khaali jaam diya

Baat kuch khaas nahin ki khizaan ne kayi zulm dhaaye
Fasl e bahaar ne bhi muskuraa kar mujhe zukaam diya

Bhuul kar waajibaat ko apne meine mohabbat nibhaayi
Na puuchiye mehbooba ne wafaaon ko kya inaam diya

Mann main saji thi yaad e mehboob baDi hi hifaazat se
Dil ko manaa ke har ek yaad mitane ka usse kaam diya

Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya

Ahad o paimaan ke daaman thaam ke jeena hai mushkil
Zehn main yaha baat aayi to khud ko meine ilzaam diya

Jahan se mere fanaa hone ki khabar kal mile ya na mile
Meri shayri ne aaj bhi mere zinda hone ka payaam diya

Bhuule se bhi na pukaregi tujhe Jaanu kehkar ‘Amanush’
Sunaa hai apne naye mehboob ko uss ne yahi naam diya



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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Kahin mehfil hamein bhuul na jaaye, so ek nayaa kalaam pesh kar rahe hein...!

Guzre hein zindagi ke hum uss maqaam se
Nafrat si ho gayi hai mohabbat ke naam se

Shakeel Ji

Kudrat ne na jaane kyon ek ko maikada tamaam diya
To kissi aur ke haanthon main bas ek khaali jaam diya

Baat kuch khaas nahin ki khizaan ne kayi zulm dhaaye
Fasl e bahaar ne bhi muskuraa kar mujhe zukaam diya

Bhuul kar waajibaat ko apne meine mohabbat nibhaayi
Na puuchiye mehbooba ne wafaaon ko kya inaam diya

Mann main saji thi yaad e mehboob baDi hi hifaazat se
Dil ko manaa ke har ek yaad mitane ka usse kaam diya

Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya

Ahad o paimaan ke daaman thaam ke jeena hai mushkil
Zehn main yaha baat aayi to khud ko meine ilzaam diya

Jahan se mere fanaa hone ki khabar kal mile ya na mile
Meri shayri ne aaj bhi mere zinda hone ka payaam diya

Bhuule se bhi na pukaregi tujhe Jaanu kehkar ‘Amanush’
Sunaa hai apne naye mehboob ko uss ne yahi naam diya



wahhhh wahhhhhh wahhhhhhhh
bahut khub.......behtarin kalaam pesh kiya hai aap ne janab.....har ek sher umda hai........mere dil ko chu gaya ye aap ka kalaam.......dad kabul farmaye.....


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5th December 2007, 12:24 AM

Kudrat ne na jaane kyon ek ko maikada tamaam diya
To kissi aur ke haanthon main bas ek khaali jaam diya

Baat kuch khaas nahin ki khizaan ne kayi zulm dhaaye
Fasl e bahaar ne bhi muskuraa kar mujhe zukaam diya

Waaah... kya baat hai bhiaya...


Bhuul kar waajibaat ko apne meine mohabbat nibhaayi
Na puuchiye mehbooba ne wafaaon ko kya inaam diya

Mann main saji thi yaad e mehboob baDi hi hifaazat se
Dil ko manaa ke har ek yaad mitane ka usse kaam diya

Waah.. dono hi aashaar khoob rahe...


Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya

Ahad o paimaan ke daaman thaam ke jeena hai mushkil
Zehn main yaha baat aayi to khud ko meine ilzaam diya

Kyaa baaat hai... bahut khooob..


Jahan se mere fanaa hone ki khabar kal mile ya na mile
Meri shayri ne aaj bhi mere zinda hone ka payaam diya

Bhuule se bhi na pukaregi tujhe Jaanu kehkar ‘Amanush’
Sunaa hai apne naye mehboob ko uss ne yahi naam diya

Doosra sher bahut hi khoob hai bhaiya... teer ki tarah chubhta hai...

Bhaiya,

Humesha ki tarah behad khoobsoorat aashaar... Har lafz khoobsurat thha... Yun to pehle hi ispar daad de chuka hoon... fir bhi ek baar dil se daad kubool kijiyega... Likhte rahiye...

It's been long I've read one of your beautiful english sonnets? hope you would give me an opportunity soon...


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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Kahin mehfil hamein bhuul na jaaye, so ek nayaa kalaam pesh kar rahe hein...!

Guzre hein zindagi ke hum uss maqaam se
Nafrat si ho gayi hai mohabbat ke naam se

Shakeel Ji

Kudrat ne na jaane kyon ek ko maikada tamaam diya
To kissi aur ke haanthon main bas ek khaali jaam diya

Baat kuch khaas nahin ki khizaan ne kayi zulm dhaaye
Fasl e bahaar ne bhi muskuraa kar mujhe zukaam diya

Bhuul kar waajibaat ko apne meine mohabbat nibhaayi
Na puuchiye mehbooba ne wafaaon ko kya inaam diya

Mann main saji thi yaad e mehboob baDi hi hifaazat se
Dil ko manaa ke har ek yaad mitane ka usse kaam diya

Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya

Ahad o paimaan ke daaman thaam ke jeena hai mushkil
Zehn main yaha baat aayi to khud ko meine ilzaam diya

Jahan se mere fanaa hone ki khabar kal mile ya na mile
Meri shayri ne aaj bhi mere zinda hone ka payaam diya

Bhuule se bhi na pukaregi tujhe Jaanu kehkar ‘Amanush’
Sunaa hai apne naye mehboob ko uss ne yahi naam diya


Bahut khoob likha hai danny jee aap ne poora kalam padhaa aur dil aur zubaan se ek hee labz nikla. .............................WOW what a great and beautiful piece of work...............

aise hee likhate rahiye
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5th December 2007, 05:15 AM

wooooh...mind blowing. bahut hi acha likha hai, one of best pieces i av read so far. really good. openin stanza set the tone. really good. aap aishi hi likte rahein.

aapka dost

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Kahin mehfil hamein bhuul na jaaye, so ek nayaa kalaam pesh kar rahe hein...! ......Fikar mat kariye nahin bhulenge aapko....


Kudrat ne na jaane kyon ek ko maikada tamaam diya
To kissi aur ke haanthon main bas ek khaali jaam diya

Baat kuch khaas nahin ki khizaan ne kayi zulm dhaaye
Fasl e bahaar ne bhi muskuraa kar mujhe zukaam diya

bahut khoob!!!!dono sher kabile tarif hain

Bhuul kar waajibaat ko apne meine mohabbat nibhaayi
Na puuchiye mehbooba ne wafaaon ko kya inaam diya

very nice....

Mann main saji thi yaad e mehboob baDi hi hifaazat se
Dil ko manaa ke har ek yaad mitane ka usse kaam diya

....this ones my fav..

Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya

Ahad o paimaan ke daaman thaam ke jeena hai mushkil
Zehn main yaha baat aayi to khud ko meine ilzaam diya

Fantastic!!!!!

Jahan se mere fanaa hone ki khabar kal mile ya na mile
Meri shayri ne aaj bhi mere zinda hone ka payaam diya



Bhuule se bhi na pukaregi tujhe Jaanu kehkar ‘Amanush’
Sunaa hai apne naye mehboob ko uss ne yahi naam diya

Yeh bhi bahut khub hain

...................dil se daad kubool kare is khubsurat ghazal ke iye..Repz added for such a wonderful ghazal.........


mausam


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bahut khub.......behtarin kalaam pesh kiya hai aap ne janab.....har ek sher umda hai........mere dil ko chu gaya ye aap ka kalaam.......dad kabul farmaye.....
Aadaab, Lamha Ji...!

Kalaam ki tareef ke liye bahut shukriyaa aur tah se dil se daad kabuul karte hein hum...!

Yunhi hausla dete rahiye aur apna khayaal rakhna...!

With blessings...!

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nice - 7th December 2007, 05:48 PM

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Kahin mehfil hamein bhuul na jaaye, so ek nayaa kalaam pesh kar rahe hein...!

Guzre hein zindagi ke hum uss maqaam se
Nafrat si ho gayi hai mohabbat ke naam se

Shakeel Ji

Kudrat ne na jaane kyon ek ko maikada tamaam diya
To kissi aur ke haanthon main bas ek khaali jaam diya

Baat kuch khaas nahin ki khizaan ne kayi zulm dhaaye
Fasl e bahaar ne bhi muskuraa kar mujhe zukaam diya

Bhuul kar waajibaat ko apne meine mohabbat nibhaayi
Na puuchiye mehbooba ne wafaaon ko kya inaam diya

Mann main saji thi yaad e mehboob baDi hi hifaazat se
Dil ko manaa ke har ek yaad mitane ka usse kaam diya

Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya

Ahad o paimaan ke daaman thaam ke jeena hai mushkil
Zehn main yaha baat aayi to khud ko meine ilzaam diya

Jahan se mere fanaa hone ki khabar kal mile ya na mile
Meri shayri ne aaj bhi mere zinda hone ka payaam diya

Bhuule se bhi na pukaregi tujhe Jaanu kehkar ‘Amanush’
Sunaa hai apne naye mehboob ko uss ne yahi naam diya

danny ji namaskaar.....bhut dino baad aaya to aapki gazal par nigah pari....janaab kyaa baat hai bhut khub koii kami nahi dil se nikle jajbaat dil ko chuu gaye......ye share bhut acha laga


Bhuul kar waajibaat ko apne meine mohabbat nibhaayi
Na puuchiye mehbooba ne wafaaon ko kya inaam diya


likhte rahiye.......raj.......


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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aahista aahista - 7th December 2007, 08:06 PM

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Kahin mehfil hamein bhuul na jaaye, so ek nayaa kalaam pesh kar rahe hein...!

Guzre hein zindagi ke hum uss maqaam se
Nafrat si ho gayi hai mohabbat ke naam se

Shakeel Ji

Kudrat ne na jaane kyon ek ko maikada tamaam diya
To kissi aur ke haanthon main bas ek khaali jaam diya

Baat kuch khaas nahin ki khizaan ne kayi zulm dhaaye
Fasl e bahaar ne bhi muskuraa kar mujhe zukaam diya

Bhuul kar waajibaat ko apne meine mohabbat nibhaayi
Na puuchiye mehbooba ne wafaaon ko kya inaam diya

Mann main saji thi yaad e mehboob baDi hi hifaazat se
Dil ko manaa ke har ek yaad mitane ka usse kaam diya

Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya

Ahad o paimaan ke daaman thaam ke jeena hai mushkil
Zehn main yaha baat aayi to khud ko meine ilzaam diya

Jahan se mere fanaa hone ki khabar kal mile ya na mile
Meri shayri ne aaj bhi mere zinda hone ka payaam diya

Bhuule se bhi na pukaregi tujhe Jaanu kehkar ‘Amanush’
Sunaa hai apne naye mehboob ko uss ne yahi naam diya

Zindagi guzar jayegi Aahista Aahista,
Fir ye waqt dagmagayega Aahista Aahista,
Aap unheyaad rakhoge kuchh der,
Phir ye yaaden bhi mit jayegi Aahista Aahista

bahot hi khubsurat gazal tha


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7th December 2007, 10:03 PM

Danny jee :

Pranaam..

kaise haiN aap? .. aapkii yeH Ghazal dil ko be-Had pasaNd aayii.. !

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Meri shayri ne aaj bhi mere zinda hone ka payaam diya

yeH Sher to bahot hi baDhiyaa rahaa..!

ees puraSar Ghazal par merii taraf sey daad-o-mubaaraqbaad qabUl keejiYeNgaa.. YuuNhi bazm kii raunaq afzA'ii karte raheN..!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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Kudrat ne na jaane kyon ek ko maikada tamaam diya
To kissi aur ke haanthon main bas ek khaali jaam diya

Baat kuch khaas nahin ki khizaan ne kayi zulm dhaaye
Fasl e bahaar ne bhi muskuraa kar mujhe zukaam diya

Waaah... kya baat hai bhiaya...


Bhuul kar waajibaat ko apne meine mohabbat nibhaayi
Na puuchiye mehbooba ne wafaaon ko kya inaam diya

Mann main saji thi yaad e mehboob baDi hi hifaazat se
Dil ko manaa ke har ek yaad mitane ka usse kaam diya

Waah.. dono hi aashaar khoob rahe...


Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya

Ahad o paimaan ke daaman thaam ke jeena hai mushkil
Zehn main yaha baat aayi to khud ko meine ilzaam diya

Kyaa baaat hai... bahut khooob..


Jahan se mere fanaa hone ki khabar kal mile ya na mile
Meri shayri ne aaj bhi mere zinda hone ka payaam diya

Bhuule se bhi na pukaregi tujhe Jaanu kehkar ‘Amanush’
Sunaa hai apne naye mehboob ko uss ne yahi naam diya

Doosra sher bahut hi khoob hai bhaiya... teer ki tarah chubhta hai...

Bhaiya,

Humesha ki tarah behad khoobsoorat aashaar... Har lafz khoobsurat thha... Yun to pehle hi ispar daad de chuka hoon... fir bhi ek baar dil se daad kubool kijiyega... Likhte rahiye...

It's been long I've read one of your beautiful english sonnets? hope you would give me an opportunity soon...
Tumhaare daad sar ankhon par, Chote Bhaiya...! Pehle misre ki vajeh se mere sar ke baal aur jyaada safed houe...! ( Jaante hi ho kyon...! )

I will write something in english very soon...!

Take very good care of yourself, ok...?

Ashirvaad ke saath



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wooooh...mind blowing. bahut hi acha likha hai, one of best pieces i av read so far. really good. openin stanza set the tone. really good. aap aishi hi likte rahein.

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Kahin mehfil hamein bhuul na jaaye, so ek nayaa kalaam pesh kar rahe hein...! ......Fikar mat kariye nahin bhulenge aapko....



Kudrat ne na jaane kyon ek ko maikada tamaam diya
To kissi aur ke haanthon main bas ek khaali jaam diya

Baat kuch khaas nahin ki khizaan ne kayi zulm dhaaye
Fasl e bahaar ne bhi muskuraa kar mujhe zukaam diya

bahut khoob!!!!dono sher kabile tarif hain

Bhuul kar waajibaat ko apne meine mohabbat nibhaayi
Na puuchiye mehbooba ne wafaaon ko kya inaam diya

very nice....

Mann main saji thi yaad e mehboob baDi hi hifaazat se
Dil ko manaa ke har ek yaad mitane ka usse kaam diya

....this ones my fav..

Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya

Ahad o paimaan ke daaman thaam ke jeena hai mushkil
Zehn main yaha baat aayi to khud ko meine ilzaam diya

Fantastic!!!!!

Jahan se mere fanaa hone ki khabar kal mile ya na mile
Meri shayri ne aaj bhi mere zinda hone ka payaam diya



Bhuule se bhi na pukaregi tujhe Jaanu kehkar ‘Amanush’
Sunaa hai apne naye mehboob ko uss ne yahi naam diya

Yeh bhi bahut khub hain

...................dil se daad kubool kare is khubsurat ghazal ke iye..Repz added for such a wonderful ghazal.........


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Aadaab, Mausam Ji...!

Aap ke daad sar ankhon par...! Thanks so much for reading and appreciating...!

Keep encouraging and repping...!

Apna khayaal rakhiyega...!

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Bhuul kar waajibaat ko apne meine mohabbat nibhaayi
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likhte rahiye.......raj.......
Namaskaar, Raaj Ji...! Kaise hein aap...?

Iss kavita ne bhi aap ki nazron main jagah paayi so humein bahut khushi houi...!

Jo sher aap ko khaaskar pasand hai, wo humare dil ke bahut hi khareeb hai...!

Saath dene ke liye aap ka bahut shukriyaa...!

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Fir ye waqt dagmagayega Aahista Aahista,
Aap unheyaad rakhoge kuchh der,
Phir ye yaaden bhi mit jayegi Aahista Aahista

bahot hi khubsurat gazal tha

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Danny jee :

Pranaam..

kaise haiN aap? .. aapkii yeH Ghazal dil ko be-Had pasaNd aayii.. !


yeH Sher to bahot hi baDhiyaa rahaa..!

ees puraSar Ghazal par merii taraf sey daad-o-mubaaraqbaad qabUl keejiYeNgaa.. YuuNhi bazm kii raunaq afzA'ii karte raheN..!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

jai Shree kriShnaa..

aapka

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Hamesha se saath dene ke liye bahut dhanyavaad...!

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Kudrat ne na jaane kyon ek ko maikada tamaam diya
To kissi aur ke haanthon main bas ek khaali jaam diya

Mann main saji thi yaad e mehboob baDi hi hifaazat se
Dil ko manaa ke har ek yaad mitane ka usse kaam diya

Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya

Jahan se mere fanaa hone ki khabar kal mile ya na mile
Meri shayri ne aaj bhi mere zinda hone ka payaam diya

Bhuule se bhi na pukaregi tujhe Jaanu kehkar ‘Amanush’
Sunaa hai apne naye mehboob ko uss ne yahi naam diya


Danny ji namaskaar.........behad khoobsurat gazal, yeh sher to bas dil mein bas gaye......dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye es laajwaab gazal ke liye.

regards


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Bahut khoob Bhaiya! As usual really enjoyed reading ur beautiful creation!

Take Care...

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Kudrat ne na jaane kyon ek ko maikada tamaam diya
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Mann main saji thi yaad e mehboob baDi hi hifaazat se
Dil ko manaa ke har ek yaad mitane ka usse kaam diya

Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya

Jahan se mere fanaa hone ki khabar kal mile ya na mile
Meri shayri ne aaj bhi mere zinda hone ka payaam diya

Bhuule se bhi na pukaregi tujhe Jaanu kehkar ‘Amanush’
Sunaa hai apne naye mehboob ko uss ne yahi naam diya

Danny ji namaskaar.........behad khoobsurat gazal, yeh sher to bas dil mein bas gaye......dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye es laajwaab gazal ke liye.

regards
Shukriya, Sunita Ji...!

Tah e dil se mubarakbaad kabuul karte hein hum...!

Apna khayaal thik se rakhein, ok...?

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Thanks for appreciating this one too, Priya Behen...!

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nameste danny jee,
aapka yeh kalam bahut kubsurat hai aur isse shabdon mein bayan nahi kiya ja sakta bas yahi keh sakti hu..... it is just marvellous

Bhuul kar waajibaat ko apne meine mohabbat nibhaayi
Na puuchiye mehbooba ne wafaaon ko kya inaam diya


Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya


Bhuule se bhi na pukaregi tujhe Jaanu kehkar ‘Amanush’
Sunaa hai apne naye mehboob ko uss ne yahi naam diya


in sherion mein to aapne gajab hi dhaa diya
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Kahin mehfil hamein bhuul na jaaye, so ek nayaa kalaam pesh kar rahe hein...!

Guzre hein zindagi ke hum uss maqaam se
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Shakeel Ji

Kudrat ne na jaane kyon ek ko maikada tamaam diya
To kissi aur ke haanthon main bas ek khaali jaam diya

Baat kuch khaas nahin ki khizaan ne kayi zulm dhaaye
Fasl e bahaar ne bhi muskuraa kar mujhe zukaam diya

Bhuul kar waajibaat ko apne meine mohabbat nibhaayi
Na puuchiye mehbooba ne wafaaon ko kya inaam diya

Mann main saji thi yaad e mehboob baDi hi hifaazat se
Dil ko manaa ke har ek yaad mitane ka usse kaam diya

Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya

Ahad o paimaan ke daaman thaam ke jeena hai mushkil
Zehn main yaha baat aayi to khud ko meine ilzaam diya

Jahan se mere fanaa hone ki khabar kal mile ya na mile
Meri shayri ne aaj bhi mere zinda hone ka payaam diya

Bhuule se bhi na pukaregi tujhe Jaanu kehkar ‘Amanush’
Sunaa hai apne naye mehboob ko uss ne yahi naam diya


mushkil sahab bilkul dil mai uttar gai bahut badiya likhi hai kalam likho to aishe likho



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aapka yeh kalam bahut kubsurat hai aur isse shabdon mein bayan nahi kiya ja sakta bas yahi keh sakti hu..... it is just marvellous

Bhuul kar waajibaat ko apne meine mohabbat nibhaayi
Na puuchiye mehbooba ne wafaaon ko kya inaam diya

Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya

Bhuule se bhi na pukaregi tujhe Jaanu kehkar ‘Amanush’
Sunaa hai apne naye mehboob ko uss ne yahi naam diya

in sherion mein to aapne gajab hi dhaa diya
bahut khub likha hai aapne..............
Sdc par aap ka swaagat hai, Naaj Ji...!

Aap ko yaha kalaam pasand aaya, hamein bahut khushi houi...!

Aate rahiye aur apna khayaal rakhna, ok...?

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Kalaam ki tareef ke liye Shukriya, Inder Ji...!

Yunhi hausla dete rahiyega...!

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Saari ghazal hi bahut khoobsurat lagi hume ... sabhi ashaar ek se badhkar ek adaa hue hai ... bayaani aur adaayegi asardaar rahi ... very nice creation ... ! tahe dil se daad qubuul farmaayeN ... nayi koshish ke saath jaldi aayeN ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !




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Koyi karz baaki na raha mere umr daraazi ka, Zindagi...!
Moti bikhraa kar ankhon ne tumhein dugnaa daam diya

Very Impressive ....... Danny Bhai !!!!

Saari ghazal hi bahut khoobsurat lagi hume ... sabhi ashaar ek se badhkar ek adaa hue hai ... bayaani aur adaayegi asardaar rahi ... very nice creation ... ! tahe dil se daad qubuul farmaayeN ... nayi koshish ke saath jaldi aayeN ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
Apni iss puraani shaayri ko saraahne ke liye bahut shukriya, Naresh Bhaayi...!

Aap ke daad sar ankhoN par...!

Duaaon ke saath



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