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Post Intzaar - 14th August 2008, 10:13 AM

Intzaar meri zindagi ka tassubar ban gaya....
hum sochte reh gaye aur waqt nikal gaya....
thama tha jiska haath wo waqt sa ho gaya...
bhul kar bhi na lauta jaane kaha kho gaya....
   
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is sansar main jane kahan gum vo ho gaya...
hum the tanha or tanha he chor gaya...


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15th August 2008, 01:31 PM

nice...Ruchika...
Wese to..
Intezar kabi hota nahi...
aas hoti he zindagi me...

Lekin Mazboor he...
Waqt hamare saath nahi jeeta....
hume waqt ke sath jeena padta he...

this is not a shayri... bus ek baat mene apne shabdo me kahi...
take care
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15th August 2008, 08:48 PM

yun na kehna ki tumne kabhi kisi ka intzaar kiya hi nahi...
aas to tab hoti hai jab koi aane wala ho... yaha to intzaar hi hai...

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Gud try ruchika but make ur lines perfect for the meanings sory if i hurt. Take cre
   
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15th August 2008, 11:51 PM

hello...
can someone help me??
i dont know how to cast a new post on this site..
means vat do i do if i wish to post some creation of mine??
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16th August 2008, 10:47 AM

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Gud try ruchika but make ur lines perfect for the meanings sory if i hurt. Take cre
thanks dear... but ll try... actually m not a shayar but just tries to say something 4m heart... anyways ll definitely try.... thanks agn
   
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19th August 2008, 03:32 PM

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hello...
can someone help me??
i dont know how to cast a new post on this site..
means vat do i do if i wish to post some creation of mine??
i am new..
can u please help me out??

>>>Go to the appropriate forum where u want to post your creation.

>>>In the upper left side there is tab 'NEW THREAD' just click that, a page will open and u can compose your thread there.>>> after submitting your thread, the thread will display in the forum.

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19th August 2008, 03:42 PM

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Intzaar meri zindagi ka tassubar ban gaya....
hum sochte reh gaye aur waqt nikal gaya....
thama tha jiska haath wo waqt sa ho gaya...
bhul kar bhi na lauta jaane kaha kho gaya....

Heart touching & heart wrenching one..

keep them coming!

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