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Pani ke bulbulo ki kismat kia hogi - 10th October 2008, 10:25 AM

Pani ke bulbulo ki kismat kia hogi,
Pal do pal me mit jana hai
Ret ke gharondo ki keemat kia hogi
Lahro ne har pal unhe mitana hai.

Muhabbat karne walo ko bhi, milta yahi nazrana hai
Pal do pal ka piyar yaha, fir tanhai afsana hai

Shama ki keemat, parwano ki kismat ko
Kab kisne pahchana hai
Roshni ke liye ek ko jalna
To duje ko roshni par jal jana hai

Pani ke bulbulo ki kismat kiay hogi
Pal do pal me mit jana hai
Oss ki bundo ki keemat kiay hogi
Suraj ugte hi mit jana hai
Pani ke…..
   
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10th October 2008, 10:46 AM

raj jee, aapki oetry acchi lagi, ahsaas bahut kuch kah rahe haiN, gahre ahsaas haiN, yoon hi likhtey rahiye....


kush rahiye
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10th October 2008, 12:27 PM

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raj jee, aapki oetry acchi lagi, ahsaas bahut kuch kah rahe haiN, gahre ahsaas haiN, yoon hi likhtey rahiye....


kush rahiye
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thanks sunita ji,
apka reply har thread me ek nai jaan dal deta hai. wo kahte hai na ki, andhre me ek deepak jala dene se andhera bhag jata hai, bagiya me ek phool khilne se sara bag khoobsurat dikhne lagta hai or fija mahak uthti hai or aise hi sdc me jisko apka piyar tareef or reply mil jaye uske liye fir koi or reputauion ki jaroorat hi nahi. thanks ap yu hi hume reply karte rahe wada raha hamare nagme ap jaroor gungunaye. reply karte rahna. ur replies are my insperations.

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11th October 2008, 12:25 AM

Bahut Hi Acchi Kavita Hai!!

Aapke Rachna Khoobsurat hai

Koshish BahuT acchi Hai .... Isi Tarah Likhete Rahiiye!


ChalTa Hoon.....

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11th October 2008, 09:46 AM

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Bahut Hi Acchi Kavita Hai!!

Aapke Rachna Khoobsurat hai

Koshish BahuT acchi Hai .... Isi Tarah Likhete Rahiiye!
thanks amrit ji. bahoot bahoot dhanyawad apne yaha reply post kiya. age bhi padte rahe. god bless. raj
   
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11th October 2008, 06:22 PM

bahut khoob !

khoobsurat juzbaat haiN aur ye koshish e kadR Qaabil e tareef hai !

likhte rahiye

daad ke sath !


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12th October 2008, 01:59 PM

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bahut khoob !

khoobsurat juzbaat haiN aur ye koshish e kadR Qaabil e tareef hai !

likhte rahiye

daad ke sath !
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12th October 2008, 03:11 PM

khuubsurat aur gahre ahsaas,bahut achchi rahi apki kavita.......sukriya


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hi raj jee - 17th October 2008, 08:59 AM

me is layak to nahi ki kuch kah saku
lekin haa sirf yahi kahna chahta hu ki
bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai
aise hi likhte rahe or khuda apko salamat rakhe
   
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17th October 2008, 11:49 PM

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Pani ke bulbulo ki kismat kia hogi,
Pal do pal me mit jana hai
Ret ke gharondo ki keemat kia hogi
Lahro ne har pal unhe mitana hai.

Muhabbat karne walo ko bhi, milta yahi nazrana hai
Pal do pal ka piyar yaha, fir tanhai afsana hai

Shama ki keemat, parwano ki kismat ko
Kab kisne pahchana hai
Roshni ke liye ek ko jalna
To duje ko roshni par jal jana hai

Pani ke bulbulo ki kismat kiay hogi
Pal do pal me mit jana hai
Oss ki bundo ki keemat kiay hogi
Suraj ugte hi mit jana hai
Pani ke…..
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me is layak to nahi ki kuch kah saku
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bohat khoob janab ahsasaat pasand aye likhte rahiye..........
thanks buddy. apke reply ka shukriya. or achha likhne ki kosis karunga.
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