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Sochta hun - 6th December 2013, 06:24 PM

Kuch is tarah se Tu Jeeti
Kuch is tarah se Main Haara
Mera hi Dil Tu Jeeti
Apna hi Dil Main Haara
Ajeeb sa hain, Is Duniya ka Andaaz
Pyar se Tu Jeeti
Pyar se Main Haara
Tujhse karta rahunga Bepanah Ishq
Ta umra Teri is Bewafa Fitrat se
Sochta hun, 'dil se'
Kya Tu Jeeti ?
Kya Main Haara ?

- dil se
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6th December 2013, 10:20 PM

Waah... Waah... Waah...
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Shukriya - 14th December 2013, 12:32 PM

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very nice........shows a lot of creativity.



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4th January 2014, 04:35 PM

ab bhi zinda h wo meri yaado me kahi,
yaad kar ke use bhulane ki koshish karta hoo
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uski tasveer ko apne dil se
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6th January 2014, 02:37 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Shayar 4ever View Post
Kuch is tarah se Tu Jeeti
Kuch is tarah se Main Haara
Mera hi Dil Tu Jeeti
Apna hi Dil Main Haara
Ajeeb sa hain, Is Duniya ka Andaaz
Pyar se Tu Jeeti
Pyar se Main Haara
Tujhse karta rahunga Bepanah Ishq
Ta umra Teri is Bewafa Fitrat se
Sochta hun, 'dil se'
Kya Tu Jeeti ?
Kya Main Haara ?

- dil se
Hamza Ali
Lines are Ok Hamza,
But remember always using same Qafiya (rhyming words) is never taken a good shayari in urdu literature . Just a suggestion

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