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Rajveer Ji meri taraf se Aik sawaal aur

Aapne mast Bhai ko jo reply kiya hai unke sawaal ka bahut mast reply hai

Aapki Nazar mein pyar ki Kya ahmiyat hai...Kya pyar dil se hota hai ya sirf waqt Guzarne ka Aik Zaria hota hai...aaj ke nau-jawaan shayad pyar ke sahi maayne Nahi jaante, aap unko Kya Kehna chahenge


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arvind ji sach bolu to opposite conditions mei.n aksar pehle to ghabra hii jata hoon ki ye kyaa huaa ab kyaa hoga...to aise mei.n meri jeevan saathi meri patni mera poora saath deti hai..ham milkar discus karte hai.n or koii na koii hall nikaal hii lete hai.n thanks to God ki itnii achii jeevan saathii dii mujhko...Raj..
Mere chehre par muskurahat aa gayi apka jawaab pad kar. Bohut kam log apne jeewan saathi ki kadr kar paate hain.

Ishwaar aapke aapsi pyar, samajhdaari ko sadaa banaaye rakhe.


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Mast bhai bara mast sawaal puchaa aapne..bhai waise to maa ko apne sabhi bache pyare hote hai.n kiyon ki usne har bache ko apni kokh mei.n rakha hota hai...lakin kush bache apni maa se kush jiyada hii pyar le lete hai.n kiyon ki wo khud apni maa ko bhut pyar dete hai.n...aisa hii ek shayar ke saath hota hai..waise to usko apna har qalaam har ashaar azeez hota hai lakin kush qalaam usko jiyada hii maqbooliyat hasil karwaate hai.n aisa hii ek qalaam mera hai wo ek nazam hai jo mere dil ke bhut qareeb hai us nazam ka naam hai 'WO EK PAL' is nazam ne mujhe bhut wah waahi dilwaii hai bhut saraha logo ne meri is nazam ko...ye nazam maine tab likhii thii jab meri mangni huii thii or mai.n apni shrimati ji ko pehli baar milaa thaa...bhut romantic ehsaas that dil mei.n or maine unko is nazam kii shaqal mei.n kagaz ke seene pe darz kiya thaa to lijiye wahi nazam pesh-e-kihdmat hai...


chandni ke libaas mei.n lipta wo ek pal,
kaash! mujhe mil jaye to zindagi mei.n bhar luu.n,
wo ek pal jab hum akale ho.n,
wo ek pal jab tanhai gunguna rahi ho,
mere badan se teri khushboo aa rahi ho,
wo ek pal jab teri zulfai.n khuli ho.n,
teri mehak chandni raat mei.n ghuli ho,
wo ek pal jab teri jheel c aankho.n mei.n,
lakho.n kamal khile ho.n do kinare aapas mei.n mile ho.n,
teri palko.n par umeedo.n ke laakho.n chiraag jale ho.n,
wo ek pal jab tera aanchal faila ho,
chandni ke chhune se bhi tera gora badan maila ho,
wo ek pal jab tera zoban madhosh ho,
tum par nasha tari ho or meri aagosh ho,
wo ek pal jab hamari sanso mei.n toofan ho,
karwatai.n leta yeh zamee aasmaan ho,
wo ek pal jab mera ehsaas tum tak jaaye,
chupke se tumko apni baaho.n mei.n bhar laaye,
wo ek pal jab teri churi chhankti ho,
mere kaano.n mei.n hole se kush kehti ho,
wo ek pal jab tere andar ek pyaas ho,
har pal mujh se milne ki aas ho,
wo ek pal jab khol ke baahai.n tum le rahi ho angrai,
har taraf tujhe sirf mai.n hee doo.n dikhai,
wo ek pal jab teri payal chupke se kush bole,
teri khamoshi mei.n bhee tere dil ke raaz khole,
wo ek pal jab hum ek doosre mei.n ho samaye,
hamare jismo.n se ek sard c aanch aaye,
wo ek pal kaash! mujhe mil jaye,
us pal ko apni zindagi mei.n bhar luu.n,
safar ik umar ka pal mei.n tamaam kar luu.n,
us pal mei.n hii jee ke ussi pal mei.n marr luu.n,
tujhe baaho.n mei.n sameit ke khud bikhar luu.n,
tere saparsh se khud ko chandan kar luu.n,
us anmol pal ko tere hee naam kar duu.n.......tere hee naam kar duu.n......tere hee naam kar duu.n.........
Wah bhai behad umdaa aapki yeh nazm to padhte padhte chehre par muskaan laa gayi..umeed hai aap bhabhi ji ab bhi yeh reh reh kar waqt milne par sunaate honge...

aapke is jawaab se humhara rishtaa thoda aur qareebi ho gaya hai...aur dekh raha hoon ki arvind bhai ne aapko pehle se hi masruuf kar diya do chaar sawaal pooch kar....

aapne sawaalon ko thoda thaam ke rakhtaa hooN...

jald milenge...

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6th November 2014, 07:26 PM

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Raj jee..aapke sabhi jawaab padkar bahut accha lag raha hai...aapne sabhi jawaab dil se aur sacchai se diye hain....its appreciating...
My next question is...
1.Kin conditions me shayri karte hain aap...means koi khaas factor ya kabhi bhi likh lete hain...
Ans..arvind ji mai.n kisi bhii halaat mei.n likh leta hoo.n mujhe koii khaas mahool ya topic nahi darkaar hota...instant shayri bhii keh leta hoo.n...

2. Kis feeling pe jyada likhte hain aap...dard, ishq etc.
Ans..bhai sabhi topic pe likh leta hoo.n magar zindagi par sabse jiyada likha hai maine.

3. Kya humorus shayri bhi karte hain....agar haan to best share karein.
Ans..nahi bhai kabhi nahi maine aaj tak is topic ko or sharaab topic ko kabhi chhua bhii nahi.

4. Kya kabhi kisi kavi sammelan mein participate kiya kai...
Ans..han ji bilkul bakayada jata rehta hoo.n lakin jiyada tar punjabi ke mushayro.n mei.n shirkat kii hai or do chaar martaba hindi ke mushayro.n mein gyaa hoo.n.

5. Shayri.com kee aapki zindagi mein kya ehmiyat hai..
Ans..shayri.com naye shayro.n ke liye acha plateform hai..or maine bhi bhut kush seekha yaha.n se kaafi ahmiyat hai shayri.com ki ....
Arvind ji umeed hai aapke sabhi sawaalo.n ke jawaab aapko mil gye honge..Raj..


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Rajveer Ji meri taraf se Aik sawaal aur

Aapne mast Bhai ko jo reply kiya hai unke sawaal ka bahut mast reply hai

1. Aapki Nazar mein pyar ki Kya ahmiyat hai ?

2. Kya pyar dil se hota hai ya sirf waqt Guzarne ka Aik Zaria hota hai ?

3. aaj ke nau-jawaan shayad pyar ke sahi maayne Nahi jaante, aap unko Kya/kuch Kehna chahenge


rajveer ji mere purane sawaaloN ke saath aik aur sawaal

4. aapki likhi hue shayri meiN se, aapki nazar meiN jo best shayri hai PYAR par aur best shayri DARD par...dono post kijiye.



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8th November 2014, 01:43 AM

Saadar namaskar, Rajveer Ji...!

Hum bhi aap se guftagoo ko baDe hi utsaah se paDh rahe heiN...!

Aap hameshaa salaamat rahe, yahi hamaari duaa hai

Apna khayaal rakheiN, ok...?




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Rajveer Ji meri taraf se Aik sawaal aur

Aapne mast Bhai ko jo reply kiya hai unke sawaal ka bahut mast reply hai

Aapki Nazar mein pyar ki Kya ahmiyat hai...Kya pyar dil se hota hai ya sirf waqt Guzarne ka Aik Zaria hota hai...aaj ke nau-jawaan shayad pyar ke sahi maayne Nahi jaante, aap unko Kya Kehna chahenge
sunita ji pyaar kyaa hai? pyaar to wo ehsaas hai jo badle mei.n kush nahi chahta yaha.n wapsi ki chahat ho wo pyar nahi sauda hai, tum kisi ko pyar karte ho to karte ho ab samne wala bhi uska pyar mei.n hi reply kare ye zaroori to nahi, pyar to aap karte ho us ko wo to nahi karta na...pyar mei.n koii zabardasti nahi pyar ka matlab sirf dena hai, bina kisi umeed ke...pyar to bass pyar hai or kush nahi...ye hota hai to bass ho jata hai...haan yaha.n pyar ke badle pyar ki sharat ho wo pyar nahi pyar ki aarh mei.n jismo.n ki bookh ko mitaane ka tareeka hai....mai.n to young logo ko yahi kehna chahun.ga ki bass bina kisi umeed ke pyar karte ho wo pyar hai agar kisi chahat mei.n pyar kiya to wo pyar nahi sauda hai...Raj...


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8th November 2014, 03:51 AM

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rajveer ji mere purane sawaaloN ke saath aik aur sawaal

4. aapki likhi hue shayri meiN se, aapki nazar meiN jo best shayri hai PYAR par aur best shayri DARD par...dono post kijiye.

sunita ji yeh nazam meri pyar par sabse pasandeeda nazam hai...jo maine aaj tak likhi hai...

us waqt ki har yaad dil main jinda hai,
jab hum ek doje ke saath thay,
wo har lamha saans le raha hai,
jo teri aagosh main guzara thaa maine,
wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo raste ajj bhee wahi khare hai,
jin par chalkar hum mile bicchre,
wo aam ka pair sadiyon tak,
hamari kahani dohrata rahega,
mile thay do dharkte dil mere saye main,
yeh sacchai zamane ko batata rahega,
wo mazaar hamare pyar ki gawahi deta rahega,
yaha sajda karke manga thaa ek doje ko,
saath jeene marne ka wada kiya thaa......

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo mehkti huie khushbu,
jo shayad hamare jismo se aa rahi thee,
wo sheetal c hawa gungunati huie,
hamari chhahat ka geet gati huie,
wo bojhil saansain humme behkati huie,
teri aankho main uttra hua mera akas,
meri dharkano main tu samati huie,
chand lamho main poora jeevan jiya thaa.....

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo pakshiyon ka chechahana,
hamari dharkno ka madhur geet gana,
dil ki baatain ek doje ko batana,
wo haan haan wo na na,
tera roothna or mera manana,
bezubaan chhahat ka khamosh sa afsana,
saye ki tarha tera liptna mujhse,
mera tujhme saanso ki tarha sama jana,
tere badan ko apne honto se sehlana,
tujhe chupke se apne aang lagana,
tere badan pe apna naam likh diya thaa.....

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

ajj bhee wo har lamha saans le raha hai,
gar tu saath degi to har lamha,
yu hee sadiyon tak jinda rahega,
un guzre huye haseen lamho ki kasam,
jab tak hai mere dam main dam,
na hogi kabhi teri chasham nam,
haan main ye ikraar karta hoon,
main tujhse bepanah mohabat karta hoon,
tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......

or dard par bhi yeh gazal bhut pyari hai meri...

jane kiyon udaas or tanha hai mera kafan,
shayad mere iintzaar main hai mera kafan......

tujhse jiyada wafa nibha raha hai mujh se,
mere saath chita main jal raha hai mera kafan......

khub lag raha hai safaidi main surakh rang,
dekh teri hina se jagmaga raha hai mera kafan.......

nazar na lag jaye meri laash ko kisi bewafa ki,
tujhse mera chhehra chuppa raha hai mera kafan.....

har nishani mere wajood ki saath jal jaiyegi ajj,
mera aakhri nisha bhee mitta raha hai mera kafan.....

mar kar bhe mere labon pe tera naam na aiye,
dhak ke mere labo ko wafa nibha raha hai mera kafan......

sameet ke mujh ko apni baahon main teri tarha,
tera har ehsaas mujhe dila raha hai mera kafan.....

shayad ab kabhi tujh se mulakat ho ke na ho,
tujhse bhut door mujhe le ja raha hai mera kafan......

zindagi jeene ke qabil he nahi rahi ab 'veer',
chal aa le chalain tujhe bula raha hai tera kafan......

umeed hai aapke sabhi sawaalo.n ja jawaab mil gyaa hoga...Raj...



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8th November 2014, 03:53 AM

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Saadar namaskar, Rajveer Ji...!

Hum bhi aap se guftagoo ko baDe hi utsaah se paDh rahe heiN...!

Aap hameshaa salaamat rahe, yahi hamaari duaa hai

Apna khayaal rakheiN, ok...?


danny ji ko Raj ka pyar bhara namaskaar, janaab ijjat afzaii ke liye bhut bhut shukria...Raj...


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sunita ji yeh nazam meri pyar par sabse pasandeeda nazam hai...jo maine aaj tak likhi hai...

us waqt ki har yaad dil main jinda hai,
jab hum ek doje ke saath thay,
wo har lamha saans le raha hai,
jo teri aagosh main guzara thaa maine,
wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo raste ajj bhee wahi khare hai,
jin par chalkar hum mile bicchre,
wo aam ka pair sadiyon tak,
hamari kahani dohrata rahega,
mile thay do dharkte dil mere saye main,
yeh sacchai zamane ko batata rahega,
wo mazaar hamare pyar ki gawahi deta rahega,
yaha sajda karke manga thaa ek doje ko,
saath jeene marne ka wada kiya thaa......

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo mehkti huie khushbu,
jo shayad hamare jismo se aa rahi thee,
wo sheetal c hawa gungunati huie,
hamari chhahat ka geet gati huie,
wo bojhil saansain humme behkati huie,
teri aankho main uttra hua mera akas,
meri dharkano main tu samati huie,
chand lamho main poora jeevan jiya thaa.....

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo pakshiyon ka chechahana,
hamari dharkno ka madhur geet gana,
dil ki baatain ek doje ko batana,
wo haan haan wo na na,
tera roothna or mera manana,
bezubaan chhahat ka khamosh sa afsana,
saye ki tarha tera liptna mujhse,
mera tujhme saanso ki tarha sama jana,
tere badan ko apne honto se sehlana,
tujhe chupke se apne aang lagana,
tere badan pe apna naam likh diya thaa.....

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

ajj bhee wo har lamha saans le raha hai,
gar tu saath degi to har lamha,
yu hee sadiyon tak jinda rahega,
un guzre huye haseen lamho ki kasam,
jab tak hai mere dam main dam,
na hogi kabhi teri chasham nam,
haan main ye ikraar karta hoon,
main tujhse bepanah mohabat karta hoon,
tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......

or dard par bhi yeh gazal bhut pyari hai meri...

jane kiyon udaas or tanha hai mera kafan,
shayad mere iintzaar main hai mera kafan......

tujhse jiyada wafa nibha raha hai mujh se,
mere saath chita main jal raha hai mera kafan......

khub lag raha hai safaidi main surakh rang,
dekh teri hina se jagmaga raha hai mera kafan.......

nazar na lag jaye meri laash ko kisi bewafa ki,
tujhse mera chhehra chuppa raha hai mera kafan.....

har nishani mere wajood ki saath jal jaiyegi ajj,
mera aakhri nisha bhee mitta raha hai mera kafan.....

mar kar bhe mere labon pe tera naam na aiye,
dhak ke mere labo ko wafa nibha raha hai mera kafan......

sameet ke mujh ko apni baahon main teri tarha,
tera har ehsaas mujhe dila raha hai mera kafan.....

shayad ab kabhi tujh se mulakat ho ke na ho,
tujhse bhut door mujhe le ja raha hai mera kafan......

zindagi jeene ke qabil he nahi rahi ab 'veer',
chal aa le chalain tujhe bula raha hai tera kafan......

umeed hai aapke sabhi sawaalo.n ja jawaab mil gyaa hoga...Raj...



wahhhh bahut khoobsurat hai dono nazm aur gazal....bahut umda likhte hai aap.

SDC par aapke pasandida shayaroN ke naam batayeN aur unki shayri ki kya baat aapko pasand hai yeh bhi batayeN ?

SDC ke bahar aapko kaun kaun se shayar pasand hai ?

aapne bataya ki Shiv Kumar Batalvi ji ko khoob pada hai...to unko kaun si poetry aapko etni pasand hai ki aap usko kisi bhi waqt sun.na pasand karte hai ?



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rajveer jee bahut hee acche dhang se aapne sabhi sawalo ka jawaab diya hai...
ek sawaal mere.pitare se......
agar bhagwaan aapki teen wish poori karein to aap kya maangenge...



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Rajveer ji lagta hai thode masruuf ho gaye hai umeed hai jaldi aaakar baaki sawaalon ke jaawab denge..

mere agle sawaal ready hai par durust samay ke intezaar mein...



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SDC par aapke pasandida shayaroN ke naam batayeN aur unki shayri ki kya baat aapko pasand hai yeh bhi batayeN ?

SDC ke bahar aapko kaun kaun se shayar pasand hai ?

aapne bataya ki Shiv Kumar Batalvi ji ko khoob pada hai...to unko kaun si poetry aapko etni pasand hai ki aap usko kisi bhi waqt sun.na pasand karte hai ?

Sunita ji deri ke liye muaafi chahta hoo.n...sdc par mere pasandida shayar mai.n pehle bata chuka hoo.n aap mast bhai ko diye jawaabo.n ko dekh lijiye...or waise mere pasandida sukhanwar hai.n janaab Gulzaar sahib or Sahir ludhianvi sahib or Janisaar akhtar sahib...or punjabi mei.n Bhai Veer singh ji, Shiv batalvi, Jagtaar ji, Amrita
pritam or Surjit paatar....or Shiv batalvi ki Shikra nazam mere dil ke bhut kareeb hai isko maine bhut gungunaya or paraha hai...Raj..


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Dhavl mere chhotu mai.n apni guzri huii zindagi ko bhut pyar karta hoo.n mere Waheguru ji ki kirpa se wo bhut khushi ke saath guzri hai or sabse bari baat ki wo mere Waheguru ji ke hukam ke andar guzri hai so mai.n uske liye Waheguru ji ka shukar guzaar hoo.n or meri chal rahi zindagi bhii unke hukam ke andar hii chal rahi hai or aane wali bhii unke hukam ke andar hii guzregi..so meri zindagi ka har pal hii barhia hai or khushnumaa hai kiyonki mere Waheguru ji razaa hai ye so bass jo guzar gyaa wo bhi acha thaa jo chal raha hai wo bhi acha hai or jo aane wala hoga wo bhii acha hii hoga so itne saare ache pallo.n ke beech mei.n se kisi ek pal ko chhantna apne Waheguru ji ki razaa ke uult chalna hoga so sab barhia hai...Raj..


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rajveer jee bahut hee acche dhang se aapne sabhi sawalo ka jawaab diya hai...
ek sawaal mere.pitare se......
agar bhagwaan aapki teen wish poori karein to aap kya maangenge...

Arvind bhai maangne ki zaroorat usko hoti hai jo ye sochta ho ki mujhe Waheguru ji ne kisi cheez se mehroom rakha hai ya mai.n us se jiyada apna bhala soch sakta hoo.n jab hona hii sab kush Waheguru ji ke hukam mutabik hii hai to kiyo.n maangna bass sarbatt da bhalaa mangta hoo.n ....or uske hukam andar chalne ki taqat or uske hukam ko meetha karke man na ki himmat mangta hoo.n...Raj..


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Arvind bhai maangne ki zaroorat usko hoti hai jo ye sochta ho ki mujhe Waheguru ji ne kisi cheez se mehroom rakha hai ya mai.n us se jiyada apna bhala soch sakta hoo.n jab hona hii sab kush Waheguru ji ke hukam mutabik hii hai to kiyo.n maangna bass sarbatt da bhalaa mangta hoo.n ....or uske hukam andar chalne ki taqat or uske hukam ko meetha karke man na ki himmat mangta hoo.n...Raj..
Raj bhai tusi ta bas dil nu chuu leya yaar eh gal karke...kinni vakhri te kinni ucchi soch hai tuhandi mein bayaan nahi kar sakda...

sorry aur punjabi likhungaa to baakiyon ke samajh se bahar ho jaayegi par aapke khayaal bahut umdaa hai aur meri waheguruji se yahi ardaas rahegii ki aapki soch barqaraar rahe aur aapki jholi mein rab sukh hi sukh barsaaye..

Mera agla sawaal agar aap soch rahe the ki main pooche bina chod dunga to aap galat hai

Shayri aur likhne ke ilaawaa aapki kaun kaun si hobbies hai aur aap kya apnaa keemti waqt barabar se unhe de paate hai ... koi aisa shaauq jo khwaabidaa raha ho aabhi tak jo aap humse share karna chahe..

aapke jawaab ke intezaar meiN..



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Rajveer ji, maiN apne chand sawaloN ke saath phir se hazir hoon

1. aapko shayri.com ke bare meiN kahan/kis se pta chala tha ?

2. shayri.com par aakar kaun se shayroN ko pada jo aapko acche lge hoN ?

3. aapka manpasand khaana kya hai ?

4. aapko khaane ke baad meenthe meiN kya pasand hai ?

5. koi aisa pal zindgi ka jab aapne khud ko sharminda mehsoos kiya ho ?

6. ghar ka kaun sa aisa kaam hai, jisko aap bahut khushi se karte hai ?

7. aapki man-pasand hindi film jo aap jitni baar bhi dekho bore nahi hote ?

8. agar aapko mokka miley apni life mein kuch badalne ka, to kya badleNge?

9. aap kisi ensaan ko pasand nahi karte, to usko kaise handle karte hai aap?

10. aapko kisi ensaan meiN kya baat sabse jayada impress karti hai ?

11. aapki life meiN koi 2 khaas cheeje, jinke bina aap khud ko adhoora maante hai ?

12. sabse khaas compliment jo aapko kisi ladki se mila ho ?

13. aapki man-pasand goomne ki jagah ?

14. kis ensaan ki aap apni life meiN bahut jayada izzjat karte hai ?

filhaal etne sawaalo ka jawaab dijiye...


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Rajveer ji ,
Sabh ton pehlan tuhanu sada salam pesh.e.khidmat hai ..

Na kami thii dosto.n kii na kami thii dushmano.n ki
hame to khuda se jo bhii milla bass be hisaab milla...


Abhai maine yeh sher para , bus aage nahi bara main aur jawab likhne chala aya ...ki jis book ka foreword itna khoobsoorat hai , vo book zaroor lajawab hogi ....

Chalo Rajveer ji wapis jata hun apko perne aur phir laut ke aata hun apki hazoori mein ..

Abhi 5 Nov tak ke sawal jawab pare aur apka yeh khayal bahut achahca laga ..


poh dii chan ni gareeb dii jawani, bina maane langh jaandi....


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sorry aur punjabi likhungaa to baakiyon ke samajh se bahar ho jaayegi par aapke khayaal bahut umdaa hai aur meri waheguruji se yahi ardaas rahegii ki aapki soch barqaraar rahe aur aapki jholi mein rab sukh hi sukh barsaaye..

Mera agla sawaal agar aap soch rahe the ki main pooche bina chod dunga to aap galat hai

Shayri aur likhne ke ilaawaa aapki kaun kaun si hobbies hai aur aap kya apnaa keemti waqt barabar se unhe de paate hai ... koi aisa shaauq jo khwaabidaa raha ho aabhi tak jo aap humse share karna chahe..

aapke jawaab ke intezaar meiN..
Mast bhai aapko meri soch achi laggi zaraa nawazish hai....Mast bhai mujhe ghuumne ka bhut shonk hai naii naii jagha jaane ka bhut shonk hai....or melodies sun ne ka shonk hai....ji bilkul apne shonk zaroor poore karta hoon...janaab mujhe hawa me urne ka bhut shonk hai wo bhii apne paroo.n ke saath jo shayad kabhi poora nahi hoga lakin Waheguru ji ki kirpa se kush bhii ho sakta hai....Raj...


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Rajveer ji, maiN apne chand sawaloN ke saath phir se hazir hoon

1. aapko shayri.com ke bare meiN kahan/kis se pta chala tha ?

Ans:sunita ji ek din mai.n on line Shiv Kumar batalvi ji ki rachnao.n ko dhoondh raha thaa, maine punjabi poetry .com likha to kaii link dikahaii diye to maine shayri.com par click kiya to yaha ka hii hokar reh gyaa...

2. shayri.com par aakar kaun se shayroN ko pada jo aapko acche lge hoN-: Ans:us waqt Monj kureel ji, mayank ji, maikash ji, renu ji. kshitij ji or bhii kaii umdaah shayar hain unko pehle pehle parha karta thaa...

3. aapka manpasand khaana kya hai ?

Ans: Sunita ji sach kahu.n to thaali mei.n jo bhii ho Waheguru ji maatha tek ke khaa leta hoo.n mujhe har cheez pasand hai mai.n bhut shonk se khata hoo.h....ek lafz mei.n kahu.n to mujhe khana bhut acha lagta hai...

4. aapko khaane ke baad meenthe meiN kya pasand hai ?

mujhe kush bhii mil jaye sab chalta hai or na bhii mile to bhi chalta hai...koii zaroori nahi...

5. koi aisa pal zindgi ka jab aapne khud ko sharminda mehsoos kiya ho ?

Ans: bhut se pal hai.n kisi ke saath wada karke nahi pounch paya to sharminda mehsoos karta hoon, kisi ko kush dene ka wada karke nahi de paya to sharminda mehsoos karta hoo.n...

6. ghar ka kaun sa aisa kaam hai, jisko aap bahut khushi se karte hai ?

Ans: mujhe market se sabzi lana bhut acha lagta hai...

7. aapki man-pasand hindi film jo aap jitni baar bhi dekho bore nahi hote ?

Ans: Movies bhut hii jiyada kam dekhta hoo.n koii khaas shonk nahi hai...do aankhe baarha haath bhut achi lagti hai(old) v Shanta ram wali..

8. agar aapko mokka miley apni life mein kuch badalne ka, to kya badleNge?

Ans: Kush bhii nahi jo Waheguru ji ne diya sab acha hai or meri ookaat ke hisaab se bhut jiyada diya unho ne mujhe....

9. aap kisi ensaan ko pasand nahi karte, to usko kaise handle karte hai aap?

Ans: us Insaan ko mai.n bhut jiyada Care deta hoo.n ta kii wo mujhe samjh jaye or mujhe pasand aane lagge...

10. aapko kisi ensaan meiN kya baat sabse jayada impress karti hai ?

Ans: us ka helpfull hona sabhi ke liye mujhe bhut acha lagta hai...

11. aapki life meiN koi 2 khaas cheeje, jinke bina aap khud ko adhoora maante hai ?

Ans: Ek to Jo mujhe pyaar karte hai.n or doosre wo jinko mai.n pyaar karta hoo.n...

12. sabse khaas compliment jo aapko kisi ladki se mila ho ?

Ans: Veer ji tuc bhut Down To Earth ho...

13. aapki man-pasand goomne ki jagah ?
Ans: Har Dharmik Jgha jo Historik ho...

14. kis ensaan ki aap apni life meiN bahut jayada izzjat karte hai ?

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Sabh ton pehlan tuhanu sada salam pesh.e.khidmat hai ..

Na kami thii dosto.n kii na kami thii dushmano.n ki
hame to khuda se jo bhii milla bass be hisaab milla...


Abhai maine yeh sher para , bus aage nahi bara main aur jawab likhne chala aya ...ki jis book ka foreword itna khoobsoorat hai , vo book zaroor lajawab hogi ....

Chalo Rajveer ji wapis jata hun apko perne aur phir laut ke aata hun apki hazoori mein ..

Abhi 5 Nov tak ke sawal jawab pare aur apka yeh khayal bahut achahca laga ..


poh dii chan ni gareeb dii jawani, bina maane langh jaandi....


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chand aur sawaal

1. aapki nazar meiN accha dost kaisa hona chahiye?

2. jab aap bahut dukh meiN hote hai to sabse pehle kiskka khayal aata hai ?

3. bhagwaan ki banaye 3 khoobsurat cheejo ke naam ?

4. aap sabse jayada kis cheej ko khone se darte hai ?

5. aapne Sudarshan Fakir ji ko bahut pada hai, unke 3 sabse khoobsurat ashiyaar ?

6. aapki 2 achi aadeteN aur 2 buri aadteN ?

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What a perfect reply rajveer jee....dil khush kar diya aapne....
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sunita ji pyaar kyaa hai? pyaar to wo ehsaas hai jo badle mei.n kush nahi chahta yaha.n wapsi ki chahat ho wo pyar nahi sauda hai, tum kisi ko pyar karte ho to karte ho ab samne wala bhi uska pyar mei.n hi reply kare ye zaroori to nahi, pyar to aap karte ho us ko wo to nahi karta na...pyar mei.n koii zabardasti nahi pyar ka matlab sirf dena hai, bina kisi umeed ke...pyar to bass pyar hai or kush nahi...ye hota hai to bass ho jata hai...haan yaha.n pyar ke badle pyar ki sharat ho wo pyar nahi pyar ki aarh mei.n jismo.n ki bookh ko mitaane ka tareeka hai....mai.n to young logo ko yahi kehna chahun.ga ki bass bina kisi umeed ke pyar karte ho wo pyar hai agar kisi chahat mei.n pyar kiya to wo pyar nahi sauda hai...Raj...
Sabse pahle to meri taraf se namaskaar rajveer ji...vaise sdc pe jyada samay nahi hua mujhe..par yanha kai achche logon se rubaru hone ka mauka mila...aur aaj aap ke guftagu me aakar aapke kuch jawabon ko pada to khud ko rok nahi payi....
aap ke jawaab mujhe bahut padand aaye...aur pyaar ke baare me mera bhi yahi manna hai...
Isme koi shak nahi ki aap ek bahut nekdil insaan hain...jald hi main bhi kuch sawaalo ke sath hazir houngi...
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chand aur sawaal

1. aapki nazar meiN accha dost kaisa hona chahiye?
Ans: meri nazar mei.n acha dost wo jo aapko aapki buri aadto.n or kamzoriyo.n se ru b ru karwaye or unko sudharne mein aapki help kare wahi aapka sacha or acha dost hai..
2. jab aap bahut dukh meiN hote hai to sabse pehle kiskka khayal aata hai ?
Ans: jab mai.n dukh mei.n hota hoo.n to sabse pehle mujhe dukh dene wale ka khyaal aata hai ki mujhe jisne dukh diya maine uske saath kab bura kiya thaa ya uska kab dil dukhaya thaa jo wo itna majboor ho gyaa ki usne mujhe dukh diya...phir apni bhool ki muaafi mangta hoo.n ..agar wo bhagwaan hai to apni bhool ke pachhtataap mei.n sewa karta hoo.n mandir ya guradware ja kar...

3. bhagwaan ki banaye 3 khoobsurat cheejo ke naam ?
Ans: bhagwaan ne to kaynaat mei.n har cheez bemisaal banaii hai...kisi teen cheezo.n ke naam ginwana baaki cheezo.n ko khubsoorat na kehna bhut be insaafi hogi...so mai.n khud ko is qabil nahi samjhta ki mai.n uski banaii cheezo.n ki tareef na karu sirf teen cheezo.n ki hii tareef karu..

4. aap sabse jayada kis cheej ko khone se darte hai ?
Ans: sunita ji mai.n sabse jiyada dhariya (pataint) khone se darta hoo.n...bhagwaan mujhe itnii himmat de.n mai.n bare se bare dukh or bari se bari khushi ko sehan kar saku...

5. aapne Sudarshan Fakir ji ko bahut pada hai, unke 3 sabse khoobsurat ashiyaar ?
Ans: waise to unki saari hi poetry bemisaal or meaningfull hai, agar teen ashaar chunu to wo is parkaar hai.n...
1: meraa qaatil hii meraa mu.nsib hai
kyaa mere haq me.n faisalaa degaa ..

2: jab haqiiqat hai ke har zarre me.n tuu rahataa hai
phir zamii.n par kahii.n masjid kahii.n ma.ndir kyuu.N hai

3: cha.nd maasuum se patto.n kaa lahuu hai "Fakir"
jisako mahabuub ke haatho.n kii hinaa kahate hai.n ..

6. aapki 2 achi aadeteN aur 2 buri aadteN ?
Ans: ye sawaal darasal aise hona chahiye thaa..Aapki koii bhi ek achi aadat batai.n or apni saari buri aadto.n ko ginwai.n....
Mujh mei.n jo kush acha hai sab uska hai
Bass mere aib hii mere naam se roshan hai.n...

abhi ke liye bas etna hi
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What a perfect reply rajveer jee....dil khush kar diya aapne....
Chand sawaal aur pesh kar raha hu..
1. Tell me the most happiest moment in ur life
2. Tell me the event which u still awaiting
3. Tell me your hobbies
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Arvind bhai muaafi chahta hoo.n aapse in sabhi sawaalo.n ke jawaab mai.n uppar de chuka hoo.n app dekh lijiye ga...Raj...


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Sabse pahle to meri taraf se namaskaar rajveer ji...vaise sdc pe jyada samay nahi hua mujhe..par yanha kai achche logon se rubaru hone ka mauka mila...aur aaj aap ke guftagu me aakar aapke kuch jawabon ko pada to khud ko rok nahi payi....
aap ke jawaab mujhe bahut padand aaye...aur pyaar ke baare me mera bhi yahi manna hai...
Isme koi shak nahi ki aap ek bahut nekdil insaan hain...jald hi main bhi kuch sawaalo ke sath hazir houngi...
abhi ijazat dijiye...

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Rajveer Ji

1. Maa ko apne lafzoN meiN bayaan kijiye ?

2. Aapne kabhi apni gazloN meiN maa ke liye kuch likha hai ? Agar likha hai to pls share kijiye

3. Aap haal hi meiN USA shift hue hai to aapko India aur USA mein Kya fark mehsoos hua ? Accha-bura dono explain kijiye.

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Rajveer ji...phir se hazir hu, jabki abhi aapne mere pichley sawaloN ke jawaab nahi diye hai

1. koi aisa baat jisko aap dil se nikalna chahte hai, par nikaal nahi paate ?

2. kya aapne kabhi chori ki hai, bachpan se lekar aaj tak ?

3. sahi aur galat ka andaza kaise lagate hai aap ?

4. SDC par koi aisa rule jo aapko na-pasand ho ?

5. aap SDC ke kisi members se kabhi miley hai ?

6. agar miley hai to unke naam ke saath..unke bare meiN apne vichaar zahir kijiye ?

7. kya aapne apna koi secret apni biwi se chupaya hai aaj tak ?

pls jaldi aayeiye thread par, kahaN busy ho gye aap ?



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Sabhi dosto ko Raj ka bhut bhut pyaar....Dosto muaafi chahta hoo.n aap sabhi se ki in dino site pe nahi aa pa raha hoo.n, mai.n in dino thora family ke saath bussy hoo.n ghar se bahar chhuti ke liye aaiya huaa hoo.n...umeed hai jaldi hii aapki adaalat mei.n hazir hounga....Raj...


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Sabhi dosto ko Raj ka bhut bhut pyaar....Dosto muaafi chahta hoo.n aap sabhi se ki in dino site pe nahi aa pa raha hoo.n, mai.n in dino thora family ke saath bussy hoo.n ghar se bahar chhuti ke liye aaiya huaa hoo.n...umeed hai jaldi hii aapki adaalat mei.n hazir hounga....Raj...


theek hai Rajveer ji...tab tak ham sab nye sawaal taiyaar rakhte hai aapke liye...aap chutti enjoy kijiye aur jaldi hazir ho jayieN

dosto...Rajveer ji se meri baat hue thi kal, to wo keh rhe thy 4-5 din meiN hazir hota hu phir se SDC par...tab tak aap apne sawaal post kijiye


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Adaab veer ji aap ke bare main sab parrh ker bohat acha laga umeed hai aap ki taraf sab kheriyat hogi


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Mani salaam ....kaisii ho tum? Ek arse ke baad dekha tumhe dil ko itmenaan huaa ki tum khariyat se ho...meri jaanib bhii sab khariyat hai...khush raho abaad raho...Raj..


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Rajveer Ji

1. Maa ko apne lafzoN meiN bayaan kijiye ?

2. Aapne kabhi apni gazloN meiN maa ke liye kuch likha hai ? Agar likha hai to pls share kijiye

3. Aap haal hi meiN USA shift hue hai to aapko India aur USA mein Kya fark mehsoos hua ? Accha-bura dono explain kijiye.

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Rajveer ji...phir se hazir hu, jabki abhi aapne mere pichley sawaloN ke jawaab nahi diye hai

1. koi aisa baat jisko aap dil se nikalna chahte hai, par nikaal nahi paate ?

2. kya aapne kabhi chori ki hai, bachpan se lekar aaj tak ?

3. sahi aur galat ka andaza kaise lagate hai aap ?

4. SDC par koi aisa rule jo aapko na-pasand ho ?

5. aap SDC ke kisi members se kabhi miley hai ?

6. agar miley hai to unke naam ke saath..unke bare meiN apne vichaar zahir kijiye ?

7. kya aapne apna koi secret apni biwi se chupaya hai aaj tak ?

pls jaldi aayeiye thread par, kahaN busy ho gye aap ?


Rajveer ji...aapka intejaar hai, aap aayeN aur en sawaloN ke jawaab dijiye...kahiN aap bholl to nahi gye es thread ko janab kitni lambi break leNge aap...hazir ho jaiye kyuki ab to es month ke din kam hi reh gye hai


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"Rajveer ji ,

aap ko badi tafseel se para aur jana ki aap dhairya khone se derte hain ...Log koi keemti cheez khone se darte hain , per aap mujhe ek nek sulje hue insaaN lage , jo bas prabhu ki raza mein zindagi bashar karne mein vishwas rakhe hain ..


Apki nazm ..tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......
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Ghazal ....jane kiyon udaas or tanha hai mera kafan,

bahut achchi lagee ..


Ek sawal meri taraf se jaate jaate .....

Agar aap ke kisi niji parivar ke sadasay jisper aap apne se bhi jyada vishwas karte hain nein apko dhokha diya ho ya app ka dil dukhaya ho , tau aap use kaise handle kareinge.

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1st December 2014, 03:26 AM

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"Rajveer ji ,

aap ko badi tafseel se para aur jana ki aap dhairya khone se derte hain ...Log koi keemti cheez khone se darte hain , per aap mujhe ek nek sulje hue insaaN lage , jo bas prabhu ki raza mein zindagi bashar karne mein vishwas rakhe hain ..


Apki nazm ..tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......
or
Ghazal ....jane kiyon udaas or tanha hai mera kafan,

bahut achchi lagee ..


Ek sawal meri taraf se jaate jaate .....

Agar aap ke kisi niji parivar ke sadasay jisper aap apne se bhi jyada vishwas karte hain nein apko dhokha diya ho ya app ka dil dukhaya ho , tau aap use kaise handle kareinge.

Regds
Sanjay Sehgal

Sanjay ji aapka bhut bhut shukria jo aapne meri feelings ko samjha or saraha...ab rahi aapke sawaal ki baari...to dost sabse pehle to mai.n un kaarno ki khoj karunga ki usne aisaa kyo kiya..ek ashaar hai jo mujhe bhut pasand hai or bilkul sacha bhi hai...

Koii to majbooriya.n rahi hongi unki
yu.n hii to koii bewafa nahi hota..

Janaab bass yahi ashaar mujhe raasta dikhata hai aisii uljhan mei.n...Raj..


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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1st December 2014, 10:52 AM

Rajveer ji....aapse baat cheet karke accha lga, aapke kuch sawaal reh gye jinka abhi tak aapne jawaab nahi diya jab bhi fursat miley un sawaaloN ka jawaab de dijiyega, aapki guftagu thread ka kal aakhiri din tha...aapne SDC ke es thread ke liye apna keemti waqt diya...SDC team dil se aapki shukarguzaar hai.



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