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Love ~~Gazhal:- Tum SE~~ - 3rd October 2003, 05:36 AM

Tum se milkar humne jana zindagi kya hoti hai
Iss bekarar dil ne mana bandagi kya hoti hai
Tum aaye aur laut bhi gaye hosh nahi kab hume
Tum se bichad ke jana bedardi kya hoti hai...!!!

Tumse se milkar jana zindagi kya hoti hai...

Ab ke bahaar aaye to poochenge haale dil oonka
Ke tadap hain wahan, jo mere dil mai aksar
Na jaage hai naa soye hai barso beet gaye
Sarghoshi si hoti hai pehlu mai aksar...!!!

Tum se milkar jana zindagi kya hoti hai...

Ab to chale aao ki saans bhi hai tootne ko
Aankhen hain bezubaan tanhaiya hai aksar
Ehsas jagha gaye ho mujhko tadpa gaye ho
Bas ab bichad ke mana tera saath hai aksar...!!!

Tum se milkar jana zindagi kya hoti hai...

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Re: ~~Gazhal:- Tum SE~~ - 3rd October 2003, 11:21 AM

Tum se milkar humne jana zindagi kya hoti hai
Iss bekarar dil ne mana bandagi kya hoti hai
Tum aaye aur laut bhi gaye hosh nahi kab hume
Tum se bichad ke jana bedardi kya hoti hai...!!!


bahot ache rimjim ji...
aap ki yeh panktiyaan padh kar jehan mein barbas ek hindi geet ke bol yaad aa gaye.....

tumse door rehkar...
dil ne jana pyara kya hai..
hamne mana yaar kya hai.

aise hi likhti rahiye......apna khayal rakhiyen.
-MANOJ


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Hi - 3rd October 2003, 08:25 PM

Manoj ji koshish ki, ek pyari si gazhal yahan par likhdoo, jismai mere kuch sawaal bhi ho, meri narazagi bhi ho aur mera pyar bhi ho. Ab pata nahi hum kahan tak safal hue hain but humne koshish ki hai...

Aapko hamaro koshish pasand aayi ooske liye tahe dil se shukriyaa... Shukriyaa haunsla afzaai ka...

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31st October 2003, 07:23 PM

hi Rim
it so nice


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hi - 31st October 2003, 08:45 PM

hi rimjim ji
nice one..
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hi - 1st November 2003, 01:36 AM

dilselovegirl ye kya baat hai tum kyun sabko preshaan kar rahi ho pls tumko agar kuch pasand nahi aa raha hai to kahin aur chali jao.
manoj ji ko ye sab kahke tumne acha nhi kiya hai woh ek nek dil inshaan hai aur tumko sarm aani chaiye is baat par ki tum har kisi ka dil dukha rahi ho use kuch bhi bolke .
agar dil naam ki koi cheez hai zmeer hai tumahara to pls jao na yahn se.
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hi rim - 1st November 2003, 02:14 AM

rim apki ye gazal bhi hamesha ki tarah hi khoobsurat hai pyaari hai.
daad kubul karo meri
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1st November 2003, 09:37 AM

Bahut Khoob Likha hai! Please keep writing.


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Hi - 1st November 2003, 09:49 PM

Khushi ji thanx, i am glad that u like my post :-).

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Hi - 1st November 2003, 09:50 PM

Arvind ji shukriyaa tareef ka, aapko hamari post pasand aayi hume behad khushi hui :-).

Thanx once again...

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Hi - 1st November 2003, 09:51 PM

sakhi1909 ji,

Shukriya atareef ka, humne hamesha ki tarah acacha likha hai to aapne bhi hamesha ki tarah hamara haunsla badhaya hai. Thankyou for coming here :-).

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Hi - 1st November 2003, 09:53 PM

Pulkit ji shukriyaa tareef ka. I will try, that i will keep writing :-).

Thanx once again for appreciating my gazhal.

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