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Love ~~Gazhal:- Ab Bhi Baaki Hai Mere Paas ~~ - 11th November 2003, 07:16 AM

Kon kehta hai, ki mai barbaad hoke reh gayi...
pyar khoya to kya huaa, bahoot kuch baaki reh gaya...

Vo suraj ki kamjoor kirne, dhalti hui vo shaam...
Gungunaati hui ye nadiya, ye sangeet aur ye taal...
Abbhi baaki hai mera paas...

Khamosh mere ye hoth, jo pukare tera hi naam...
panchiyon ka yeh chahakna, geton ki yeh ladiyaa

Dil tutaa to kya huaa, abbhi baaki hai meri jaan...
khusiya nahi to kya, mere gham hai mere saath...
Abbhi baaki hai mere paas...

Mere anshu ko mera ehsaas, meri dhadkan par mujhe aitbaar...
ab tak saath nibhati hai, mujpar sansoon ka ehsaan...

Meri kalam se mujhe hai pyar, meri gazal hi mere yaar...
ab jarurat kya hai mujko, mera kitna bada sansaar...
Abbhi baaki hai mere paas...

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Re: ~~Gazhal:- Ab Bhi Baaki Hai Mere Paas ~~ - 11th November 2003, 10:01 AM

Rim ji
bahoot acha likha hai aapne...waqai,,aap ke majboot iraade is kalaam ko padh kar mehsoos kar sakta hoon mein,,,,jo ek baat ubhar kar jehan mein aayi wo yeh ki ek mohabbat ke siwa bhi jamane mein bahoot kuch hai,,,,yehi baat aapne apni rachna mein kehna chaha hai.....bahoot umda khayal hai,,,,acha laga yeh dekh kar ki aisi ghadi mein aap gamgeen nahin hui,,balki jeene ka jazba le kar yeh gazal likhi hai..hamari daad kubul kijiye,,,gazal ke liye bhi aur aapke liye bhi.
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hi - 11th November 2003, 10:11 AM

nice one


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Hi - 14th November 2003, 06:07 AM

Shukriyaa manoj ji pasand karne ke liye. Ji humne to jo dil mai tha likh diya, aur phir mohabbat yeh jo shabd hai ismai sirf gum to nahi hai naa khushiyaa bhi to hai, to phir jo yaadein hume kisi se mili hai oonhe rokar kyon yaad karna hanskar yaad karenge to kush to rahenge...

Aisa hum maante hain. Anywayz thanx for coming here. Aate rahiyega...

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Hi - 14th November 2003, 06:08 AM

Arvind ji aapne hamari gazhal ki tareef bhi ki aur yeh kya udaas bhi hain, kya hum jaan sakte hain ki wajah kya hai???

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hi - 14th November 2003, 08:40 AM

bus kuch yaad aagaya tha,,,,anywayzzz bye and take care


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