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Love Ek choti si par saachchi prem kahani, jismai khushiyaa bhi hain aur dukh bhi... - 7th March 2003, 01:43 AM

Hum pehli baar ek larki ki tsory yahan likhne jaa rahe hain umeed karte hain ki aap logo ko pasand aayegi.

Ek larki hua karti thee pyari si bholi si, khoobsoorat si, shaayad hi ooske jitna khoobsoorat koi aur hoga iss duniyaa mai, woh khoobsoorat thee, pyari thee, smart thee. lekin phir bhi oosmai ghamand nahi tha. Ek din ooski jindagi mai ek larka aaya, aur woh paagal larki oos larke se anjaane mai pyar kar bethi dono ne ek doosre ko kah bhi diya lekin kuch mahino baad oos larke ko koi aur mil gayi aur oos larki se oosne kaha ki he never loved her it was just a crush, aur kuch nahi, lekin phir bhi oos larki ne himmat nahi haari oosne muskarana nahi chora, woh maskarati rahti kyonki ooski muskarahat dekhkar aur log bhi kush rahte the.
Lekin ooske baad oos larki ne kisi aur se pyar nahi kiya, halanki ooski zindagi mai aur larke aaye lekin oosne nahi kiya, kyonki woh to sachche dil se oose pyar karti thee, aur kahte hai na pyar to sirf ek baar hi hota hai.

Ek din woh haar maanke bhagvaan ke saamne gayi aur oosne oonse pucha ki aap aisa mere saath kyon kar rahe hain, jiss se maine pyar kiya oose to apane mujhse cheen liya to phir ab aisa kyon kar rahe hain, jab aapne meri kismat mai pyar likha hi nahi hai to? Woh bhagvaan ki murti ke saamne bethkar kaafi der tak roti rahi aur phir thori der baad wahan se oothkar chali gayi.

Kuch dino baad ooski zindagi mai ek aisa larka aaya jo iss duniyaa mai sabse accaha tha, woh larka oos larki se bahaut pyar karne laga, tab oos larki ki samajh mai aaya ki bhagavan ji oos pyari si larki ko bahaut si khushiyaan dena chahte the jo sirf wohi larka de sakta tha, oos din woh larki bhagvaan ke paas gayi aur oonse kaha ki main jaan gayi hoo ki aapne oos larke ko mujhse kyon cheena tha kyonki aap iss duniyaa ki saari khushiyaan mujhe dena chahte hain, oos din se aaj tak woh larki bhagvaan ji ki murti ke saamne diya jalati aa rahi hai, kyonki oos diye se yeh saabit hota hai kiw oh apne pyar ke saath bahaut bahaut kush hai...

yeh hai ek kahani ek aisi larki ki jiski zindagi mai sukh bhi aaye aur dukh bhi lekin oosne haar nahi maani

Hope everyone liked it

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hello - 26th August 2003, 01:17 PM

Hello,

You have written a nice story, i liked it. and i wanna that you write another story. one is not sufficient.

dont go back, always think in positive direction. cause the wings of success is positive thinking.

with best wishes,
Akant...


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AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
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6th September 2003, 08:50 AM

Well, i must say.. a beautiful story. Keep it up. Everyone should believe...
   
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Thanx - 3rd October 2003, 10:09 PM

Shukriyaa akant ji,

bahaut time pehle likhi thee maine to yeh story....

Aapne itni acachi advice likhi isiliye ek aur true story yahan par likh rahi hoo osse bhi padhiyega :-).

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Hi - 3rd October 2003, 10:17 PM

Nuri ji shukriyaa tarefe ka, waise yeh ek true love story hai ek larki ki zindagi ki :-).

Main kuch dino mai yahan par ek story aur post karoongi...

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hello - 30th November 2003, 11:17 PM

nice story , but not everyone can smile after the heart is borken..everyone doesnt have so much of courge to keep smiling after th heart breaks

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..bahot aacha likha hai aap ne...keep it up...jindagi ek kahani hi hai...uss mein jitne rang bharo wo utni hi majedar hoti hai.
   
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Love muskurana - 31st December 2003, 11:23 AM

Is bedard zamaane se har gam chupana padta hai

Zakhm hazaaron ho dil pe fir bhi muskurana padta hai.


Hi Rimjhim,
Nice Story man,i like it,post new stories.if u want true stories then u can contact me...byeeeeeeee
   
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hi - 26th January 2004, 12:43 AM

after readin... oh no..... i mean after listening such a lovely story i just wanna ask is that from ur one of experiences
   
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3rd February 2004, 06:00 AM

what a story!!!
mind blowing.
where do you get the ideas from,
i mean .......the concept is excellent.

you should think more and try to write a novel


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live as if u'll die tomorrow
   
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Hi - 3rd February 2004, 07:19 AM

Mansi ji shukriyaa yahan par rukne ka aur apne thoughts likhne ke liye...

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3rd February 2004, 07:20 AM

sushil_jagtap ji,

Ji aapne bilkul sahi kaha hai jidagi sirf ek kahani hai...lekin woh kahani hum nahi hamare liye koi aur likhta hai par hana oosmai rang kaise aur kitne bharne hain woh hum par depend karta hai :-).

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3rd February 2004, 07:22 AM

puneetgrover ji,

Ji ab experience to hote rahte hain life mai...ab koi cheez hum soch kar to nahi likh sakte hain ooska koi naa koi hiss sa to hum se bhi jura hota hai isiliye to hum oose likhte hain...right???

Anywayz thankyou for coming here and appreciating this story.

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3rd February 2004, 07:23 AM

chintal_007 ji,

Aapne to kuch jyada hi tareef kardi. Hum itna bhi acacha nahi likhte hain ki novel likhan shuru kar den. aapne kuch jyada hi izzat de di hume :-).

Shukriyaa yahan aane ke liye aur iski itni tareef karne ke liye.

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Hi ,

Yes, its a nice story and in fact its very common now a days....but the main thing is "You should never be hopeless from ur life"...Take the life the way it is coming..Enjoy each and every moment of ur life

"Don not cry as it ended but be happy as at least it happened"

There is a very inspiring phrase " If God doesn't answer ur pray for the first time , it means He has something better or best for you".Same happend in this story also... so Be happy and wait for the best to happen..
Always have faith in God .....and always be honest to others and urself at least..

I hope ..u 'll keep writing such cute and motivating stories..

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[quote=Rimjhim;18762]Hum pehli baar ek larki ki tsory yahan likhne jaa rahe hain umeed karte hain ki aap logo ko pasand aayegi.

Ek larki hua karti thee pyari si bholi si, khoobsoorat si, shaayad hi ooske jitna khoobsoorat koi aur hoga iss duniyaa mai, woh khoobsoorat thee, pyari thee, smart thee. lekin phir bhi oosmai ghamand nahi tha. Ek din ooski jindagi mai ek larka aaya, aur woh paagal larki oos larke se anjaane mai pyar kar bethi dono ne ek doosre ko kah bhi diya lekin kuch mahino baad oos larke ko koi aur mil gayi aur oos larki se oosne kaha ki he never loved her it was just a crush, aur kuch nahi, lekin phir bhi oos larki ne himmat nahi haari oosne muskarana nahi chora, woh maskarati rahti kyonki ooski muskarahat dekhkar aur log bhi kush rahte the.
Lekin ooske baad oos larki ne kisi aur se pyar nahi kiya, halanki ooski zindagi mai aur larke aaye lekin oosne nahi kiya, kyonki woh to sachche dil se oose pyar karti thee, aur kahte hai na pyar to sirf ek baar hi hota hai.

Ek din woh haar maanke bhagvaan ke saamne gayi aur oosne oonse pucha ki aap aisa mere saath kyon kar rahe hain, jiss se maine pyar kiya oose to apane mujhse cheen liya to phir ab aisa kyon kar rahe hain, jab aapne meri kismat mai pyar likha hi nahi hai to? Woh bhagvaan ki murti ke saamne bethkar kaafi der tak roti rahi aur phir thori der baad wahan se oothkar chali gayi.

Kuch dino baad ooski zindagi mai ek aisa larka aaya jo iss duniyaa mai sabse accaha tha, woh larka oos larki se bahaut pyar karne laga, tab oos larki ki samajh mai aaya ki bhagavan ji oos pyari si larki ko bahaut si khushiyaan dena chahte the jo sirf wohi larka de sakta tha, oos din woh larki bhagvaan ke paas gayi aur oonse kaha ki main jaan gayi hoo ki aapne oos larke ko mujhse kyon cheena tha kyonki aap iss duniyaa ki saari khushiyaan mujhe dena chahte hain, oos din se aaj tak woh larki bhagvaan ji ki murti ke saamne diya jalati aa rahi hai, kyonki oos diye se yeh saabit hota hai kiw oh apne pyar ke saath bahaut bahaut kush hai...

yeh hai ek kahani ek aisi larki ki jiski zindagi mai sukh bhi aaye aur dukh bhi lekin oosne haar nahi maani

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hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii frnd aapki jo story hai mughe nahi lagta ki yeh ek sachhi love story hai ladki ek dhoke baaz hoti wokabi kisi ke pyar ko samaz nahi pati main bhi aapko apni ek story kahna chahta hu pyar jisase main bilkul anjan tha phir meri zindagi main ek tufan ki tarah aaya aur main us tufan main kaha chala gaya pata hi nahi chala kyonki mughe bhi pyar ho gaya kaise,kab aur kaha pata nahi ek ladki jiska naam main pyar se naina kahta tha wo bhi mughse bahut pyar karti thi mughe lagta tha mughse jyada wo mughse pyar karti hai lekin sab galat wo sirf dokha hi janti thi ek din usne mughe btaye kaha chali gayi aur wo six month baad shadi kar ke ayi aur mughse kahti hai tum kughe bhul jjao ????? why koi majburi nahi thi mughse kah rahi thi meri bahan ki saadi so main apne gaon jaa rahi hu uske baad wo mughe milti hai lekin jaise ki mugh jaanti nahi dekhti tak nahi hai please tell me pleeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzz tellme my no 9953086255 your lovely frnd.sagar
   
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[quote=Rimjhim;18762]Hum pehli baar ek larki ki tsory yahan likhne jaa rahe hain umeed karte hain ki aap logo ko pasand aayegi.

Ek larki hua karti thee pyari si bholi si, khoobsoorat si, shaayad hi ooske jitna khoobsoorat koi aur hoga iss duniyaa mai, woh khoobsoorat thee, pyari thee, smart thee. lekin phir bhi oosmai ghamand nahi tha. Ek din ooski jindagi mai ek larka aaya, aur woh paagal larki oos larke se anjaane mai pyar kar bethi dono ne ek doosre ko kah bhi diya lekin kuch mahino baad oos larke ko koi aur mil gayi aur oos larki se oosne kaha ki he never loved her it was just a crush, aur kuch nahi, lekin phir bhi oos larki ne himmat nahi haari oosne muskarana nahi chora, woh maskarati rahti kyonki ooski muskarahat dekhkar aur log bhi kush rahte the.
Lekin ooske baad oos larki ne kisi aur se pyar nahi kiya, halanki ooski zindagi mai aur larke aaye lekin oosne nahi kiya, kyonki woh to sachche dil se oose pyar karti thee, aur kahte hai na pyar to sirf ek baar hi hota hai.

Ek din woh haar maanke bhagvaan ke saamne gayi aur oosne oonse pucha ki aap aisa mere saath kyon kar rahe hain, jiss se maine pyar kiya oose to apane mujhse cheen liya to phir ab aisa kyon kar rahe hain, jab aapne meri kismat mai pyar likha hi nahi hai to? Woh bhagvaan ki murti ke saamne bethkar kaafi der tak roti rahi aur phir thori der baad wahan se oothkar chali gayi.

Kuch dino baad ooski zindagi mai ek aisa larka aaya jo iss duniyaa mai sabse accaha tha, woh larka oos larki se bahaut pyar karne laga, tab oos larki ki samajh mai aaya ki bhagavan ji oos pyari si larki ko bahaut si khushiyaan dena chahte the jo sirf wohi larka de sakta tha, oos din woh larki bhagvaan ke paas gayi aur oonse kaha ki main jaan gayi hoo ki aapne oos larke ko mujhse kyon cheena tha kyonki aap iss duniyaa ki saari khushiyaan mujhe dena chahte hain, oos din se aaj tak woh larki bhagvaan ji ki murti ke saamne diya jalati aa rahi hai, kyonki oos diye se yeh saabit hota hai kiw oh apne pyar ke saath bahaut bahaut kush hai...

yeh hai ek kahani ek aisi larki ki jiski zindagi mai sukh bhi aaye aur dukh bhi lekin oosne haar nahi maani

Hope everyone liked it
ladki ek dhoke baaz hoti wokabi kisi ke pyar ko samaz nahi pati main bhi aapko apni ek story kahna chahta hu pyar jisase main bilkul anjan tha phir meri zindagi main ek tufan ki tarah aaya aur main us tufan main kaha chala gaya pata hi nahi chala kyonki mughe bhi pyar ho gaya kaise,kab aur kaha pata nahi ek ladki jiska naam main pyar se naina kahta tha wo bhi mughse bahut pyar karti thi mughe lagta tha mughse jyada wo mughse pyar karti hai lekin sab galat wo sirf dokha hi janti thi ek din usne mughe btaye kaha chali gayi aur wo six month baad shadi kar ke ayi aur mughse kahti hai tum mughe bhul jjao ????? why koi majburi nahi thi mughse kah rahi thi meri bahan ki saadi so main apne gaon jaa rahi hu uske baad wo mughe milti hai lekin jaise ki mugh jaanti nahi dekhti tak nahi hai please tell me pleeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzz tellme my no 9953086255 your lovely frnd.sagar
   
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