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Love ~~ Un Kaa Naam ~~ - 14th February 2004, 07:24 PM

Hi everyone,

Aaj bahuat time baad kuch likha hai...i hope ki aapko pasand aayega...

Faanslo se tang aa kar
Laga diye jabaan par taale
Dil se un kaa khayaal
Magar khone naa diya

Aansoon ban kar hi
Aati hai un ki yaad
Har kasam de ke humko
Kabhi rone naa diya

Khawaabo ke moti
Aankhon se bhare chalakte rahe
Waqt ke jhonko ne
Woh haar pirone naa diya

Sapno mai un ka naam
Saja ke rakha
Woh aur baat hai
Yadoon ne kabhi sone naa diya !!!

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14th February 2004, 10:42 PM

I will reply later on because I don't have time right now. Happy Valentine's Day to you & everyone. Likhte rahiyega. Khush rahe yeh Duwaon ke sath izazat chahungi. Take care. God bless you.

Keep smilling.......


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Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
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Re: ~~ Un Kaa Naam ~~ - 14th February 2004, 11:47 PM

Aansoon ban kar hi
Aati hai un ki yaad
Har kasam de ke humko
Kabhi rone naa diya

rimjhim ji
kaisi hai aap???? behad acha laga aap ka kalaam padh kar,,,,,kitne arse baad aap ko yahaan dekh raha hoon,,,bahoot acha laga....aap bahoot acha likhti hai,,ismein koi do rai nahin,,magar mein yahan yeh kehne aaya hoon ki mujhe bahoot khushi hui aap ko yahan dekh kar,,,,aap is site ki bahoot seniour meimber hai,,,,,aate rahiye..aur shayri ke gul khilate rahiye....aap logon ke bina kuch kami si lagi hai yahan....hmari daad kubool kijiye.....take care
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15th February 2004, 10:36 AM

Rimjhim ji,


Welcome back.. Kafi dino ke baad ana hua aap ka. Soch rahe the aap se gila karenge par .... atay hi aap ne jo itni achhi shayri likhi sara gilah sikwah hum bhool gaye.

Dad kabol farmaiega.

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15th February 2004, 10:50 AM

Rimjhim ji,
itne dinoN ke baad aapkii kalaam ko sarhaane kaa mauka milaa hai, aur zaahir sii baat hai kii aapke sochne kaa dhang, aur khayaaloN kaa rang ab bahot hii geheraa ho gaya hai!


Sapno mai un ka naam
Saja ke rakha
Woh aur baat hai
Yadoon ne kabhi sone naa diya!

«-- waaaah madam; laa-javaab!



yuuN hii uuNchaaiiyoN par paunchte rahiiye gaa!

aman



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15th February 2004, 01:46 PM

Faanslo se tang aa kar
Laga diye jabaan par taale
Dil se un kaa khayaal
Magar khone naa diya

Aansoon ban kar hi
Aati hai un ki yaad
Har kasam de ke humko
Kabhi rone naa diya

Khawaabo ke moti
Aankhon se bhare chalakte rahe
Waqt ke jhonko ne
Woh haar pirone naa diya

Sapno mai un ka naam
Saja ke rakha
Woh aur baat hai
Yadoon ne kabhi sone naa diya !!!

Dear Rimjhim Jee, keisi hein aap? Der hogaayi ane meh shayad. Bohot khub likhha hein. Aur kuch kahungi toh shayad lecture dene ki barabar ho jaayegi. Aur haar ek insaan ki aapni aapni nazariya hoti hein, kisi me kaha tha mujhe aur wohi baat yaad aa gaayi hein. Whole writings were well written but I Loved the last lines. Bohot arsa baad aap ayi hein, khushi huyi aapko yeaha dekhkar. Jab bhi waqt mile zaroor ate rahiyega. By the way, keya hua kyu itni arsa se aap nehi ayi yeaha? Answer me if you feel like if not I wouldn't mind. Aap khush rahe baas yehi Duwaon ke sath izazat chahungi. Waise aapki yeh kalam bakehi bohot achha laga. Dilse shukriya kabool kijiyega. Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you.

Keep smilling.......


*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
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Hi - 17th February 2004, 05:01 AM

Manoj ji,

Shukriyaa aap apna keemti samaye nikaal kar yahan aaye aur yeh chand lines pasand ki. Sach kahen to hume bhi itne din jab yahan se door the to kuch adhoora sa laga par bahaut bsuy thee medical kar rahi hoo naa...isliye.

But now i am back. Anywayz aur bataiye kya ho raha hai life??? haven't talked to you from a long time :-(.

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Hi - 17th February 2004, 05:03 AM

Mayank ji,

Aap gila shikwa karne ka mauka nahi diya ooske liye dil se maufi maangna chahenge hum

Waise abhi bhi kuch nahi bigra hai aap gila shikwa kar sakte hain.

Aapko hamari shayri pasand aayi ooske liye shukriyaa...

Aate rahiyega.

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Hi - 17th February 2004, 05:05 AM

Aman ji,

Kaafi samaye baad dekha hai aapko yahan par...yaa yeh kahen ki hum kaafi der baad yahan aaye hain :-(

Kaise hain aap???

Ab aap jaise itne umde shyron ko hamara likha hua pasand aa raha hai to hume bhi lag raha hai jaise ki humne acacha likha ho...waise to aapse ek shikayat bhi hai hume...anywayz woh shikayat hum PM mai likh rahe hain padh lena.

Shukriyaa ek baar phir se hausla afzaai ka :-).

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Hi - 17th February 2004, 05:08 AM

Shimul ji,

Shukriyaa hausla afzaai ka...agar aapka reply nahi milta hai to shayri mai kuch kami si lagti hai...isiliye hum hamesha chahte hain ki jab bhi hum kuch likhen to aap oos par reply hamesha den :-)

Ji, hum bilkul mind nahi kerenge...actually hum medical mai hain to ooske associations and exams, projects se bahaut ghir gaye the, time nahi mil raha tha abhi exam kahatm hue the humne kuch likh diya...Phir hum doctor ke office mai internship kar rahe hain to oosmai bhi bahaut busy the.

Aap bataiye apa kaisi hai??? Life kaisi chal rahi hai :-)

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17th February 2004, 05:56 AM

Dear Rimjhim Jee, Keisi hein aap? Mein bilkul thikh hu Allahka shukar hein. Yeh keisi baate kar rahi hein aap? Meri reply meh keya rakhha hein, kuch bhi toh nehi hu mein. Ab keya kahu, aap sab dosto ki Pyaar hein. Nice to know about you. By the way how is your best friend? I hope everything is well. Meri life bilkul thikh thakh chal rahi hein. Mein aapko ek Gazal sunati hu matlab likhkar, mujhe bohot hi achha lagta hein. *Koi nehi hein phir bhi aawaaz aa rahi hein shayad meri Mohabbat shayad meri Mohabbat mujhko bula rahi hein mere labo ko ushke andaz mil rahe hein ushke suron ko mere alfaz mil rahe hein mein geet likhraha hu woh geet gaa rahi hein shayad meri Mohabbat shayad meri Mohabbat mujhko bula rahi hein.......*yeh meri zindegi ki sabse hasin ghadi hein nazron ke samne woh chhup kar kahi khadi hein na paas aa rahi hein na dur jaa rahi hein.......Talat Aziz Jee ki aawaaz meh yeh Gazal bohot hi Pyaara sa hein. I just in Love with this one. Dekha phir se mein khogaayi thi ish liye der ho gaayi. Dilse shukriya kabool kijiyega. Khush rahiye yeh Duwa rahti hein aur rahegi. Do take care of yourself. God bless you.

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