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Love ~~Talaash~~ - 7th November 2003, 08:24 PM

Naa kisi mukaam ki Talaash hai,
Naa kisi bahaane ki Talaash hai,
Jo Gham Jindagi ko maut de de,
Aaise hi Bahaane ki Talaash hai

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hi - 8th November 2003, 07:37 AM

hi ramjim ji

"Naa kisi mukaam ki Talaash hai,
Naa kisi bahaane ki Talaash hai,
Jo Gham Jindagi ko maut de de,
Aaise hi Bahaane ki Talaash hai"

bagvan aap ko vo bahana kabhi na de..jo hum se hamre dost door kar de
bytheway nice one
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Re: ~~Talaash~~ - 8th November 2003, 10:10 AM

Naa kisi mukaam ki Talaash hai,
Naa kisi bahaane ki Talaash hai,
Jo Gham Jindagi ko maut de de,
Aaise hi Bahaane ki Talaash hai

Rim ji
kaisi hai aap..?? bahot dinon ke baad aap ko yahan dekh kar behad acha laga..magar aap ke kalaam ko padh kar dil daad dene ko nahin kar raha,,,kyun ki is kalaam mein wo rimjhim nahin nazar aayi jo uski pehchan hai,,,jindagi se bharpoor aap ki shayri par yeh maut ke kaale baadal kaise madrane lage...?? ek shayri ke lehze se aap ka kalaam hamesha ki hi tarah behtreen hai,,magar jazbaaton ke hisaab se ham niraash hue hai....yeh ek sher aap ke liye hi likha hai meine abhi...

naadan hai jo marne ke bahane dhoondte hai
shamma ko kyun yeh "parwane" dhoondte hai
zindagi mauz-e-dariya hai katra nahin...
naasamjh hai jo sahil par khajane dhoonte hai

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Hi - 11th November 2003, 06:45 AM

Shukriyaa arvind ji,

Ji hum bhi aapke saath hain bhagvaan ji kabhi aisa bahana nahi denge hume jiski wajah se hum aapse door ho jaaye, don't worry about it.

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Hi - 11th November 2003, 06:48 AM

Manoj ji aise hi aaj dil mai aaya to likh diya, kuch socha nahi, apako dukh hua hamare dukh iske liye hum aapka shukriyaa adaa karte hain, waise yeh humne apne liye apni ek dost ke liye likha hai, hum itne week nahi hai ki marne ki bata karen, kyonki hum jaante hain ki kisi insaan ke jaane se jindagi nahi rukti hai, par ek baat aur bhi hai, aur woh yeh hai ki chahe koi insaan kitna hi strong kyon naa hoo, duniyaa mai sabse jyada strong kyon naa ho, ooski taakat ek jagah aakar kamzori mai badal jaati hai aur woh cheez hain rishten, pyar, zazbaat...

Anywayz thanx for liking my post :-).

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hi - 11th November 2003, 10:21 AM

hi rimjim ji
aameen......
sorry yaar...but aap ko batana bhul gaya ke kal hum ja rahe hai aapne new university or may be Camb.University me net allow na hooo.....shyad aab aap se........mulakat nahi hooo payyegeee...

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hello - 11th November 2003, 12:14 PM


Naa kisi mukaam ki Talaash hai,
Naa kisi bahaane ki Talaash hai,
Jo Gham Jindagi ko maut de de,
Aaise hi Bahaane ki Talaash hai


Hey Rim,

tumhara likh padh ke achchha laga. manoj ji ne jo kaha hai tumhare likhe kalam per main usse sahamat hoon. shimul ji ki tarah mujhe bhi ek gaane ki line yaad aa gayi tumhara kalam padhate padhate na koi umang hai na koi tarang hai, meri jindagi bhi kya, ek kati patang hai.... well bahut khub,

likhati raho,
muskurati raho,
shayari website per,
apane jalave dikhati raho..


shubhkamnao sahit,


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