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Yaadon ke saaye... -
8th November 2003, 08:31 PM
tumhari yaadon ko seene se laga rakha hai
andhere dil mein ek chiraag jala rakha hai jeene ki umeed jagi hai tumse mil kar hamne sehra ko shabnam se saja rakha hai tumhare intezaar mein khuli hai kab se aankhein hamne raahon par palkon ko bicha rakha hai har lahmha unki yaad mein tadpata hai dil dard e-dil ka hamne naam dawa rakha hai unko bhi nahin maloom kitna chahte hai ham unhe pyar mein unke hamne khud ko bhula rakha hai zindagi hai jab tak sirf unhe hi chahenge dil mein hamne yeh raaj chuupa rakha hai -Manoj Kureel karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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8th November 2003, 08:42 PM
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great yaar really superbbbb keep it yaar Love Is God. Love is worship. Love is Everything...... |
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8th November 2003, 08:53 PM
arvind saaheb
aap ki hauslaafzai ke liye dil ki gehraiyon se shukriya... -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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8th November 2003, 10:54 PM
wah manoj ji man gaye aap ko...bahut hi khubsuat hai ye.
yahi baat pe hum bhi kuch likhna chahte hai piyar karte hai hum tum ko sanam par kaise kahe ke ho jao mere tum dar hai duniya ka khuaf hai khuda se ke mante hai hum tum ko apna khuda sanam |
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8th November 2003, 11:06 PM
waah manoj ji
bohot achha likha hai aapne aur kaise hain aap? |
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8th November 2003, 11:17 PM
waah manoj ji
bohot achha likha hai aapne aur kaise hain aap? |
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9th November 2003, 01:27 AM
tumhari yaadon ko seene se laga rakha hai
andhere dil mein ek chiraag jala rakha hai /chalo jab woh hakeekat mein ayenge to roshni to milegi unko / jeene ki umeed jagi hai tumse mil kar hamne sehra ko shabnam se saja rakha hai /achaaaaaaaaa pahle kya kiya tha haan bolo bolo/ tumhare intezaar mein khuli hai kab se aankhein hamne raahon par palkon ko bicha rakha hai /hey plsssssssss palkein agar bichaoge to dhool aankhoin mein jayegi isliye kuch aur bicho na / har lahmha unki yaad mein tadpata hai dil dard e-dil ka hamne naam dawa rakha hai /hum karenge kaamna na dukhi hona tum aalaah se hai ye dua sukhi rahna tum/ unko bhi nahin maloom kitna chahte hai ham unhe pyar mein unke hamne khud ko bhula rakha hai /yahan ek song yaad aya hai-- mein jis din bhula dun tera pyaar dil se woh din akhiri ho meri jindagi ka/ apne ye suna to hoga hai na. aap unke liye khud ko bhi bhula chuke ho to hamein yaad rakha hai kya haan ?bataiye na/ zindagi hai jab tak sirf unhe hi chahenge dil mein hamne yeh raaj chuupa rakha hai /ab kya likhoo mein hey bhagwaan KYUN KI APNE APNA RAJ TO KHUD HI FAAS KIYA HAI HUMNE KUCH NAHI KIYA HAAN/ manoj ji sorry kahne ki jarurat hai kya are baba try to undarstand me , meine jara majak ke saath ans diya hai . apki gazal jazzbaatoin se bhar pur hai aur such dil ke ye jazbaat dil waala hi jaan sakta hai .but hum kya kare majbor hai janab dil nahi hai na yahan are baba just joking. bhut hi pyaari gazal hai dil ki gahraaiyoin se aapko daad deti hun with lov urs sakhi chalo jab woh hakeekat mein ayenge to roshni to milegi unko  achaaaaaaaaa pahle kya kiya tha haan bolo bolo hum karenge kaamna na dukhi hona tum ab kya likhoo mein hey bhagwaan KYUN KI APNE APNA RAJ TO KHUD HI FAAS KIYA HAI HUMNE KUCH NAHI KIYA HAAN/  शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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9th November 2003, 03:00 AM
Dear Manoj Jee, Khubsurat sa kalam hein. Actually I thought I already replied but I was wrong. Mujhe toh yeh pata hein. Kaha toh pehle hi. Hame bhi toh batlao, kush karna sake toh duwa hum zaroor karenge. Aise hi likhte rahiyega. Bohot achha lagta hein. Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.
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9th November 2003, 05:22 AM
har lahmha unki yaad mein tadpata hai dil
dard e-dil ka hamne naam dawa rakha hai unko bhi nahin maloom kitna chahte hai ham unhe pyar mein unke hamne khud ko bhula rakha hai zindagi hai jab tak sirf unhe hi chahenge dil mein hamne yeh raaj chuupa rakha hai manoj sahib aap to kamaal ka likhte hain...dil kee gehraayion ko choo gaya aapka yeh andaaz...bakayeda illustration ke saath? Bahut hee achhe! Wow! Aapne kitna sach likha hai....yeh Anand movie ke gaane ki do lines yaad aa rahin hain... jiinaa bhuule the kahaa.N yaad nahii.n tujhako paayaa hai jahaa.N, saa.Ns phir aaii vahii.n zi.ndagii , tere binaa haay, bhaaye naa naa, jiyaa laage naa ... khud kee soch koi aise bayan kare...aur itne khoobsurat andaaz mein? bahut bahut shukriya! Khayal rakhein apna...ijazzat chahoongi gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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9th November 2003, 02:27 PM
piyar karte hai hum tum ko sanam
par kaise kahe ke ho jao mere tum dar hai duniya ka khuaf hai khuda se ke mante hai hum tum ko apna khuda sanam ZOOBI JI bahoot umda khayal hai aapka,,,hamari daad kubool kijiye....bahoot acha laga aap ko yahan dekh kar....aap ki hauslaafzai ka dil se shukrguzaar rahunga -MANOJ __________________________________________________ __ MANGO JI mein acha hoon,,,aasha karta hoon aap bhi achi hongi....aap ne yahan aap ka mera hausla badhaya,,,mujhe behad acha laga....mein shukriya kehta hoon aapka...apna khayal rakhiye.... -MANOJ __________________________________________________ __ PRIYE SAKHI JI KAISI HAI AAP..??? BAHOOOT ACHA LAGA YEH DEKH KAR KI AAP NE KIS GEHRAI SE HAMARI KOSHISH KO SAMJHA HAI,,,,AUR JIS CHANCHALTA SE REPLY DIYA HAI WO AUR BHI KABIL-E-TAREEF HAI...MUJHE BAHOOT ACHA LAGA AAP KA YEH ANDAAZ....AAP KI HAUSLA AFZAI KA DIL KI GEHRAIYON SE SHUKRIYA. APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYEGA... -MANOJ __________________________________________________ __ SHIMUL JI kaisi hai aap???? jab jab aap ka reply milta hai.bahoot acha lagta hai mujhe....bahooot aabhari hoon mein aapka ki aap ne hamehsa ki hi tarah hamari yeh koshiosh ko pasnd kiya,,,,likhte rahiye aur apna khayal rakhiye... -MANOJ __________________________________________________ __ PARASTAAR JI kaisi hai aap?? sach..!! bahooot acha laga aap ko yahan dekh kar....aap ne to bahoot jayada hi tareef kar di hai hamari.....hamne to bas dil ke kuch jazbaaton ko kagaz par utara tha,,,aap ne gazal aur Illustration mein chupe hamare jazbaaton ko samjha,,,,unko pasand kiya,,,bahoot khushi hui mujhe....dil ki gehraiyon se mein aap ka shukrguzaar rahunga... jiinaa bhuule the kahaa.N yaad nahii.n tujhako paayaa hai jahaa.N, saa.Ns phir aaii vahii.n zi.ndagii , tere binaa haay, bhaaye naa naa, jiyaa laage naa ... bahoot khoob geet yaad dilwaya aapne....Yogeshji ka likha yeh geet mujhe bhi bahoot pasand aai....shukriya aap ne is geet ko mujhe phir se yaad dilwaya.... aap se ab izzazat chahunga.... likhte rahiye....aur apna khayal rakhiye... -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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9th November 2003, 04:09 PM
para staar ji
apne basir ji ka ye sher yaad dila ke bhut acha kiya hai kyun ki hum bhi phir se is jagah aaye hai kuch kahne ko-- jindagi mein kuch saksh yaise hote hai hum jinko yaad karke rote hai woh yun dil ke kareeb hote hai jyun gul mahak ke samg hote hi. with best wishes sakhi manoj ji apko mera andaazasand aaya thanx a lots . aap bhi apna khyaal rakhna ok byeeeeeeee sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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9th November 2003, 05:15 PM
jindagi mein kuch saksh yaise hote hai
hum jinko yaad karke rote hai woh yun dil ke kareeb hote hai jyun gul mahak ke samg hote hi. Waah sakhi ji, bilkul sahi kaha aapne, main aap sab kee tarah likh to nahin sakti lekin rachnaaon mein chupe jazzbaaton se wakif zaroor hoon...manoj jee ka andaaze bayan bhi khuub hota hai...lijiey aapke liye ye sher, by kishwar naheed... tuu ashk hii ban ke merii aa.Nkho.n me.n samaa jaa mai.n aa_iinaa dekhuu.N to teraa aks bhii dekhuu.N shubhkaamnaaon sahit.... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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9th November 2003, 06:14 PM
Manoj Bhai,
Bahut achha likha hai aap ne. Daad kabool kaerein. Yah humari taraaf se aap ke liye payar ka sougaat app ke liye. Kash dil ki awaz mein ajj wo asar ho jaye Aap usse yaad karein Aur usse khabar ho jaye. Aaj Rab se Bas itni hi dua hain.. Aap jisse chahe woh aap ka humsafar ho jaye... Manish |
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10th November 2003, 12:02 PM
jindagi mein kuch saksh yaise hote hai
hum jinko yaad karke rote hai woh yun dil ke kareeb hote hai jyun gul mahak ke samg hote hi. PRIYE SAKHI JI kaisi hai aap...bahoot acha sher likha hai aapne yahan Parastaar ji ke liye,,,kud ko daad dene se nahin rok saka mein,,,ek sher hamne bhi likha hai,,,,umeed hai aap ko pasand aayega... zindagi ke safar mein kuch aise shaksh bhi milte hai jo ban ke hamsafar ghadi do ghadi saath chalte hai unke saath bitaye lamhe tanhaiyon mein tadpate hai.. aankhon se baraste hai aansoo jab wo yaad aate hai. likhti rahiye aur apna khayal rakhiye... -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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10th November 2003, 12:25 PM
tuu ashk hii ban ke merii aa.Nkho.n me.n samaa jaa
mai.n aa_iinaa dekhuu.N to teraa aks bhii dekhuu.N Parastaar ji aap ko hamara aadaz-e-baya acha lagta hai iske liye mein aap ka aabhari hoon...aap ne behad khoobsurat sher arz kiya hai...bahoot khoob,,,,,aap ke sher se hi prerna le kar mein bhi ek sher arz karne ki gustakhi kar raha hoon....mulaiza farmaiye... dil mein rehte hai wo ashkon mein aksh dikhta hai unka aaina bhi ab to dikhata hai mujhe chehra unka. take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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10th November 2003, 01:00 PM
Kash dil ki awaz mein ajj wo asar ho jaye
Aap usse yaad karein Aur usse khabar ho jaye. Aaj Rab se Bas itni hi dua hain.. Aap jisse chahe woh aap ka humsafar ho jaye... Manish bhai kya khoob kaha hai aapne,,,,bahoot acha laga aap ko yahan dekh kar,,,aap ki hausla afzai ke liye dil ki gehraiyon se shukrguzar rahunga...aap ka sher aur us sher mein chupi dua dil ko choo gayi....behad acha andaaz hai aapka...LIKHTE RAHIYE AUR APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE... YAAD KARNA BHI NA CHAHE TO BHI YAAD AAYENGE WO SEHRA PAR BAADAL BAN CHAA JAYENGE WO UNHI KI YAADON KE SAAYE MEIN DIL SUKOON PATA HAI UN KO BHULA KAR NA PHIR JINDA REH PAYENGE HAM. -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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10th November 2003, 02:44 PM
Dear Manoj Jee, aapka jitni bhi tarif karu utni hi kaam hein. Bohot achha likhte hein aap. Aise hi likhte rahiyega. I really feel good when I read your poetry. Thanks. Take care. God bless you.
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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11th November 2003, 07:33 AM
manoj jee
wah kiya baat hain aapkee alfazoh neh kisiki yad delah dee aj toh humneh kahan hain pehlee bhi padhtee zarror hain magar jawab denha kabhi muskeel hoh jata hain aap likhtee rahiyegha hum shimul je keh bhi bahut badeh fan hain aur sakhijee bhi kuch nah kuch keh detee hain dil kee gherayeesho jho acha laghta hain kabeeleh tareef hain unkee baate bhi aapnee meri mehboobaa shabnam koh jish tarah behakkaya hain wah janaab wah chaloh koi toh ashk ghwaar mila hain rah mein acha kheriyat wa salaams namaste sat sri akaal and a good day to you and keep on writing plzz |
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11th November 2003, 08:10 AM
Manoj ji ab yeh kahenge hum ki aapne bahaut khoobsoorat likha hai to bahaut mamooli sa lagega isiliye hum to yeh kahenge ki yeh gazhal hamare dil ko chu gayi.
Par hume k bata aur bhi kahna chahenge ki agar poorani yadoon ko dil mai basa ke rakhoge, to nayi yadoon ko kaise banaoge... Hum aapke dost hone ke naate yeh kahenge ki apni zindagi ko rango se sajao, naaki gam se, bhagvaan ji ek zindagi dete hain aur hamara yeh maan na hai ki jitni iss mai khusiyaan milen ootna hi kam hai, aur khusiyaan chalkar khud nahi aati hai oonhe bulana parta hai choti choti batoon par kush hona sikho... Itna hi kahenge, agar aapko bura laga hot o hum maufi nahi maagenge, kyonki yeh to haar hakh tha apako yeh sab kahne ka... Bye Luv Rimjhim :-) Isn't that true??? ;-) |
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12th November 2003, 10:35 AM
Shimul ji
kaisi hai aap??? aap ki izaat afzai ka bahoot bahoot shukrguzaar rahunga mein,,,,dil ki gehraiyon se aap ka shukriya kehta hoon mein,,,bahot acha laga yeh jaan kar ki aap ko hamara likha pasand aata hai....THNAKS AGAIN ,,apna khayal rakhiyega. -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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12th November 2003, 10:51 AM
Deewana ji
kaise hai aap,????aap waqt nikaal karyahan aaye aur hamari koshiash ko saraha,,,dil ki gehraiyon se aap ka shukrguzaar hoon,,,,bahoot acha laga aap ko yahan dekh kar........aap ne sach hamare dil ki baat keh di ,,shimul ji aur sakhi ji ke to ham bhi bahot bade fan hai,,kyun ki bina in ke reply ke hamein apni har rachnai si lagti hai take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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12th November 2003, 10:57 AM
Rimjhim ji
aap ki saari hidayatein hamare sar aankhon par,,,,aap ne itne apnepan se hamein jo bhi samjhaya hai ham uske liye dil ki gehraiyon se aap ke shukrguzar hai....aap ne apne is dost ke ache ke liye socha,,,mujhe behad acha laga.... aap ki kahi ek ek baat par ham poora utarne ki koshish kareinge....ek baar fir kehna chahunga,,,behad acha laga aap ka reply padh kar....likhte rahiye take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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12th November 2003, 02:25 PM
Dear Manoj Jee, Mein thikh thakh hu. Aap keise hein? Asha karungi aap thikh hein. Itni jiyada shukriya kehne ki koi zaroorat nehi hein, right? Jo bhi meine kaha woh meri dilki baat hein, just believe it. Thanks. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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12th November 2003, 10:38 PM
dera manoj,
very beautiful, kya kahoo mai soch mai pad gaya hu. aare yar u should start your own shayri,poem,gazal etc etc business. aap khud aapni book print kijiye. u r already mashoor shayar, kavi. aapke ma-aur pitaji ko mera namaskar kahiyega ki unhone 1 jaberdast shayar ki aachi tarah parvarish ki hai. aur unhone aapko aache sanskar diye hai. please keep it up lovely. pappu.  |
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13th November 2003, 03:52 AM
dear manoj,
its lovely. yar u should print your own book. u have a great talent. i salute your mom and dad ke unhone aap ki bahoot aachi tarah parvarish ki hogi. plz keep it on. aap kavi bhi ho, shayar bhi, gazal kar bhi etc etc. pappu. |
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Kureel
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13th November 2003, 03:42 PM
Pappu ji
kaise hai aap??? dost aap ne to sach bahoot jayada tareef kar di hamari,,,itni tareef ke haqdaar ham katai nahin hai,,,yeh to aap ke dekhne ka nazariya hai ki aap mere liye itni badi soch rakhte hai...mein to bas dil ke sache jazbaaton ko jabaan dene ki koshish karta hoon,,,aap doston ko pasand aate hai,,samjhiye mera likhna safal hua....mein koi shayar nahin hoon dost,,,keh sakte ho ki apni bhavnaon ko aawaz bhar deta hoon,,,,ek se badh kar ek hunarmand mauzood hai is mulq mein,,,ham to unki charnon ki dhool bhi nahin....mein to ek adna sa kalakaar hoon bas,,,aur yeh kala bhi Ishwar ki dein hai.mera kuch bhi nahin hai. aap ka namshkaar mein jaroor apne mata-pita tak pahunchaunga,,,aap ke is aadar se mein samjh sakta hoon ki aap ke sanskaar bhi bahoot ache hai...mein bhi apke mata-pita ko naman karta hoon jinhone itne ache sankaar diye aapko. aap ki is izzatafzai ka dil ki gehraiyon se shukrriya kehta hoon... aage bhi aap ki umeedon par khara utarne ki koshish karta rahunga...likhte rahiye aur apna khayal rakhiye.. -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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