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Love ~~ Gazhal:- Subah Ka Jonkha ~~ - 23rd January 2004, 09:02 PM

Doston aaj ek arse baad maine kuch likha hai. Aaj arson baad dil mai kuch jazbaat oothe dil ki gahraayi ko kaagaz par ootar diya hai bas wohi aapke saamne pesh kar rahi hoon. Aasha hai aap sabko pasand aayega.

Subha ka jhonka teri yaad ki kirnen sang apney laaya hai
kirnun ka yeh purnoor libada main ne tan pe sajaya hai.

Dhal chuke shaam ke saayey,panchi bhi ghar lout gey
teri raah mein beth ke ham ne aankhon ka deep jalaya hai.

sun aa kar tuu bhi kabhi roodad-e-gham-e-hijar meri
teri yaadon ki khushbo se ham ne, dil ka shehar basaya hai.

Dil ka soda naqad kiya, ham dil ki baazi haar gey
dil ka kiya itbaar karen ham,yeh to tera saaya hai.

Tujh se bichar kar zinda hain,par sare khwaab adhorey le kar
bisaat bhar aey dost ham ne,ehd-e-mohabbat nibhaya hai.

Samjhey they jala kar dar-o-dewaar,kuch to roshni ho gi
kisi se kiya shikwa karen,apne haathon ghar jalaya hai.

Gar socho to hai yeh izhaar-e-tamanna ka andaaz niraala
hamesha ki tarah na samjho ke,ham ne sher sunaya hai.

Bhigo dale hain anchal,phailta rehta hai aankhon mein kaajal
jab se "RIMJHIM" ne dil apna, tere sang lagaaya hai.

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hi - 23rd January 2004, 11:06 PM

hi sis

vow aapne bhut hi acha likha hai aur bilkul sach bi yeh intizaar bi kitna muskhal kaam hai, i think there is nothing wors than that. umeed hai jis ke liye aap ne apni aankho ke deep jalaye hai vo jald loot aaye gey

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Hi - 23rd January 2004, 11:13 PM

Romana bahaut acacha laga tumne sis kaha anywayz haan ab to bas kuch hi din bache hain oonke aane mai...yeh intezaaar bhi bahaut mushkil hota hai...ab to bas yeh khatam hone waala hai INTEZAAR...

Thanx for liking my post :-).

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hi - 23rd January 2004, 11:21 PM

hi

u welcome

Rimjhim meri duvaa hai ke vo jaldi aa jai aur tumhare is bechain dil ko sakoon mil jae. intezaar akhir intezaar hi hota chahe vo kitna hi mudat ka kiyo na ho
ne way gud luck
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24th January 2004, 01:07 PM

Hi RimjHim ..

Kaisi Ho ..

kayi DiN Ho Gaye tumHaRi koi KHaBaR NaHi miLi .. UmmeeD Hai acHHi HoGii ..

BaHut DiN BaaD LikHa Hai maGaR LikHa BaHut acHHa Hai BiLkuL saaf saaf LikHa Hai ..

meRi taReef QaBuL kaRo ..

AuR

ApNa KHyaaL RaKHo ..


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