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Sad Kai Baar - 19th April 2004, 01:42 PM

Sheershak Prerna..Meena ji ki ek post.

Kai Baar

Kai Baar YooN bhi hota hai
Ke koi apna chhoot jaata hai ,
Koi sun bhi nahi paata or
Ye sheeesha toot jaata hai ..

Kai baar yooN bhi hota hai ke wo
Kuchh bhi to nahi kehta phir bhi
Bin kahe ek ajeeb si chubhan ka
Ehsaas kara jaata hai…

Kai baar wo mere saath hota hai or
Ek ajnabi sa pesh aata hai ,
Kai baar hamne samjhaya is dil ko
Kai baar yea dil..bekaabu ho jaata hai…

Kai baar kuchh jalta hai bheetar or
Ek badi gehri taqleef de jaata hai
Kasoor us shaks ka bhi nahi ey dil
Kai baar jo uske saath nazar aata hai….

Kai baar apne mukaddar pe rota hooN mai
Kai baar ye dard use bhi chhu hi jaata hai,
MAI BURA INSAAN NAHI..par kya karooN ey dil
Wo mere khaatir nahi ye dard bahut sataata hai.


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Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

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Re: Kai Baar - 19th April 2004, 01:49 PM

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Sheershak Prerna..Meena ji ki ek post.

Kai Baar

Kai Baar YooN bhi hota hai
Ke koi apna chhoot jaata hai ,
Koi sun bhi nahi paata or
Ye sheeesha toot jaata hai ..

Kai baar yooN bhi hota hai ke wo
Kuchh bhi to nahi kehta phir bhi
Bin kahe ek ajeeb si chubhan ka
Ehsaas kara jaata hai…

Kai baar wo mere saath hota hai or
Ek ajnabi sa pesh aata hai ,
Kai baar hamne samjhaya is dil ko
Kai baar yea dil..bekaabu ho jaata hai…

Kai baar kuchh jalta hai bheetar or
Ek badi gehri taqleef de jaata hai
Kasoor us shaks ka bhi nahi ey dil
Kai baar jo uske saath nazar aata hai….

Kai baar apne mukaddar pe rota hooN mai
Kai baar ye dard use bhi chhu hi jaata hai,
MAI BURA INSAAN NAHI..par kya karooN ey dil
Wo mere khaatir nahi ye dard bahut sataata hai.
chaand dost,
tumhare ahesaas ki kya taarif karu? tumhari har tasweer dil maie basi hai. gr8 work...... humesha ki tarah. meri poorani post yaad aa gayi.....
kahi baar........
kahi bar aisa bhi hota hai...
khushi ke saath gam bhi hota hai;
saara din aap bhid main raho
aur apne aapko akela paao
kahi bar aisa bhi hota hai.
kahi bar aisa bhi hota hai....
haste haste aankh bhar aaye
aur achanak dard chhalak jaye
jo baat sabse chhoopani ho
wahi baat laboon par aa jaye
kahi bar aisa bhi hota hai.
kahi bar aisa bhi hota hai.....
din bhar nazar main talash rahe
aur shaam bhi yuhi biit jaye
raat achaanak sapne main
ose dil ke karib paao
kahi bar aisa bhi hota hai.
kahi bar aisa bhi hota hai.....
jindgi bhar intzar karo
aur intzar hi jindgi ban jaye
ak din achhanak samne aaye
aur wah kayamat ka din ban jaye
kahi bar aisa bhi hota hai.
   
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19th April 2004, 02:09 PM

Main kabse sochrahi thi ke kaunsi sher ke bade mein kahun lekin decide nehi kar paarahi thi, aur ab kuch yun hein ke aisa koi sher nehi hein jo dilko na chhoo gaaya ho tou keya kare...bohot khubsurat likhha hein...dilki gehraion se shurkiya kabool kijiyega. Yunhi likhte rahiyega. This one is the best so far...khush rahiye yeh Duwa hamesha rahegi. Take care. God bless you.

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19th April 2004, 02:15 PM

Samajhh nahi aa raha.. original post ki tareef karein ya uske jawaab ki!

Chaand saahab,

Aapko shayad aadat si paR gayi hume bezubaan karne ki.. bas, yahi kahenge ki bohat pasand aaya aapka ye kalaam.. apni si jhhalak nazar aayi, shayad isi liye aur bhi achha laga.. Yunhi likhte rahiyega..


Meena!

Pata nahi humne tumhaari ye waali rachna pehle paRi hai bhi ya nahi.. lekin sach yaar, kamaal likha hai tumne! Har soch sach me doobi hui hai.. behtareen! Tumhe yahaan dekh kar bohat khushi hui..


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19th April 2004, 04:24 PM

chand dost

bohat khoob nazm kahi hai.
aur yeh aap ka bara pan hai ke zameen jis ki hai voh bata ker usi zameen per aap ne likha.
ham yeh kehne mein haq ba jaanib hain ke meena ne to likha hi khoob thaa. aap ne bhi apna haq adaa ker diya.
mukhtasaran yeh ke bohat khoob dost chaand.

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Shukriya DostoN - 19th April 2004, 06:59 PM

Dear Meena ji ..mai aap ki is behtreen rachna ko ab tak nahi bhoola hooN...ye jo kashmakash hai na isme...wahi prerna ka strot hai mere liye...

Chaand

Shukriya Shimul ji... aapko mere ye khayalaat itne pasand aaye, jaankar bahut khushi hui...tahe dil se shukriya.

Chaand


Banno ji original Post jo hai na Meena ji ki post se hi upji hai...uske bachche jaisi...aap ek ko achchha kaheNge dusra khudbakhud khoobsoorat nazar aaega....Khuda na kare ham se eisi Gustakhi ho kabhi...KyoN ki aap dostoN ke kehne se hi to ham kehte haiN...Shukriya tahe dil se.

Chaand

musharrafhusain ji... YooNto ham ye chura bhi lete to Meena ji shikaayat na karti... Per unki is jameeN ki mehek kahaaN chhupaate...Shukriya aapko donoN rachnaaeiN pasand aai..Tahe dil se shukriya aapka bhi...


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