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Question Socha Na Tha - 27th October 2005, 09:37 PM

Hi, Friends ye meri pahli post he bus thoda bahut likh leta hu or aap logo ko batana chahta hu

Gair-Gair hote he or Apne-Apne
Phir Kyun Dekhte He Hum Ye Tute Hue Sapne.......?

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umeed hi insaan ko aisey sapney dikhaati hai key shaahid yeh sapna poora ho jahey, aur usi sapney key hosool pey banda apni poori zindagi daaho pey laga deta hai.


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29th October 2005, 06:44 PM

1st of all i welcome u on this site.

aur dost ye bas dil ki berukhi hai,
kyunki kisi ko pata nahi hota,
ki dil ki galiyan kitni sukhi hain.

bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap.

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Re: Socha Na Tha - 29th October 2005, 07:39 PM

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Hi, Friends ye meri pahli post he bus thoda bahut likh leta hu or aap logo ko batana chahta hu

Gair-Gair hote he or Apne-Apne
Phir Kyun Dekhte He Hum Ye Tute Hue Sapne.......?

Agar is sawal ka jawab koi de pae to plz reply
hi .. well sahi jawab kya hoga.. still unable to tell.. lekin jahat tak mai sochati hoon.. hum akela nahi rehana chahte hai.. isliye sapne dekhate hi hai...

keep ur thoughts flowing like this


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30th October 2005, 04:17 AM

sapne dekho yeh toh jeene ka sahara hai
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31st October 2005, 08:23 PM

Thanks all of u my friends ab lagta he ki mere saath b koi he......
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Gair-Gair hote he or Apne-Apne
Phir Kyun Dekhte He Hum Ye Tute Hue Sapne.......?



ek khwaab jo dekha tha
ek bas wahi apna tha
....................khwaab jo hain aankho main
....................issliye toh hain saansein jeevan main

.....................wo hai dil main tabhi toh ye dil dhadkata hai
......................warna kya bacha tha iss jeevan main.
wo aaya tabhi toh ek sapna dekha
apna tha tabhi toh todne ka huk paaya
....................wo jo dill maine rehta hai
....................toh bhlaa kaise usse gair kahain





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Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door.

Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay
Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay

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31st October 2005, 08:53 PM

Gair-Gair hote he or Apne-Apne
Phir Kyun Dekhte He Hum Ye Tute Hue Sapne.......?
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First of all welcome,

AAp ka sher acha hay Mutawazan hay,
lay kin phela misra alag hay, aur dosra misra alag

Jab Aap is baat ko mantay hay kay
Gair-Gair hay aur Apne-Apne hotay hay

tw phir ya totay huy sapnay kis kay liye dekh tay hay
apno kay liye ya gher kay liye

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Aur sapna jab dekha jata hay tab wo salim (nahi tuta hua)
hoo ta hay wo to bad may toot-ta hay. kabhi khud say kabhi halat say.

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Sher 3 chezo say banta hay.. jis may sab say zida important
Basick Idea (Markazi Khial), phir Words (Alfaz ka intikhab), Phir Wazan (Balance).

Aap nay 3rd point tw cantrol kia..
laykin phla aur dosray may kamzor rahy

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Yaha kon Gair hay, sab hay Apnay
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Aumeed hay ap ko App kay sawal ka Jawab aur isla pasan aye gi
Aur naraz nahi hoona, ya tankeed nahi isla hay
Wisay bhi "Yaha kon Gair hay, sab hay Apnay"

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31st October 2005, 09:19 PM

nahi samjh paai..................................plz fir se ek baar try kijiye samjhaane ki plzzzzzzzzzzz




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Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay
Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay

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Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae





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