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Post wo tum ho - 8th November 2005, 11:30 AM

Mere liye tum us chand ki tarah ho…
jise main dekh to sakti hoon…
per kabhi use pa nahi sakti…

Mere liye tum us chand ki tarah ho…
jiski taraf main hath to badha sakti hoon …
per kabhi use chuu nahi sakti…

Mere liye tum us chand ki tarah ho…
jise main kareeb mehsoos to karti hoon…
per kabhi uske nazdeek ja nahi sakti….

Mere liye tum us chand ki tarah ho…
jiski gehrai mein, main doob jana chahti hoon…
per khudko hamesha kinare per hi pati…

Mere liye tum us chand ki tarah ho…
jiski roshni mein, main khudko pehchanna chahti hoon…
per hamesha raat ke andhere main kho jati….

Mere liye tum wo chand ho…
jo na kabhi meri zami per aayega…
aur na kabhi mera ho payega…
per phir bhi “wo tum ho”….

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Bahut khoob - 8th November 2005, 12:15 PM

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Cool Nahi Wo Tum Ho - 8th November 2005, 05:09 PM

ruchika ji bahut acha likhti hen aap...
vese DIWALI or IED mubarak ho Apko
IED par Ek Sher yaad aaya he mujhe......ki

EID KI KHUSHIYAN MUBARAK HO AAPKO
LEKIN, AAPNE CHAND NAHI AAINA DEKHA HOGA

"WO TUM HO"
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Take Care... khush raho
   
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9th November 2005, 11:49 AM

thanks ...
per aapko kis naam se pukaro samjh nahi aaya..
aapko bhi DIWALI or IED mubarak ho...
itna instant sher.. wow
per dekhiye kahi chand aapse naraz na hojaye...

u 2 Take Care...
   
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hi - 9th November 2005, 05:39 PM

Ruchika ji,

aapki creation bahut pasand aayi..
ek dard bhi mahsoos hua.
great composition hai aapki.
likhate rahiyega..


Akant...


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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
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Cool dont mind - 9th November 2005, 10:13 PM

ruchika ji
Shayad chand Wakai naraz ho jata
gar me ye sher naa kehta

maf kijiyega lekin shayad aap chand ko pasand aa gaye...

be happy always.......

vese bande ko dev kahte he.
   
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10th November 2005, 01:01 AM

dear ruchika...
accha likkha hai tumne dear...
keep writing and keep smiling.
take care


"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."


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10th November 2005, 10:10 AM

thanks farhana ji...
vaise main koi shayar nahi...
yunhi kabhi kabhi likhti hoon...
per ab aap logo ki kalam dekhkar ab likhne ki himmat nahi hoti...
phir agar usme aapse kuch tareef mil jaye to lagta hain ki sayad kuch achcha hi likha hoga...
thanks 4 ur support..
takecare..
   
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10th November 2005, 10:12 AM

thanks akant ji...

hasti aankoh main jhaakkar dekho...
koi aansun kahi chipa hoga....
   
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10th November 2005, 11:19 AM

hi ruchika ji.....

written simply and beautifully.....


keep writing

take care bye......


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