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Kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
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Kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha - 10th December 2006, 11:17 AM

kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha

kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha

ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha

woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha


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10th December 2006, 12:05 PM

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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha

kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha

ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha

woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
koi to ho ij [mani ji] ko mera namksaar! kaise hain aap?

aapki si rachna behad sundar hai aur har sher apne aap sab halat bayan kar rahe hai

woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha-- ye sher bahot pasand aaya

achha laga aapko padh ke guzarish haii bas yuhi aap hamea likhte rahiyenga , dilse nikli daad ko kubul kijiye
khus rahiye, apna khayal rakhiye

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10th December 2006, 07:31 PM

kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha

well said mani ji,acha likha aapne.yunhin likhti rahen.tc.


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Post bahut achaa likha hai - 10th December 2006, 10:06 PM

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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha

kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha

ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha

woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
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koi to ho ij [mani ji] ko mera namksaar! kaise hain aap?

aapki si rachna behad sundar hai aur har sher apne aap sab halat bayan kar rahe hai

woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha-- ye sher bahot pasand aaya

achha laga aapko padh ke guzarish haii bas yuhi aap hamea likhte rahiyenga , dilse nikli daad ko kubul kijiye
khus rahiye, apna khayal rakhiye

aapka dost
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kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha

well said mani ji,acha likha aapne.yunhin likhti rahen.tc.
thankyou aap ne pasand kia aur himmat afzai ki is ke liye bohat bohat shukrya


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Hello Magenta ji,
Bahut achaa likha hai apne mujhe bahut pasand aai aap yu hi likhte rahe, mujhe intezaar rahega....
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bohat shukrya tariq sahib aap ka aur aaap ka sath raha agay bhi likh paoongi thanks again


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Kya Khoob Likha Hai .......

thankyou so much janab bohat nawazish pasand kernay ke liye


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wah ji wah - 13th December 2006, 03:11 PM

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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha

kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha

ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha

woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
mani ji ko raj ka salaam......aapka kalaam arha saach mein dil ko chhu gaya bhut dil se or ehsaason se bana hai yeh kalaam......seedha dil mein uttar gaya.....har share lajawaab....yu he likhti rehna.....take care.......raj......


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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha


Namaskar Mani ji

Aapki rachna ka title bahut khoobsurat hay.....rachna bhi utni hi khoobsurat hay......mere daad kabul kijeyega.....the starting sher is beautiful....ek baat kehna chahungi iss rachna ka ant(end) mughey theek nahin laga....the end is not quite clear....ek dost ki salaah hi samaghiyega.....yuun hi likhti rahiye

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mani ji ko raj ka salaam......aapka kalaam arha saach mein dil ko chhu gaya bhut dil se or ehsaason se bana hai yeh kalaam......seedha dil mein uttar gaya.....har share lajawaab....yu he likhti rehna.....take care.......raj......
veer aap yahan aye mujhay bohat acha laga thank you so much app ne meri is koshish ko pasand kia aur meray ehsasaat ko samjha thanks a lot khush rahain rab rakha


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Namaskar Mani ji

Aapki rachna ka title bahut khoobsurat hay.....rachna bhi utni hi khoobsurat hay......mere daad kabul kijeyega.....the starting sher is beautiful....ek baat kehna chahungi iss rachna ka ant(end) mughey theek nahin laga....the end is not quite clear....ek dost ki salaah hi samaghiyega.....yuun hi likhti rahiye

Take care

sakanya bohat bohat shukria aap yahan ayen aur apni qeemti raye se nawaza aap ne bilkul theek kaha hai is main mujhay bhi kami lagi thi main ise mazeed barrhana chahti thi lekin jab kuch na soojha to aesay hi rehnay dia actually jo sochain hoti hain unhain hi alfaz deti hoon main ....lekin akser sochain bohat be rabt hoti hain isi liye is ka saaf aser is shayri main nazar aya aap ko... main koshish keroongi apni frnd ki salah per amal keroon aur bohat shukrya ke aap ne itnay ghour se parrha aur mashwara bhi dia thank you dear


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15th December 2006, 11:55 AM

woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
such kaha apne.
bahut khub likha hai apne.
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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha

kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha

ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha

woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
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woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
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such kaha apne.
bahut khub likha hai apne.
sakhi ki daad kubul karen.
thank you so much sakhi aap ne pasand kia aur qeemti waqt dia reply ke liye thank you so much


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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
anjaan chahaton ka benaam silsilaa tha

kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
kehnay ko pyar hai per haqeeqat main mehaz gila tha

ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha

woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha


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dil ki naadani samjhiye ya takdeer ka likha...pyar jisse hona hota hai usise hota hai...bus is raah me chalte chalte insan bahot kuch seh jata hai

hi..aapne bahot khubsurti se pyar k ehsaaso ko bayan kiya hai...aapki writing hume bahot achi lagi.... khaskar ye do line....

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Bahut khoob !

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kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
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Kuch saal pehle tum sa koi mujhe mila tha
Ji jaan se hamesha mujhko wo chahta tha

maine bhi dil se ki thi usse bahot mohabbat
phir bhi na jane kyon wo naraz ho gaya tha

jab hosh aya mujhko tab der ho chuki thi
mehboob tha jo mera mujhse bichad chuka tha...........................


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har sher soorat aur seerat se bharpoor lagaa !

thodii der se hi sahi !

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maine bhi dil se ki thi usse bahot mohabbat
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jab hosh aya mujhko tab der ho chuki thi
mehboob tha jo mera mujhse bichad chuka tha...........................
shukriya aapka ke aapne parrha aur aapki shayri bhi achi lagi thanks


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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
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kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
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ik khuwahishon ki basti, umeedon ka qafila tha
aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha

woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha
Aadab mani ji,
kaise hai aap?


mani ji m miss u,really
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aaj b aapko padhakr wahi khushi mili,,jo hamesha se mehsus hoti thi,

allah aapko khush rakhe,apna khayal rakhiye
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kab hum ne ye socha tha kab hum ne yun chaha tha
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aankhon main jugnoouon sa haseen ujalaa tha

woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
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mani ji..apki is khoobsoorat khayal ke liye dil se tareef kabool karey!


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mani ji m miss u,really
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mani ji aap to ek mukammal shaks hai,,
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allah aapko khush rakhe,apna khayal rakhiye
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soni ji kesi hain aap ab to aap dikhti hi nahi hain hum bhi aapko bohat miss kerte hain sdc per pasand kerne ka shukriya soni ji aur jahan tak mukamal insaan ki baat hai to duniya main koi bhi shaks perfect nahi hai apna bohat khayal rakhiyega aur aati raha karain khush rahain


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kesa woh silsila tha kehnay ko faslaa tha
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assalam walekum,
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woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
jis ki talash main dil yun mara mara phira tha


ye to bahot hi ache lage
likhte rahiye
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khoobsurat ehsaas hain mani ji.....likhti rahiye..

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woh konsi thi manzil, woh konsa nishaan tha
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ye to bahot hi ache lage
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