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khatm aakhon ka intezar hua - 10th October 2007, 08:11 PM

wo jo mahfil men jalwabar hua
khatm aakhon ka intezar hua.

kyun muhabbat men jan dete hain
aaj ahsas paheli bar hua.

pool to mil gaye chaman se magar
mera daman bhi tar tar hua.

jab jala li hatheliyan hamne
tab kahin unko etbar hua.

chand ki joostju nahi thi kabhi
unko dekha to be karar hua.


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10th October 2007, 08:42 PM

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wo jo mahfil men jalwabar hua
khatm aakhon ka intezar hua.

kyun muhabbat men jan dete hain
aaj ahsas paheli bar hua.

pool to mil gaye chaman se magar
mera daman bhi tar tar hua.

jab jala li hatheliyan hamne
tab kahin unko etbar hua.

chand ki joostju nahi thi kabhi
unko dekha to be karar hua.


..........khtm aakhon ka intezar hua..........
Tah e dil se swaagat hai aap ka yahaan par...! Aap ki shaayri hamein acchi lagi...! Daad kabuul kijiyegaa...!

Mehfil ko roshan karte rahiyegaa...!



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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Salaam Rehnuma ji......................
Apka likh hua har kalaam bahut hi umda hota hai aur aap bade dil se likhte ho apka kalaam padhker kahi khayalo mein kho jaten hai hum haan ek aur baat maine jo aapse kahatha uspe apne amal kiya accha laga ese hi likhtey rahiye


"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"


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wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.




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11th October 2007, 07:31 PM

Hello rahnuma ji

aapne bahut hi khoooooooooob likha hai, good job, ise hi likhte rahe aur mehfil ki ronak bante rahe


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29th November 2007, 03:41 PM

bahut hi accha likha hain aapne.....

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29th November 2007, 11:33 PM

[QUOTE=rahnuma;252508]wo jo mahfil men jalwabar hua
khatm aakhon ka intezar hua.

kyun muhabbat men jan dete hain
aaj ahsas paheli bar hua.

pool to mil gaye chaman se magar
mera daman bhi tar tar hua.

jab jala li hatheliyan hamne
tab kahin unko etbar hua.

chand ki joostju nahi thi kabhi
unko dekha to be karar hua.

Waahhh huzzoorr ghazab likha hai aapne... mazaa aa gaya yeh aashaar padhke... daad kbool kijiyega... likhte rahiye...


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Bevfa ban gai ab.........................!!
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Love Bevfa ban gai ab.........................!! - 30th November 2007, 08:36 PM

Bevfa ban gai ab badnaseeb takdeer meri ,
tuti h jab se dil me basi tasveer teri !
har pal chhaaye rahate h baadal teri yaadon ke ,
har pal bahaataa hu main aansu, yahi h ab takdir meri !
kaise kaatunga aap bin gindgi kee ye viraan ghadia ,
yaad rah gai baate teri youn tanhaa kategi ab raaten meri !
meraa to tum bin ek pal bitaanaa muskil h ,
rah-rah kar aa rahi h yaad mujhe !
vo haseen si mulaakaat teri !!
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