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daga de gaya koi - 3rd November 2007, 11:20 PM

kya thi meri tamanna kya de gaya koi.
ahsas ko hamare daga de gaya koi.

ummid ke bujhte diye hain nigah me
ye kaisi muhbbat ki saza de gaya koi.

khuda na kare uski dua bool se lage
tamam umra hasne ki dua de gaya koi.

muddaton ke bad jalaya tha charag e khushi
roshni bhi na hui thi hawa de gaya koi.
   
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4th November 2007, 12:02 AM

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kya thi meri tamanna kya de gaya koi.
ahsas ko hamare daga de gaya koi.

ummid ke bujhte diye hain nigah me
ye kaisi muhbbat ki saza de gaya koi.

khuda na kare uski dua bool se lage
tamam umra hasne ki dua de gaya koi.

muddaton ke bad jalaya tha charag e khushi
roshni bhi na hui thi hawa de gaya koi.

Rahnuma ji nice sharing wese ye aapne likhi hai kia? main isliye pooch rahi hoon ke ye main ne kahin parrhi hai mujhe bhi pasand aye thi ye


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mo. koi to ho - 4th November 2007, 06:00 PM

mohtarma ye mumkin hai ki aapne kahin pada ho kyun ki kuch waqt pahele meri gazlen khoobsurat andaz mag. me bhi aa chuki hain aur mumbai ke news pepar mumbai sandhya me bhi aa chuki hain mai ik imandar shayer hun is liye barah e karam hamko shaq ki nazar se mat dekhiye ya fir wo kalam laiye jisse hamara ye kalam be dag ho sake kyun ki ik gazal mukammal karne me hame kai arse aage aur kai arse peeche jana padta hai [ye kaisi muhabbat ki saza de gaya koi]ho sakta hai isse milti julti line aapko kahi padhne ko mil gai ho is ik line se hamari gazal ko aap shaq ki nazar se mat dekhen
meri bat ka bura mat maniyega main apni ik ik gazal ke liye kai kai raten kurban karta hun...gustaklhi muaaf....rahnuma
   
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