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Post kuch dard.... - 12th August 2008, 04:49 PM

kuch dard zindagi ne diye.. kuch humne chun liye...
ban gaya ek silsila sa aur ye kabhi kam na hue...
saans thami ya saans ruki per ye na ruke, befikr badte rahe....
hum b in main gum ho gaye aur ye b humse juda na huye...
ek anjaan atot sa rishta ban gaya...
jo jeevan bhar chalta raha.. hum b sang uske chalte rahe....
   
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13th August 2008, 04:13 PM

sochata huu.n kii jo aise ehsaas bayaan kar sake, us ke dil pe kyaa guzrii hogii? aap ke pasand aaye aapke ehsaas, aur aapke 'kuchh dard' ko mehsoos karne ki koshish kar raha huu.n.. par insaa.n ko dard chhoDh kar khushiyaa.n chun,ne ki koshish karni chaahiye... ek sher yaad aa raha hai Nida faazli ka...

jiivan kyaa hai chalataa phirataa ek khilonaa hai
do aa.Nkho.n me.n ek se ha.Nsanaa ek se ronaa hai


mehfil sajaate rahiye..

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14th August 2008, 10:10 AM

mayankji..

kaha to apna bilkul sahi... ki dard chhodh humme khusiya chunni chahiye... per jo socho wo hota nahi.. aur is ehsaas ko byaan karna bhi aasaan nahi... phir bhi dil ki baat aapne samjhne ki koshish ki ...sukriya...

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dili ahsaas hai apke,khush rahen,likhte rahen


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sachha ehsaas - 27th August 2008, 03:50 AM

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kuch dard zindagi ne diye.. kuch humne chun liye...
ban gaya ek silsila sa aur ye kabhi kam na hue...
saans thami ya saans ruki per ye na ruke, befikr badte rahe....
hum b in main gum ho gaye aur ye b humse juda na huye...
ek anjaan atot sa rishta ban gaya...
jo jeevan bhar chalta raha.. hum b sang uske chalte rahe....
aapki likhi hui lines aapke sacche ehsaas ko bayan karti hai .really very nice .
   
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ruchika ji,
dard ka ahsas hi kuch aisa hota hai ki bahut samaya tak rak
he to vajood me aise simat jata hai jaise ki seep me moti.
dard ko banaye rakhe isse shayri me jaan ati rahegi.
accha laga apka likha keep writing.
   
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Thanks Raj ji....

Vaise bhi Dard aur shayri ka rishta to zindagi aur gum ke rishte ki tarah hi hai… ye na kabhi juda huay hai aur na kabhi honge…
dard milte rehge aur hum likhte rehnge….

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24th November 2008, 02:06 PM

welcome.
i can understand a girl from city of lakes can only be so deep and thoughtful in shayries. ap likhte rahe hum padte rahenge. keep writing.
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