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Sad ~*~ MeRa DiL BiKhAr GaYa Hai.....! - 22nd September 2008, 09:20 AM

Aik dard sa howa hai mera dil bikhar gaya hai
naddi ka thanda pani muje aagg kar gaya hai

dharkan hai meri bekhod,tune hath yoon chua hai
ye Lums tera sajan,muje chand kar gaya hai

jharne hain charoon janib,aik nehar beh rahi hai
samjhi nahi,tu asa, kiya, meri jan kar gaya hai

anjam muhabbat ka,dil rakh ho chala hai
muje mar dala usne,ye maan kar gaya hai

hai intezar uska,use Loat k hai ana
jate hoe muhabbat,muje daan kar gaya hai!



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22nd September 2008, 09:43 AM

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Aik dard sa howa hai mera dil bikhar gaya hai
naddi ka thanda pani muje aagg kar gaya hai

dharkan hai meri bekhod,tune hath yoon chua hai
ye Lums tera sajan,muje chand kar gaya hai

jharne hain charoon janib,aik nehar beh rahi hai
samjhi nahi,tu asa, kiya, meri jan kar gaya hai

anjam muhabbat ka,dil rakh ho chala hai
muje mar dala usne,ye maan kar gaya hai

hai intezar uska,use Loat k hai ana
jate hoe muhabbat,muje daan kar gaya hai!


Wow very nice neha kiya khyal hai bahut khoob, padh kar khyalon me kho haya tha main ha ha ha


Har Saans pe hai maut ka pehra laga hua,
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Wow very nice neha kiya khyal hai bahut khoob, padh kar khyalon me kho haya tha main ha ha ha
thank u soo much azam ji thanks a LoT 4 ur reply


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28th September 2008, 03:24 AM

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neha yar kahan ho app, kaise ho? bohut acha likha hai nice. reply nahi diya apne pm ka.jald jawab do ok FIIAMANULLAH



New friends are like POEMS..
but old friends are like ALPHABETS...
donot forget ur old friends,
because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS..


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28th September 2008, 08:02 PM

ahsaas acche lage neha jee............yoon hi mahfil mein aati rahiye aur kush rahiye

aapki dost


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Smile thanks dear.. - 30th September 2008, 04:35 PM

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neha yar kahan ho app, kaise ho? bohut acha likha hai nice. reply nahi diya apne pm ka.jald jawab do ok FIIAMANULLAH

wa salam,

main yahin hoon dear kia howa?i m wid u sweety
i m totally fine sana
thanks dear that u liked it
yar actually muje tumhara pm nahi mila hai....otherwise main zaror reply karti any ways main again check karongi aur tum b pm me again ok na i will wait
ALLAH Hafiz


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Smile buhat buhat shukriya - 30th September 2008, 04:38 PM

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ahsaas acche lage neha jee............yoon hi mahfil mein aati rahiye aur kush rahiye

aapki dost

buhat buhat shukriya sunita ji
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8th October 2008, 09:36 AM

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Aik dard sa howa hai mera dil bikhar gaya hai
naddi ka thanda pani muje aagg kar gaya hai

dharkan hai meri bekhod,tune hath yoon chua hai
ye Lums tera sajan,muje chand kar gaya hai

jharne hain charoon janib,aik nehar beh rahi hai
samjhi nahi,tu asa, kiya, meri jan kar gaya hai

anjam muhabbat ka,dil rakh ho chala hai
muje mar dala usne,ye maan kar gaya hai

hai intezar uska,use Loat k hai ana
jate hoe muhabbat,muje daan kar gaya hai!

Neha ji aapne bataya nahi aapne post bhi kiya hai kiya likhti hai aap bahut acchi shayri hai aur romantic bhi hai really i like it very much waiting for your reply honey take care
   
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8th October 2008, 12:44 PM

bahoot achha likha hai. ahsas achha laga. likhte rahe.
   
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Smile thanks - 17th October 2008, 07:17 AM

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Neha ji aapne bataya nahi aapne post bhi kiya hai kiya likhti hai aap bahut acchi shayri hai aur romantic bhi hai really i like it very much waiting for your reply honey take care
thanks sujatha tumhen yahan dekh k buhat khushi hoi i was waiting 4 u n listen dear i have also given the reply of that pm ok na so u can check n really thanks 4 ur likeness


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Smile thank u - 17th October 2008, 07:18 AM

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bahoot achha likha hai. ahsas achha laga. likhte rahe.

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19th October 2008, 12:16 AM

Bohat khoob neha ji bohat achi koshish hai ahsasaat pasand aye likhti rahiyega khush rahain.........


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Smile thanks a LoT - 19th October 2008, 12:58 PM

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Bohat khoob neha ji bohat achi koshish hai ahsasaat pasand aye likhti rahiyega khush rahain.........

thank u soo much dear apki tarif buhat achi lagi main apni pori koshish karongi k apki umidoon pe pori utroon


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