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bahoot khoobsurat hai app - 24th September 2008, 09:01 PM

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app,
agar ek dil bhi hota to kia bat hoti,

Tum ati mere khuabo me roz kuch is tarah,
Jaise har rat taro ki chand se mulakat hoti

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app …
Jheel se gahri ye ankhe,
Agar mere intjaar me jagti to kuch or bat hoti
Gulab se komal ye oth,
Mere oth se milte to kuch or bat hoti

Tum ati meri jindgi me kuch is tarah
Jaise bhawre ki har kali se mulakaat hoti,

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app
Agar ek dil bhi hota to kia bat hoti
Gujar jata hare k lamha teri yad me
Or apni jindgi yu hi tamam hoti

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app…
   
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27th September 2008, 09:37 PM

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Bahoot khoobsurat hai app,
agar ek dil bhi hota to kia bat hoti,

Tum ati mere khuabo me roz kuch is tarah,
Jaise har rat taro ki chand se mulakat hoti

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app …
Jheel se gahri ye ankhe,
Agar mere intjaar me jagti to kuch or bat hoti
Gulab se komal ye oth,
Mere oth se milte to kuch or bat hoti

Tum ati meri jindgi me kuch is tarah
Jaise bhawre ki har kali se mulakaat hoti,

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app
Agar ek dil bhi hota to kia bat hoti
Gujar jata hare k lamha teri yad me
Or apni jindgi yu hi tamam hoti

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app…


nice...........bahut accha likha hai aapne, likhtey rahiye hum padtey raheNge.

kush rahiye


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28th September 2008, 12:12 PM

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nice...........bahut accha likha hai aapne, likhtey rahiye hum padtey raheNge.

kush rahiye
sunita ji,
thanks for your reply.
jaise suraj ugte hi andhera bhag jata hai, phoolo ki khusboo sare sansar ko mahka deti hai, asmaan panchiyo ke kalraw se goonj utatha hai, door purab me feli lali nai dulhan sa ahsas karati hai, maa ke kitchen se ati chai or breakfast ki khusoo ye sare ahsas hote hai subah hote hi or yahi sare ahsas hue apka reply padkar bahoot khusi hui ap u hi reply karte rahe hamara hausla or snase dono kayam rahengi. once again thanka. or ek bat wada abhi kayam hai jaldi hi pura karunga.
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28th September 2008, 01:09 PM

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Bahoot khoobsurat hai app,
agar ek dil bhi hota to kia bat hoti,

Tum ati mere khuabo me roz kuch is tarah,
Jaise har rat taro ki chand se mulakat hoti

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app …
Jheel se gahri ye ankhe,
Agar mere intjaar me jagti to kuch or bat hoti
Gulab se komal ye oth,
Mere oth se milte to kuch or bat hoti

Tum ati meri jindgi me kuch is tarah
Jaise bhawre ki har kali se mulakaat hoti,

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app
Agar ek dil bhi hota to kia bat hoti
Gujar jata hare k lamha teri yad me
Or apni jindgi yu hi tamam hoti

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app…
waah! bohat khuub!

khaas kar pahle 2 misre ka to jawaab hi nahii.n....

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app,
agar ek dil bhi hota to kia bat hoti,

yuu.n hi likhte rahe.n..

Mayank

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waah! bohat khuub!

khaas kar pahle 2 misre ka to jawaab hi nahii.n....

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app,
agar ek dil bhi hota to kia bat hoti,

yuu.n hi likhte rahe.n..

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hausla afjai ke liye apko bahut bahut dhnyavad.
   
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sunita ji,
thanks for your reply.
jaise suraj ugte hi andhera bhag jata hai, phoolo ki khusboo sare sansar ko mahka deti hai, asmaan panchiyo ke kalraw se goonj utatha hai, door purab me feli lali nai dulhan sa ahsas karati hai, maa ke kitchen se ati chai or breakfast ki khusoo ye sare ahsas hote hai subah hote hi or yahi sare ahsas hue apka reply padkar bahoot khusi hui ap u hi reply karte rahe hamara hausla or snase dono kayam rahengi. once again thanka. or ek bat wada abhi kayam hai jaldi hi pura karunga.
take care
bye
oh my god etna kuch mere liye kah gaye aap....shukriyaaaaaa jee


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28th September 2008, 09:34 PM

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Bahoot khoobsurat hai app,
agar ek dil bhi hota to kia bat hoti,

Tum ati mere khuabo me roz kuch is tarah,
Jaise har rat taro ki chand se mulakat hoti

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app …
Jheel se gahri ye ankhe,
Agar mere intjaar me jagti to kuch or bat hoti
Gulab se komal ye oth,
Mere oth se milte to kuch or bat hoti

Tum ati meri jindgi me kuch is tarah
Jaise bhawre ki har kali se mulakaat hoti,

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app
Agar ek dil bhi hota to kia bat hoti
Gujar jata hare k lamha teri yad me
Or apni jindgi yu hi tamam hoti

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app…
Bahot khoob raj ji.........achha laga ehesaas..........

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app,
agar ek dil bhi hota to kia bat hoti,...kiske pass dil nehin hai

khus rahiye likhte rahiye ..hume aapke agle nagme ki intezaar hai.........


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Bahot khoob raj ji.........achha laga ehesaas..........

Bahoot khoobsurat hai app,
agar ek dil bhi hota to kia bat hoti,...kiske pass dil nehin hai

khus rahiye likhte rahiye ..hume aapke agle nagme ki intezaar hai.........


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thanks diya ji. ap sabhi ne sharaha bahut khusi hui.
apke que. ka jabab next thread me denge abhi bas itna hi,

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bohut achi likhi hai apne, raj aisay hi likhte rahain..........ok
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gajab raj saheb gajb,behad khubsurat is kavita ke liye daad,kya khoob likha hai janab.....share karte rahen.


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thanks sanaji. apka shukriya. asha karte hai apki ummed par sada khara utrunga.
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thanks baagi ji, shukria. apki phchan bahut attactive hai Baagi or signature to mashaala bahoot hi katil hai. isse apke shouk or hunar ki pahchan hoti hai. apko accha laga apne tareef ki registaan ki ret par barish ki boondo si dhndak mahsoos hi. thanks.
   
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