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tere khush rakhney ko - 18th November 2013, 03:01 PM

Tere khush rakhney ko jo aati hai sa’oobat hamein (sa'oobat = difficulty)
utna toh dushwaar nahin hai gham-e-qurbat hamein

Bhigii aankhon me dekhi hamne woh neemkash nazar (neemkash = half drawn)
tashnaakaam rakhey ho jab aaee hai furqat hamein (tashnaakaam = thirsty)

Kaaghazee hai rishtaa mera tere dil se bandhaa hua (kaaghazee = delicate)
sakhtee-kashaan me kahiin na aa jaaye ghurbat hamein

Teri galli me dafn karta hoon mere shikast dil ko
shaayad teri aaghosh me aake miley ulfat hamein

Ae ham-safiiron mere dildaar ke qareeb mat jaanaa (ham-safiiron = co-inhabitants)
kahin tumhari shuhood me na mil jaaye hurmat hamein (hurmat = respect)

Dekho “Safeer” ko gar tum ees kuchey se ghuzarte kahin
toh yeh nahin ki kiya hai aaj dilbar ne rukhsat hamein


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18th November 2013, 03:40 PM

waaahhhhhhhh Aadeil saahab.... kyaa nagma buna hai aapne ehsaason ke taar se.... ek ek sher apne aalaatereen hone ki gawaahi de rahaa hai.... har lafz karishmaai hai... har andaaz jaadugari hai..... kyaa kehne.... dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad aapko is kalaam ke liye....

Teri galli me dafn karta hoon mere shikast dil ko
shaayad teri aaghosh me aake miley ulfat hamein


Shaad...


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Aadaab Shaad saab. Shukriya aapki daad aur chaahat ke liye.



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aadeil bhai aapne kya lafzon ko sajaya hai
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20th November 2013, 02:50 PM

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aadeil bhai aapne kya lafzon ko sajaya hai
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Aapka tah'e dil se shukriya, Shakir bhai. Aapko Khuda salaamat rakhey



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22nd November 2013, 12:58 AM

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Tere khush rakhney ko jo aati hai sa’oobat hamein (sa'oobat = difficulty)
utna toh dushwaar nahin hai gham-e-qurbat hamein

Bhigii aankhon me dekhi hamne woh neemkash nazar (neemkash = half drawn)
tashnaakaam rakhey ho jab aaee hai furqat hamein (tashnaakaam = thirsty)

Kaaghazee hai rishtaa mera tere dil se bandhaa hua (kaaghazee = delicate)
sakhtee-kashaan me kahiin na aa jaaye ghurbat hamein

Teri galli me dafn karta hoon mere shikast dil ko
shaayad teri aaghosh me aake miley ulfat hamein

Ae ham-safiiron mere dildaar ke qareeb mat jaanaa (ham-safiiron = co-inhabitants)
kahin tumhari shuhood me na mil jaaye hurmat hamein (hurmat = respect)

Dekho “Safeer” ko gar tum ees kuchey se ghuzarte kahin
toh yeh nahin ki kiya hai aaj dilbar ne rukhsat hamein


~ Safeer
Bohat Unda Ashaar hai Adeel Sahab.

Bas ek guzarish hai, is line mein sakta huraha hai "Teri galli me dafn karta hoon mere shikast dil ko"

Ager "shikast dil" ke aywaz "shikasta dil" woh to sher wazan bana rahye ga
   
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22nd November 2013, 09:59 AM

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Bohat Unda Ashaar hai Adeel Sahab.

Bas ek guzarish hai, is line mein sakta huraha hai "Teri galli me dafn karta hoon mere shikast dil ko"

Ager "shikast dil" ke aywaz "shikasta dil" woh to sher wazan bana rahye ga
Bahot shukriya, Vazeer saab.

Aapke suggestionko hamne note kiya hai. YahaaN to ham tabdil nahiN kar paa rahe haiN par hamne isse apne note me change kar diya hai.

Iss tarah suggestions dete rahiyega.

Thaks a lot.
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waaaah..waaaah..kya nagma hai...kya soch aur jasbaat hain...daad



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waaaah..waaaah..kya nagma hai...kya soch aur jasbaat hain...daad
Shukriya aruji....
Aapki daad qbul hai....
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Tere khush rakhney ko jo aati hai sa’oobat hamein (sa'oobat = difficulty)
utna toh dushwaar nahin hai gham-e-qurbat hamein

Bhigii aankhon me dekhi hamne woh neemkash nazar (neemkash = half drawn)
tashnaakaam rakhey ho jab aaee hai furqat hamein (tashnaakaam = thirsty)

Kaaghazee hai rishtaa mera tere dil se bandhaa hua (kaaghazee = delicate)
sakhtee-kashaan me kahiin na aa jaaye ghurbat hamein

Teri galli me dafn karta hoon mere shikast dil ko
shaayad teri aaghosh me aake miley ulfat hamein

Ae ham-safiiron mere dildaar ke qareeb mat jaanaa (ham-safiiron = co-inhabitants)
kahin tumhari shuhood me na mil jaaye hurmat hamein (hurmat = respect)

Dekho “Safeer” ko gar tum ees kuchey se ghuzarte kahin
toh yeh nahin ki kiya hai aaj dilbar ne rukhsat hamein


~ Safeer
Awesome Adil bhai......................
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Awesome Adil bhai......................
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Thank you, DP ji.............
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