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Smile Rajveer ji ke saath Guftagu - 1st November 2014, 03:24 PM

Namaskaar Dosto
Es baar guftafu meiN hamare saath honge Janab Rajveer ji

yeh SDC ke 8 saal purane member hai, bahut acche aur naram-dil ensaaN hai aur behad umda shayar hai, ham enko bahut acchi tarah jaante hai aur chahte hai ki aap sabko bhi mokka miley enke bare meiN jaan.ne ka aur ham sabko enki shayri se bahut kuch seekhne ka mokka bhi mileyga.

Rajveer ji, aapka teh-e-dil se es guftagu meiN suwagat hai…hame yakeen hai ki aap bhi es guftaguu ka bharpoor lutf uthaNge.

Sabse pehle to aap ham sabko apne bare batayeN, aapki study, aapki family, aapka kaarobaar etc etc.

Aur haan es mahine aapki profile meiN apni photo bhi lagni chahiye

Aapki tareef meiN aapka hi ek sher pesh hai:

“taaron kay sehar main basa lunga dunia teri khatir,
wahan na kisi ka khauf hoga na kisi ka dar hoga,
zamanay walo tum bhee dekho anjaam-e- mohabat,
yahan jo bhee wafa karega uska yahi hashar hoga”




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1st November 2014, 05:16 PM

Welcome Rajeev ji

ap ko yahan dekh kar bohut khushi hui.

Aap sunita didi ke sawaalon ka jawaab dijiye tab tak main apne sawaalon ki fehrist lekar haazir hoti hun.

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1st November 2014, 08:27 PM

A warm welcome to rajveer jee......badi dili tammanna thi aapko jaanne.kee...aaj khuda ne vo bhi poori kar dee....bas ab aap jaldi se jawaab dena shuru kariye...jald hee kuch sawalo ke saath main fir haazir hota hu...tb tak ke kiye liye...alvida



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interview ke katghare me hamm aapka swaagat karte hain Raj saahab.....

aasha karta hoon aapka ye safar khushgawaar guzre.... aapke aane ka intzaar rahega

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1st November 2014, 09:38 PM

aa jao babeo, vaari lag gayi aa

khush am ded Rajveer bhai

mazaa aayega is thread par


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Raj bhai kaha gayab ho aapka besabri se intezaar hai..jald hi aaiye, bahut se sawaal gudgudaa rahe hai..



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ap ko yahan dekh kar bohut khushi hui.

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Muafi chahungi mere padne mein thodi galti ho gayi aur maine Rajeev samajh liya.

Rajveer ji aapka bohut bohut swagat hai, ummeed hai aapke baare mein jaanne ko aur bohut kuch seekhne ko milega.


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Hazir hoon dosto - 2nd November 2014, 04:12 AM

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Es baar guftafu meiN hamare saath honge Janab Rajveer ji

yeh SDC ke 8 saal purane member hai, bahut acche aur naram-dil ensaaN hai aur behad umda shayar hai, ham enko bahut acchi tarah jaante hai aur chahte hai ki aap sabko bhi mokka miley enke bare meiN jaan.ne ka aur ham sabko enki shayri se bahut kuch seekhne ka mokka bhi mileyga.

Rajveer ji, aapka teh-e-dil se es guftagu meiN suwagat hai…hame yakeen hai ki aap bhi es guftaguu ka bharpoor lutf uthaNge.

Sabse pehle to aap ham sabko apne bare batayeN, aapki study, aapki family, aapka kaarobaar etc etc.

Aur haan es mahine aapki profile meiN apni photo bhi lagni chahiye

Aapki tareef meiN aapka hi ek sher pesh hai:

“taaron kay sehar main basa lunga dunia teri khatir,
wahan na kisi ka khauf hoga na kisi ka dar hoga,
zamanay walo tum bhee dekho anjaam-e- mohabat,
yahan jo bhee wafa karega uska yahi hashar hoga”



Na kami thii dosto.n kii na kami thii dushmano.n ki
hame to khuda se jo bhii milla bass be hisaab milla....

Sabhi dosto.n ko Raj ka pyaar bhara adaab namaskaar or Sat Sri Akaal ji...main is pariwaar ka bhut arse se member hoon kabhi kabhi masroofiyat ki wajha se main is bazam se gair hazir bhii raha...aaj sunita ji mujhe aap sab ke beech mein le aii hai.n to mai.n bhii hazir hoon or wada karta hoon ki apni samjh ke mutabik jaise bhii aapke sawaal honge unka imaandaari se jawaab dene ki koshish karunga...haan ek baat bhut khaas dosto ik insaan hoon main koii farishta nahi hoon agar mera koii bhii jawaab kisi dost ko na-gawaar guzre to muaafi ka talabgaar rahu.n ga...sunita jii aapko dil se shukria kehta hoon jo aap mujhe dosto ki mehfil mei.n le ke aii ho..to aaiye shuru karte hai aapke sawaal or is nacheez ke jawaab...


Q.1.Sabse pehle to aap ham sabko apne bare batayeN, aapki study, aapki family, aapka kaarobaar etc etc.

Ans. Dosto mera poora or official naam hai..Jatinder Pal Singh or Rajveer mera potery ka naam hai.main kush maheene pehle Phagwara(punjab) Mein raha karta thaa or last 4 months se mai.n USA move ho gyaa hoon.dosto main punjabi hoon or sikh hoon. dosto main graduate hoon(commerce) mein ,maine Guru Nanak College Phagwara se apna college poora kiya hai. mere pariwaar mei.n meri biwi Kamalpreet or teen bache do betiya.n or ek beta Hai.bari beti Satinpreet Hotel management ki degree kar rahi hai chhoti beti 9th mein hai or beta 7th mein hai.mera apna foreign exchange ka business hai.bass Waheguru ji ki mehar hai.


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ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)

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interview ke katghare me hamm aapka swaagat karte hain Raj saahab.....

aasha karta hoon aapka ye safar khushgawaar guzre.... aapke aane ka intzaar rahega

Shaad....
sameer bhai kaise ho? aap to un logo mein se hain jinse bhut kush seekha hai maine....khush rahiye...Raj..


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Mast bhai aapko dekh dekh kar bhut kush seekha hai maine....janaab banda hazir hai...or sarika ji koii baat nahi galti lagg hii jaati hai similar naamo se...Raj...


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vaisay tou mainay bahut der baad shayri.com par shirkat ki lekin achanak hi aapki guftgu padne ko mili. hairani hui k aap phagwara se heiN.kyunki mein bhi phagwara se hi huN.gaushala bazar mein Indian tailors k naam se dukan,yo k ab bhi hai vahiN apne jeewan ka 2008 se pehle ka sara time guzara.2008 se New york meiN aa gya.so badi khushi hui aap k baray jaan kar.aap k baray meiN sari guftgu parhuNga or fir aap ko likhuNga.

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Shayri ki shuruaat aur lagaav kaise hua..koi kissa ya kahaani iske peeche jo aap sab se share karnaa chahenge

tuhade jawaab de intezaar'ich

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lijiyee phir tuhade lyee agla sawaal

Shayri ki shuruaat aur lagaav kaise hua..koi kissa ya kahaani iske peeche jo aap sab se share karnaa chahenge

tuhade jawaab de intezaar'ich

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Mast bhai main is swaal ke intezaar me hii thaa...janaab mujhe shuru se hii shayrii se bhut lagaav thaa mai.n aksar hamare punjabi ke poet shiv kumar batalvi, sadhu singh hamdard, bhai veer singh ji, prof. Mohan singh ji, inko bhut dil se parha karta thaa or punjabi ke bhut makbool novlist hai.n Nanak singh unke novel parhta thaa mujhe poetry ki janib Nanak singh ji ke novel me ek share thaa...Alvidah aii kafile waalo mujhe ab chhor do, meri kismat mei.n likhi thii dasht ki veeraaniya...is ne mora thaa...uske baad mai.n jagjit singh or Ghulam ali sahib ko sun ne lagg gyaa...phir ye latt mujhe poori tarha se lagg gyii...mujhe sudarshan faqir sahib ki shayri bhut achi lagti hai...or bhi urdu ke bhut se shayar hai.n mai.n jin se mutasir hoon...Raj...


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Main aapse yeh nahi puuchungi ki shayri.com par apka pasandida shayar koun hai, kyunki sach to yeh ki jis waqt jiska kahaa pasand aajaye wahi acha lagta hai toh mera sawaal hai ki yahaa kiski shayri se aap relate kar paate hai.


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Main aapse yeh nahi puuchungi ki shayri.com par apka pasandida shayar koun hai, kyunki sach to yeh ki jis waqt jiska kahaa pasand aajaye wahi acha lagta hai toh mera sawaal hai ki yahaa kiski shayri se aap relate kar paate hai.

Sarika ji bhut acha sawaal pucha aapne mujhe maikash ji, aadil ji (safeer) , ahmad bhai, zaraa ji,sameer ji or mujhe apne kahe huye bhi kaii ashaar ache lagte hai.n...Raj...


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Mast bhai main is swaal ke intezaar me hii thaa...janaab mujhe shuru se hii shayrii se bhut lagaav thaa mai.n aksar hamare punjabi ke poet shiv kumar batalvi, sadhu singh hamdard, bhai veer singh ji, prof. Mohan singh ji, inko bhut dil se parha karta thaa or punjabi ke bhut makbool novlist hai.n Nanak singh unke novel parhta thaa mujhe poetry ki janib Nanak singh ji ke novel me ek share thaa...Alvidah aii kafile waalo mujhe ab chhor do, meri kismat mei.n likhi thii dasht ki veeraaniya...is ne mora thaa...uske baad mai.n jagjit singh or Ghulam ali sahib ko sun ne lagg gyaa...phir ye latt mujhe poori tarha se lagg gyii...mujhe sudarshan faqir sahib ki shayri bhut achi lagti hai...or bhi urdu ke bhut se shayar hai.n mai.n jin se mutasir hoon...Raj...
Bahut khoob shiv kumar batalvi was a legend...Most of his work was exemplary

Maae ni maae
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BirhoN di raRak pave!
Adhi adhi raateeN -
UTH roun moye mitraaN nu,
Maae sahnu neeNd na pave!

This still gives me goosebumps....

Ab baari agle sawaal ki bhaisaab taiyaar ho tusi

Yun to is baat se sab waaqif hai ki nazm/ghazalon ka ab woh asardaar alam nahi raha jo kuch arse pehle tak hua karta tha, chahtaa hoon aapke khayalat bhi jaane jaaye is mudde par?



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Rajveer ji, aik chotta sa sawaal lekar hazir hu, aap hame bachpan ke bare mein bataye ki aapka bachpan kaisa tha ?
aap kis tarah ke bacche thy... shararti, pangebaaj ya phir bade shareef?


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Maae ni maae
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Adhi adhi raateeN -
UTH roun moye mitraaN nu,
Maae sahnu neeNd na pave!

This still gives me goosebumps....

Ab baari agle sawaal ki bhaisaab taiyaar ho tusi

Yun to is baat se sab waaqif hai ki nazm/ghazalon ka ab woh asardaar alam nahi raha jo kuch arse pehle tak hua karta tha, chahtaa hoon aapke khayalat bhi jaane jaaye is mudde par?

Ji haan mast bhaii mai.n aapki is baat se100% sehmat hoon..aaj ka daur electronic media ka daur hai or isee wajha se ham log kitaabo.n se bhut door ho gye hai.n or doosre Jagjit singh ji jaise log jinho ne kaafi hadd tak gazal or nazam mei.n rooh funki hai wo aaj hamare beech nahi rahe, yahi wajha hai ham gazal or nazam se kaafi door ho gye hai.n...ab agar mai.n apni hii misaal loo.n to jagjit ji kii gaiyakii ne mujhe gazal ka mureed banaya hai...or shiv kumar ji ki baat hii alag hai punjabi sahit ko jisne apni aaho.n or ashko.n se seencha hai...lakin yaha.n main shayri.com ki tareef kiye bina bilkul bhii nahi reh sakta jo aaj bhii gazal or nazam mei.n rooh foonk rahi hai...hats off....Raj...


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Rajveer ji, aik chotta sa sawaal lekar hazir hu, aap hame bachpan ke bare mein bataye ki aapka bachpan kaisa tha ?
aap kis tarah ke bacche thy... shararti, pangebaaj ya phir bade shareef?

Hahahaha sunita ji gud one!!!!! Bachpan to wo time hai jiske guzar jaane ke baad aksar insaan usko wapis bulana chahta hai...mera bachpan bhut mazedaar thaa ...mera bachpan bhut natkhat thaa mai.n shareef bilkul bhii nahi thaa bhut shararti thaa mai.n titliya.n maine pakri hai.n barish ke paani mei.n kashtiya.n maine chalaii hai.n cycle ka tyre maine bhut chalaya dande ke saath,jamun or aam ke ped par char kar or gir kar bhut maze kiye or chot bhii khaii patang baazi or kanche bhut khele may june ke maheene mei.n jab log dopehar ko ghar se nahi nikalte mai.n ghar mei.n rehta thaa mere mata ji pakar pakar ke mujhe andar dalte thay unke sote hii mai.n phir bhaag jata thaa ...bhut sataya main apni mata ji ko..lakin haan ek baat pakki hai mai.n study mei.n bhii no. 1 thaa...cricket bhut khelii fast bowler or opner batsman huaa karta thaa apni team ka...kull mila ke bhut yaadgaar bachpan thaa mera...Raj...


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apne bachpan ki koi aisi shararat jo aaj bhi aap nahi bhool paaye.

koi aisi baat jo aaj jab aap apne bacchoN ko mana karte hai aur usi waqt apna bachpan yaad aata hai ki maiN bhi to karta tha.

aap kitne bhai-behan hai.

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janaab sandhu saab ustaad ji ki haal chaal ne baabeo? tusee menu khush am ded kiha so shukar guzaar haan...koshish karanga ki is thread ch jiyada sawaala da jawaab de saka...thuade sawaala da intezaar rahega...thuada khadim Raj....

SSA janaab,

bhai "ustaad" mat kaha karo mujh na'laayiq ki itni aukaat nahiiN hai

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raj jee...bahut accha laga aapke bare me jaankar.....
Ek sawaal mere pitare se bhi..
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Good question Arvind bhai...intezaar hai jawaab ki



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[QUOTE=sunita virender;471089][B][SIZE="3"][COLOR="Blue"]apne bachpan ki koi aisi shararat jo aaj bhi aap nahi bhool paaye.

koi aisi baat jo aaj jab aap apne bacchoN ko mana karte hai aur usi waqt apna bachpan yaad aata hai ki maiN bhi to karta tha.

aap kitne bhai-behan hai.

aapne mom-dad ke bare meiN bataye ki wo kya karte hai...kahan rehte hai...India ya aapke saath
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Bachpan ki ek gustaakhi kabhi nahi bhulti mujhe bhut bari gustaakhi thii...mere mata ji ki ek bhuaa(mere nana ji ki behan) huaa karti thii to wo kush roz se bimaar chal rahi thii, tab meri umr koii 12 saal ke kareeb rahi hogi..maine bol diya ghar pe ki unka intekaal ho gyaa hai main ghar ke bahar khel raha thaa achanak mama ji(bhuaa ji ka beta) aiye or mujhe kaha ki mai.n jaldi mei.n hoo.n tum behan ji(mere mata ji) ko bata dena ki mata ji(mere mata ji ke bhuaa ji) ka intekaal ho gyaa hai maine or bhii kaii jagha suneha dena hai so mai.n ander nahi aa sakta tum bata dena.bas phir kyaa thaa ghar mei.n matam shuru ho gyaa..mere mata ji bhaage bhaage apni doosri bhuaa ji ke pass pounche dekha waha sab thik hai to unho ne pucha aapko nahi pata chala ki beant kaur(bhuaa ji ka naam) bhuaa ji ka intekaal ho gyaa hai?unka beta mere ghar aiya thaa to wo bahar hi joge (yani mai.n) ko bata ke chala gyaa..or kaha ki masi hi(mere mata ji ke doosre bhuaa ji) ko bhii bata dena mere paas jiyada time nahi hai...to waha bhii matam shutu ho gyaa..aas paas ke log or rishtedaar aane lagge rote peet te huye...un dino mere mata ji ke dada ji(yani bhuaa ji ke pita ji) ho ki doosre bhuaa ji ke paas hi rehte thay wo bhi gham zadaa hi gye.. meri himakat dekhiye itna hone ke waabjood bhi maine sach nahi bola...un dino phone bhut kam hote thay gar hote thay to sirf post office mei.n hote thay ..to mere mata ji ke fufar ji ne jab phone kar ke pucha to unho ne bataya ki mai.n kab aiya phagware or joge se kab mila or mata ji bilkul thik hai.n...bass phir kyaa thaa meri jo shamat aiii wo bata nahi sakta...baap re baap...to ye thii meri bachpan ki shararat...

Sunita ji is mamle mei.n bhut lucky hoo.n mere bache bilkul bhii shararti nahi hai.n wo kush aisa karte hii nahi ki unko rokna pare...wo apni maa jaise hai.n...bhut bibe bache hai.n..

Ham do bhaii hai.n wo mujh se sirf ek saal chhota hai wo bhi yahi USA mei.n hii hai...bhut gr8 hai mera bhaii...pita ji ka intekaal ho gyaa thaa koii 15 saal pehle or mata ji saath hii hai.n...Raj..


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Arvind bhai mera strong point hai ki mai.n bhut jiyada emotional hoon or dekhiye yahi meri sabse bari kamzori bhii hai...emotionally black mail kar bhii leta hoo.n or bhut jaldi emotionally blk mail ho bhii jata hoo.n...Raj...


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hmmm...aapne bahut tafseel se jawaab diya mere sawaal ka...accha lga jaankar ki aapke bacche aap jaise pange-baaj nahi hai

bachpan ke baad ke waqt ka apna aik alag hi rang hota hai, to hame apne clg time ke kuch haseen lahme yaad karke unke bare meiN bhi kuch bataye...aur yeh bhi bataye ki aapne pehli shayri kaun si likhi thi aur uske ehsaas kis ko soch kar aapke kagaz par chap gye thy


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Arvind bhai mera strong point hai ki mai.n bhut jiyada emotional hoon or dekhiye yahi meri sabse bari kamzori bhii hai...emotionally black mail kar bhii leta hoo.n or bhut jaldi emotionally blk mail ho bhii jata hoo.n...Raj...
Raj jee aapne bilkul sahi btaya...emotional hona strong point bhi hai aur weak bhi.....mera bhi yehi haal hai....
My next question is ...jab conditions aapke viprit ho tb aap kaise react karte hain...?



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Raj jee aapne bilkul sahi btaya...emotional hona strong point bhi hai aur weak bhi.....mera bhi yehi haal hai....
My next question is ...jab conditions aapke viprit ho tb aap kaise react karte hain...?
Arvind bhai ek ek kar ke pitaare mein se sawaal nikaal rahe hai...aacha hai..

Raj bhai shukriyaa aapke pehle jawaab ka socha aru bhai ke baad apne sawaal ka number laga lun.

Next question:

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hmmm...aapne bahut tafseel se jawaab diya mere sawaal ka...accha lga jaankar ki aapke bacche aap jaise pange-baaj nahi hai

bachpan ke baad ke waqt ka apna aik alag hi rang hota hai, to hame apne clg time ke kuch haseen lahme yaad karke unke bare meiN bhi kuch bataye...aur yeh bhi bataye ki aapne pehli shayri kaun si likhi thi aur uske ehsaas kis ko soch kar aapke kagaz par chap gye thy
sunita ji college mei.n sach maaniye maine sirf or sirf study kii or kush nahi kiyaa....economic halaat kush jiyada anookool nahi thay so jawani study or kaam mei.n hii guzar gyii or jab tak ehsaas huaa ki ham bhii jawaan ho gye hai.n to jawani nikal chuki thii....so kush khaas nahi jawani ke baare mei.n bass itna hii kahunga ki....poh dii chan ni gareeb dii jawani, bina maane langh jaandi....

pehli shayrii maine 14 saal kii umr mei.n likhii thii jab mai.n 9th mei.n partha thaa Guru Nanak Dev Ji ka gurpurab thaa to jaise kii aapko maloom hii hai raat ko bacho ka kavi darbaar lagta hai to maine Guru Nanak Dev Ji ke baare mei.n hii apni pehli poetry likhi thii or unko hii soch kar likhi thii...Raj..


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Raj jee aapne bilkul sahi btaya...emotional hona strong point bhi hai aur weak bhi.....mera bhi yehi haal hai....
My next question is ...jab conditions aapke viprit ho tb aap kaise react karte hain...?
arvind ji sach bolu to opposite conditions mei.n aksar pehle to ghabra hii jata hoon ki ye kyaa huaa ab kyaa hoga...to aise mei.n meri jeevan saathi meri patni mera poora saath deti hai..ham milkar discus karte hai.n or koii na koii hall nikaal hii lete hai.n thanks to God ki itnii achii jeevan saathii dii mujhko...Raj..


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Sarika ji bhut acha sawaal pucha aapne mujhe maikash ji, aadil ji (safeer) , ahmad bhai, zaraa ji,sameer ji or mujhe apne kahe huye bhi kaii ashaar ache lagte hai.n...Raj...
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Arvind bhai ek ek kar ke pitaare mein se sawaal nikaal rahe hai...aacha hai..

Raj bhai shukriyaa aapke pehle jawaab ka socha aru bhai ke baad apne sawaal ka number laga lun.

Next question:

Aapki koi aisi nazm/ghazal jo aapke dil ke behad qareeb ho aur agar usse juda koi qissa ho to hum sab se share karein

aapka apnaa


Mast bhai bara mast sawaal puchaa aapne..bhai waise to maa ko apne sabhi bache pyare hote hai.n kiyon ki usne har bache ko apni kokh mei.n rakha hota hai...lakin kush bache apni maa se kush jiyada hii pyar le lete hai.n kiyon ki wo khud apni maa ko bhut pyar dete hai.n...aisa hii ek shayar ke saath hota hai..waise to usko apna har qalaam har ashaar azeez hota hai lakin kush qalaam usko jiyada hii maqbooliyat hasil karwaate hai.n aisa hii ek qalaam mera hai wo ek nazam hai jo mere dil ke bhut qareeb hai us nazam ka naam hai 'WO EK PAL' is nazam ne mujhe bhut wah waahi dilwaii hai bhut saraha logo ne meri is nazam ko...ye nazam maine tab likhii thii jab meri mangni huii thii or mai.n apni shrimati ji ko pehli baar milaa thaa...bhut romantic ehsaas that dil mei.n or maine unko is nazam kii shaqal mei.n kagaz ke seene pe darz kiya thaa to lijiye wahi nazam pesh-e-kihdmat hai...


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kaash! mujhe mil jaye to zindagi mei.n bhar luu.n,
wo ek pal jab hum akale ho.n,
wo ek pal jab tanhai gunguna rahi ho,
mere badan se teri khushboo aa rahi ho,
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teri palko.n par umeedo.n ke laakho.n chiraag jale ho.n,
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wo ek pal jab khol ke baahai.n tum le rahi ho angrai,
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wo ek pal jab teri payal chupke se kush bole,
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wo ek pal jab hum ek doosre mei.n ho samaye,
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wo ek pal kaash! mujhe mil jaye,
us pal ko apni zindagi mei.n bhar luu.n,
safar ik umar ka pal mei.n tamaam kar luu.n,
us pal mei.n hii jee ke ussi pal mei.n marr luu.n,
tujhe baaho.n mei.n sameit ke khud bikhar luu.n,
tere saparsh se khud ko chandan kar luu.n,
us anmol pal ko tere hee naam kar duu.n.......tere hee naam kar duu.n......tere hee naam kar duu.n.........


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arvind ji sach bolu to opposite conditions mei.n aksar pehle to ghabra hii jata hoon ki ye kyaa huaa ab kyaa hoga...to aise mei.n meri jeevan saathi meri patni mera poora saath deti hai..ham milkar discus karte hai.n or koii na koii hall nikaal hii lete hai.n thanks to God ki itnii achii jeevan saathii dii mujhko...Raj..
Raj jee..aapke sabhi jawaab padkar bahut accha lag raha hai...aapne sabhi jawaab dil se aur sacchai se diye hain....its appreciating...
My next question is...
1.Kin conditions me shayri karte hain aap...means koi khaas factor ya kabhi bhi likh lete hain...

2. Kis feeling pe jyada likhte hain aap...dard, ishq etc.

3. Kya humorus shayri bhi karte hain....agar haan to best share karein.

4. Kya kabhi kisi kavi sammelan mein participate kiya kai...

5. Shayri.com kee aapki zindagi mein kya ehmiyat hai..



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