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****registaan**** - 4th December 2006, 04:39 PM
Shayri ki duniya k dosto ko mera parnaam..! aaj bahut dino baas kuch likhne ka man bana...so aapki nazer paish karne aa gaye...apke jawab ki muntjil...


Ajeeb Baichaini hai sine me..
dil me tufaan sa uthta hai..
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ankho me registan machalta hai..

dil k bheeter Jha.n tak b nazer jati hai..
andhera hi andhera dikhta hai..
ghabra k karvat le leta hu..
jb halka-halka sa kuch dard
sine me uthta hai...

Sine ko hatho se sehla leta hu..
jab gam-e-dil ka pyala chhalakta hai..

Kal kismat ne raahe badli thi..
aaj ashko ne saath chhoda hai..
Kal tum bhi saath chhod jaoge..
fir bas tanhai ka dera hai..

aaj ankho me he registaan basa..
kal gam-e-lashkar ne registaan ho jana hai...

Ajeeb Baichaini hai sine me..
dil me tufaan sa uthta hai..
rukhsaaro pe ajeeb sa dard he..
ankho me registan machalta hai..

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DIL KI TANHAAI KO AASHAAR BANA LETE HAI....
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4th December 2006, 04:52 PM
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Shayri ki duniya k dosto ko mera parnaam..! aaj bahut dino baas kuch likhne ka man bana...so aapki nazer paish karne aa gaye...apke jawab ki muntjil...


Ajeeb Baichaini hai sine me..
dil me tufaan sa uthta hai..
rukhsaaro pe ajeeb sa dard he..
ankho me registan machalta hai..

dil k bheeter Jha.n tak b nazer jati hai..
andhera hi andhera dikhta hai..
ghabra k karvat le leta hu..
jb halka-halka sa kuch dard
sine me uthta hai...

Sine ko hatho se sehla leta hu..
jab gam-e-dil ka pyala chhalakta hai..

Kal kismat ne raahe badli thi..
aaj ashko ne saath chhoda hai..
Kal tum bhi saath chhod jaoge..
fir bas tanhai ka dera hai..

aaj ankho me he registaan basa..
kal gam-e-lashkar ne registaan ho jana hai...

Ajeeb Baichaini hai sine me..
dil me tufaan sa uthta hai..
rukhsaaro pe ajeeb sa dard he..
ankho me registan machalta hai..

gam-e-lashkar

dost tumhara dard aur bechaiani samaj sakti hoon. dua karti hoon ki meri dost kabhi registaan na baney. kushiya hamesha ke liye nahi rahti to phir bhalla dard bhi kyu raheyga hamesha ke liye. har roj din dhalta hai aur ek naya sabera aata hai to hum umeed kyu chodey. yeh dard bhi jayegey ek din aur kushiya jaroor aayeygi.

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bahot khub - 4th December 2006, 05:00 PM
wahidRahi ka aadab

bahot khub likha hai janab
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YE KHAS APKE LIYE-------
CHAL BAAT LETE HAI GAM APANE AI "LASHKAR"
MAI ASHK BAN JAU TO DARD BANJA.
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JINDGI EK SULAGTI CHINGARI HAI SAHIR,
NA JALKAR SHOLA BANTI HAI,NA BUZKAR RAAKH
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bhut khub - 4th December 2006, 06:07 PM
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Shayri ki duniya k dosto ko mera parnaam..! aaj bahut dino baas kuch likhne ka man bana...so aapki nazer paish karne aa gaye...apke jawab ki muntjil...


Ajeeb Baichaini hai sine me..
dil me tufaan sa uthta hai..
rukhsaaro pe ajeeb sa dard he..
ankho me registan machalta hai..

dil k bheeter Jha.n tak b nazer jati hai..
andhera hi andhera dikhta hai..
ghabra k karvat le leta hu..
jb halka-halka sa kuch dard
sine me uthta hai...

Sine ko hatho se sehla leta hu..
jab gam-e-dil ka pyala chhalakta hai..

Kal kismat ne raahe badli thi..
aaj ashko ne saath chhoda hai..
Kal tum bhi saath chhod jaoge..
fir bas tanhai ka dera hai..

aaj ankho me he registaan basa..
kal gam-e-lashkar ne registaan ho jana hai...

Ajeeb Baichaini hai sine me..
dil me tufaan sa uthta hai..
rukhsaaro pe ajeeb sa dard he..
ankho me registan machalta hai..

gam-e-lashkar
sunita ji aapko raj ka namaskaar.....bhut pyare ehsaaso ko behtreen lafzon me sajakar pesh kiya aapne meri daad hazir hai.....yu hee apni kalam ki taqat ka ehsaas dilate rehna......take care........raj.......

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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4th December 2006, 06:15 PM
gam-e-lashkar ji ko mera namskaar


aapne is kalaam ko bahot hi khub apne ehsaso ke zariye sajaya hai ,har ek lafz dil ko chhu gaye aapko padhna bahot achha lagta hai har bar ek alag se andaz-e-bayan me aap nazar aate hai bas yuhi aap likhte rahiye, khus rahiye


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