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16th July 2016, 05:12 PM
Shayri ki duniya ke tamaam khawateen-o-hazraat ko nacheez ka salaam, SDC shayri ka vo anjuman hai jaha humari koshish rehti hai ki bazm mein naye tasavur ko bazm-e-sukhan
mein aapke saamne laaya jaaye. Isi khayaal ke saath haazir hai is baar bhi ek naye takhayyul ke saath. Is thread par post karne ki hidaayaton se aapki waaqfiyat karvaa dete hai.
1. Yahan aapko ek misraa-e-oola diyaa jaayega aur aap sab ko us oola ke rabt mein misra-e-saani likhni hogi.
2. Ek oola ke saath 5 saani likhi jaayegi ya yun kahiye ki 5 sher banenge aur kyunki shayar alag honge khayaal alag honge sher bhi ek dusre se alag hi padhne milenge
3. 5 sher muqammal hone ke baad nayi misra-e-oola di jaayegi.
4. Halaki misraa--e-oola ki behr di jaayegi par yahan behr ki paabandi nahi hai.
To aaiye der kis baat ki hai, mehfil ka aaghaaz karte hai , Jigar moradabadi sahab ke ek sher ko dekhte hai
Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
wo zindagi to mohabbat ki zindagi na hui
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chaliye isi sher ki misraa-e-oola ko lekar silsilaa aage badhaaya jaaye
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16th July 2016, 09:55 PM
Bohat hi achha thread ki ibtida hui hai
Jigar sahab ke iss sher pe apni ek mukhtasar koshish meri taraf se pesh-e-khidmat hai
Teri khushi se agar gham mai bhi khushi na hui
Ke ab nijaat- e -gham- e- dil mujhe kabhi na hui
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17th July 2016, 09:41 AM
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Shayri ki duniya ke tamaam khawateen-o-hazraat ko nacheez ka salaam, SDC shayri ka vo anjuman hai jaha humari koshish rehti hai ki bazm mein naye tasavur ko bazm-e-sukhan
mein aapke saamne laaya jaaye. Isi khayaal ke saath haazir hai is baar bhi ek naye takhayyul ke saath. Is thread par post karne ki hidaayaton se aapki waaqfiyat karvaa dete hai.
1. Yahan aapko ek misraa-e-oola diyaa jaayega aur aap sab ko us oola ke rabt mein misra-e-saani likhni hogi.
2. Ek oola ke saath 5 saani likhi jaayegi ya yun kahiye ki 5 sher banenge aur kyunki shayar alag honge khayaal alag honge sher bhi ek dusre se alag hi padhne milenge
3. 5 sher muqammal hone ke baad nayi misra-e-oola di jaayegi.
4. Halaki misraa--e-oola ki behr di jaayegi par yahan behr ki paabandi nahi hai.
To aaiye der kis baat ki hai, mehfil ka aaghaaz karte hai , Jigar moradabadi sahab ke ek sher ko dekhte hai
Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
wo zindagi to mohabbat ki zindagi na hui
Behr:
1212 / 1122 / 1212 / 112
( mujtas musamman maḳhbun maḥzuf)
chaliye isi sher ki misraa-e-oola ko lekar silsilaa aage badhaaya jaaye
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waah....anu aapka behad shukriya bahut hee achcha thread shuru kiya hai..sdc ki raunak me izafa to hoga hee hame bhi kuch seekhne ko milega..
..naye silsile ki bahut bahut mubarakbaad tamaam doston ko..aap sab ke sath ki ummeed karte hain ham....
Apki dost
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17th July 2016, 09:42 AM
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Bohat hi achha thread ki ibtida hui hai
Jigar sahab ke iss sher pe apni ek mukhtasar koshish meri taraf se pesh-e-khidmat hai
Teri khushi se agar gham mai bhi khushi na hui
Ke ab nijaat- e -gham- e- dil mujhe kabhi na hui
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Waahh...kya kahne..
bahut khoob koshish mujahid sahab...
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17th July 2016, 11:38 AM
Chaliye ek koshish meri janib se..dekhiyega..
Teri khushi se agar gham me bhi khushi na huyi
Bharam tha dil ka muhabbat ise kabhi na huyi....
Madhu..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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19th July 2016, 10:54 PM
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Bohat hi achha thread ki ibtida hui hai
Jigar sahab ke iss sher pe apni ek mukhtasar koshish meri taraf se pesh-e-khidmat hai
Teri khushi se agar gham mai bhi khushi na hui
Ke ab nijaat- e -gham- e- dil mujhe kabhi na hui
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Umdaa sher bhai...alag rukh liya hai aapke is sher ne, mazaa aa gaya
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Chaliye ek koshish meri janib se..dekhiyega..
Teri khushi se agar gham me bhi khushi na huyi
Bharam tha dil ka muhabbat ise kabhi na huyi....
Madhu..
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Waah is sher mein shayar ki khud se guftuguu mein shikayat kya kehne Madhu mazaa aa gaya, bahut khoob
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19th July 2016, 11:19 PM
Chaliye ek sher jigar sahab ki tarz pe ban paaya hai bazm mein pesh kar raha hoon...
Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
khudaaya humse kabhi aisi aashiqui na hui
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20th July 2016, 08:50 AM
Jigar sahab ke misre par bohat khoob misre ka rad-e-amal aaya hai
Mubarak ho madhu sahiba aur mast sahab
Baaqi membraan se bhi darkhwast hai bazm mai shirkat karey
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Waah is sher mein shayar ki khud se guftuguu mein shikayat kya kehne Madhu mazaa aa gaya, bahut khoob
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zarra nawazi ka shukriya anu...
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Chaliye ek sher jigar sahab ki tarz pe ban paaya hai bazm mein pesh kar raha hoon...
Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
khudaaya humse kabhi aisi aashiqui na hui
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waah!! bahut khoob ............................
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21st July 2016, 10:48 PM
waah! Waah
Bohut he acha thread shuru hua hai iske liye MODs ko bohut bohut mubarakbaad...
ek adna si koshish main bhi kar rahi hu, bataiyega kaisi lagi
Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
To sach hai mere dost dosti na hui
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waah! Waah
Bohut he acha thread shuru hua hai iske liye MODs ko bohut bohut mubarakbaad...
ek adna si koshish main bhi kar rahi hu, bataiyega kaisi lagi
Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
To sach hai mere dost dosti na hui
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Kon aaya ki nigahon me chamak jaag uthi......
Yahi gana zabaan pe aaya tumhe dekh ke.....mubarakbaad ka dil se shukriya aur aapki aamad ka bhi...
Bahut khoob sher kaha hai..waahh....
sath deti raho..
Likhti raho...
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23rd July 2016, 05:39 AM
vah buhet acha silsila shuru kia hey mast saheb
Sab assaar buhet achey likhey hai sab ne
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vah buhet acha silsila shuru kia hey mast saheb
Sab assaar buhet achey likhey hai sab ne
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Sabaa ji shukriya, umeed hai aap bhi jald hi bazm mein ek haseen sher lekar shirkat karengi...intezaar mein..
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waah! Waah
Bohut he acha thread shuru hua hai iske liye MODs ko bohut bohut mubarakbaad...
ek adna si koshish main bhi kar rahi hu, bataiyega kaisi lagi
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To sach hai mere dost dosti na hui
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Bahut umdaa sher....daad qubool farmaiye
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waah!! bahut khoob ............................
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Jigar sahab ke misre par bohat khoob misre ka rad-e-amal aaya hai
Mubarak ho madhu sahiba aur mast sahab
Baaqi membraan se bhi darkhwast hai bazm mai shirkat karey
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nawaazish janaab umeed hai aage bhi khaak alfaaz aapki bepanaah muhabbat ke haqdaar bane...
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ek sher aana baki hai...saba ji...shaad sahab...sunita di...aap sab bhi shirkat karein hame khushi hogi....
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Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
Dua me hath to hain, dil se bandgi na huyi...
Madhu..
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Bahut khoob Madhu umdaa sher pesh kiya hai aapne...
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Bahut umdaa Jigar sahab ke tarz pe aap sab ki koshish qaabil-e-tareef rahi aur har sher mein ek alag khayaal nazar aaya...bahut khoob doston...
Teri khushi se agar gham mai bhi khushi na hui
Ke ab nijaat- e -gham- e- dil mujhe kabhi na hui (Mujahid)
Teri khushi se agar gham me bhi khushi na huyi
Bharam tha dil ka muhabbat ise kabhi na huyi (Madhu)
Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
khudaaya humse kabhi aisi aashiqui na hui (Mast)
Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
To sach hai mere dost dosti na hui (Masti)
Teri khushi se agar gham mein bhi khushi na hui
Dua me hath to hain, dil se bandgi na huyi (Madhu)
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Maufi ka talabgaar hoon doston, meri masrufiyat ki wajh se mehfil tham si gayi thi. Agle sher ki taraf rukh karte hai umeed hai Shahzad Ahmed sahab ke is sher pe aapke umdaa sher humhe padhne ka mauka naseeb hoga.
chhup chhup ke kahāñ tak tire dīdār mileñge
ai parda-nashīñ ab sar-e-bāzār mileñge
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Behr: Hazaj musamman akhrab makfuf mahzuf
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Maufi ka talabgaar hoon doston, meri masrufiyat ki wajh se mehfil tham si gayi thi. Agle sher ki taraf rukh karte hai umeed hai Shahzad Ahmed sahab ke is sher pe aapke umdaa sher humhe padhne ka mauka naseeb hoga.
chhup chhup ke kahāñ tak tire dīdār mileñge
ai parda-nashīñ ab sar-e-bāzār mileñge
221/1221/1221/122
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Waah!! Bahut khoob.....
Aapne mahfil ko aage badhaya apni masroofiyat me se vaqt nikal kar hame ek naya sher diya bahot shukriya anu.....
Doston ab apki baari mahfil ko aage badhayein..
Koshish karoongi jald hee koi koshish main bhi pesh kar sakun....
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Maufi ka talabgaar hoon doston, meri masrufiyat ki wajh se mehfil tham si gayi thi. Agle sher ki taraf rukh karte hai umeed hai Shahzad Ahmed sahab ke is sher pe aapke umdaa sher humhe padhne ka mauka naseeb hoga.
chhup chhup ke kahāñ tak tire dīdār mileñge
ai parda-nashīñ ab sar-e-bāzār mileñge
221/1221/1221/122
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Chup chup ke kaha tak tere deedaar milenge
Tu dekh tujhe kitne talabgaar milenge (MUJAHID)
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22nd August 2016, 10:13 PM
Ek koshish....
Chup chup ke kahaan tak tire deedar milenge
Is haal me ham jald hee beemar milenge
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Ek koshish....
Chup chup ke kahaan tak tire deedar milenge
Is haal me ham jald hee beemar milenge
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waahhhh kyaa khoob sher ataa kiyaa hai madhu ji ... bahut shaandaar
likhtii rahiye
shaad...
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meri jaanib se bhii ek sher nazar hai...
chhup chhup ke kahāñ tak tire dīdār mileñge
naa mil ke bhi ham is tarah sau baar milenge..
shukriyaa
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25th August 2016, 02:54 PM
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waahhhh kyaa khoob sher ataa kiyaa hai madhu ji ... bahut shaandaar
likhtii rahiye
shaad...
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Bahut shukriya
Salamat rahein....
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25th August 2016, 02:55 PM
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meri jaanib se bhii ek sher nazar hai...
chhup chhup ke kahāñ tak tire dīdār mileñge
naa mil ke bhi ham is tarah sau baar milenge..
shukriyaa
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Waah waah!!!!! Kya kahne...
Bahut umda shaad ji......
Likhte rahein...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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25th August 2016, 03:33 PM
vah sb ney buhet ache asshar likhey hai
aap sab ke lieye buhet daad
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8th September 2016, 09:00 AM
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Ek koshish....
Chup chup ke kahaan tak tire deedar milenge
Is haal me ham jald hee beemar milenge
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Wah umdaa sher Madhu seedhe shabdon mein dil ka haal bayaan kiya hai
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8th September 2016, 09:02 AM
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meri jaanib se bhii ek sher nazar hai...
chhup chhup ke kahāñ tak tire dīdār mileñge
naa mil ke bhi ham is tarah sau baar milenge..
shukriyaa
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Umdaa janaab bahut aala sher haazir kiya hai janaab, daad qubool farmaaiye
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8th September 2016, 10:44 AM
ek adnaa si koshish....
chhup chhup ke kahāñ tak tire dīdār mileñge
ta-umr tumhe hum bhi beqaraar milenge
Qasid
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8th September 2016, 03:45 PM
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ek adnaa si koshish....
chhup chhup ke kahāñ tak tire dīdār mileñge
ta-umr tumhe hum bhi beqaraar milenge
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Waahh...kya kahne...bahot khoob sher kaha qasid sahab
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Anu :) nye silsila ke liye mubarakbaad -
8th September 2016, 04:15 PM
wahhhh Anu...bahut hi khoobsurat aur majedaar silsilla shuru kiya hai, aap sabhi dostoN ke ashiyaar padey, accha lga, koshish karuNgi ki jaldi hi koshish karu maiN bhi
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th September 2016, 07:55 AM
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wahhhh Anu...bahut hi khoobsurat aur majedaar silsilla shuru kiya hai, aap sabhi dostoN ke ashiyaar padey, accha lga, koshish karuNgi ki jaldi hi koshish karu maiN bhi
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Bahut achha laga aapko yaha dekhkar didi, aapki koshish ke intezaar mein hoon
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27th September 2016, 03:12 PM
Chand taalaab mai jab rakks kia karta hey
Meri aankho maitera akks hua karta hey
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