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8th August 2010, 02:05 AM
yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..
Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de
yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de
Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de
Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de
Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
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8th August 2010, 02:14 AM
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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..
Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de
yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de
Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de
Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de
Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
Qadeertoopchi
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bahut khub
ahsash ko bahut ache sabdo me likha hai
daad hajir hai
yah bahut hi achi lagy
Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
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8th August 2010, 02:36 AM
Qadeer Sahab AadaaB!
Masha Allah janab kya kahne hai aapke, Is Gazal ko ek mukammal ayaam tak aapne behad achche aur khubsurat khayaaloN ke saath,
Janab hum aapki is umdaa aur dil jeet lene wali koshish per bus daad de sakte hai.....
Wah janab sabhi sheroN ki adaaygi kamaal ki rahi, nehad khoob laga har sher.... ek ki tarif na karuN aisa bhi koi sher nahi hai aapki is kalaam meiN dil se daad kabool kijiye.....
Bazm meiN aate rahiye....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez......
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8th August 2010, 03:12 AM
Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
ponchh deti hai, sanwaar deti hai, jhaad deti hai,
qadeer bhai
aapki toofani gazal sabke tambu ukhad deti hai.
Ek Ek sheir sou sou ashrfee lutane ke kabil hai.
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Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
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8th August 2010, 11:07 AM
Qadeer saaHeb:
namaste!
aik naGhz Ghazal paRhne ko mili.. mai.n aapka be-had ShuKraGuzaar huuN! maqtaa mujhe bahot hi pasand aayaa.. dil se daad!
KhuSh rahe.n.. apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n
duaao.n ke saath ijaazat
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8th August 2010, 11:12 AM
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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..
Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de
yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de
Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de
Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de
Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
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qadeer bhayee
bas itna hi
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8th August 2010, 12:24 PM
Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
bahut khoobsurat gazal h qadeer ji...
daad kubul keejiye...
take care..
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8th August 2010, 12:31 PM
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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..
Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de
yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de
Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de
Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de
Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
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qadeer bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoob sabhi ashar ek se ek badhkar hain dil se daad kubul karen yun hi bazm ko roshan karte rahen
duaon ke saath
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8th August 2010, 12:52 PM
Qadeer Bhai.......matle se maqte tak bahut khoob lage .......aapki ghazal ke sabhi ashaar.....ek se badh ke ek........ ! tahe dil se daad hazir hai... yunhi likhte rahen...
duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
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Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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8th August 2010, 04:56 PM
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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..
Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de
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Bohat hi dil fareb ghazal se bazm ko nawaaza hai aapne qadeer saahab .. har sher ek se badh kar ek raha hai .. aapki shayri aapke ilm aur jazbatoN ko dikhaati hai .. mujhe behad pasand aayi aapki ye nayi kavish ... dheroN mubarakeN ...
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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8th August 2010, 09:20 PM
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bahut khub
ahsash ko bahut ache sabdo me likha hai
daad hajir hai
yah bahut hi achi lagy
Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
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shakuntala saheba aadab
apne ahesas pasand farmaye banda ahesan bandh raha .. allah apko khush rakhe ..
dua go
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8th August 2010, 09:23 PM
khaawish sahab aadab ,
apki taherir is talib e ilm ke hausle bada rahi hai ,,sub apki nazron ka kamal kamal hai sahab baaqi hum kya hamari tukbandi kya .. dad o tahseen ke liye azhd mashkoor o mumnoo hon .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe shad o abad rakhe ..
apka bhai
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8th August 2010, 09:28 PM
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Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
ponchh deti hai, sanwaar deti hai, jhaad deti hai,
qadeer bhai
aapki toofani gazal sabke tambu ukhad deti hai.
Ek Ek sheir sou sou ashrfee lutane ke kabil hai.
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parveen sahab aadab ,,,
apki inhi mahubbato.N ka tufail hai jo khuch kahene ki jasarat kar liya karta hon ..apki mahubbaton ka behad shukar guzaar hon...
izzath o hausla afzai ke liye saraapa sipaas hun .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..
dua go
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8th August 2010, 09:33 PM
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Qadeer saaHeb:
namaste!
aik naGhz Ghazal paRhne ko mili.. mai.n aapka be-had ShuKraGuzaar huuN! maqtaa mujhe bahot hi pasand aayaa.. dil se daad!
KhuSh rahe.n.. apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n
duaao.n ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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dhaval sahab aadab ,
apki dad paakar dil bagh bagh ho gaya aur ghazal ko jila bhi mil gaya .. apki mahubbaton ka behad shukriya ..umid hai aage bhi issi tarhan apni mahubbaton se nawazte rahenge .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..
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8th August 2010, 09:38 PM
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qadeer bhayee
bas itna hi
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vikaas bhai aadab ,,
apki comments padke be sahaqta hassi aa gaa'i ..wah re naseeb paheli baar kissi ne I Love U kaha aur bhi male .. ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ..
mazaq bartaraf ..apki ye alfaz mere liye tabaruk hain .. apki mahubbato.N ke tale dabb gaya banda aaj .. allah apko khush rakhe .. bazm me ate rahen apni maujodgi ka ahesas dilate rahen ..
apka bhai
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Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
bahut khoobsurat gazal h qadeer ji...
daad kubul keejiye...
take care..
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shipra saheba aadab ,,
apko ghazal pasand aai yun laga meri mahenat rang laai .. dad ke liye mashkoor o mumnoo hon .. inayath banaye rakhen .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..
khadim
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8th August 2010, 09:42 PM
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qadeer bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoob sabhi ashar ek se ek badhkar hain dil se daad kubul karen yun hi bazm ko roshan karte rahen
duaon ke saath
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radhe radhe ,
apne hamesha se meri hausla afzai ki hai .. apki mahubbaton ka behad shukriya sahab .. dad ke liye mashkoor o mumnoo hon .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..
apka bhai
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11th August 2010, 09:18 PM
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Qadeer Bhai.......matle se maqte tak bahut khoob lage .......aapki ghazal ke sabhi ashaar.....ek se badh ke ek........ ! tahe dil se daad hazir hai... yunhi likhte rahen...
duaaon ke saath...
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naresh sahab aadab ,,
apki badi maherbani jo apne is nachiz ki taqleeq ko kissi qabil samjha aur apni mahubbaton se nawaza ..dad ke liye mashkoor o mumnoo hon .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..
dua go
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bahut khoobsurat gazal likhi hai aapne -
11th August 2010, 10:47 PM
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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..
Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de
yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de
Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de
Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de
Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
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wah..............kya khoob likha hai aapne, ek ek lafz tareef ke kabil hai, muje sabhi sher behad acche lage, maine es gazal ko aaj kum se kum 10-12 baar pada, ek baar padkar phir dil kahta hai ki ek baar aur pad liya jaye, khoobsurat gazal par dil se daad hazir hai, maqta to masha-allah gazal ki jaan hai.
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11th August 2010, 11:27 PM
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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..
Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de
yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de
Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de
Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de
Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
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qadeer aadaab...
aa to gaya hooN, kyuNki padh kar bina daad diye jaana gawaara na hua...lekin soch maiN ye raha hooN ki kin alfaaz meiN is ghazal aur aapki kalam ki tareef karuN...mere paas alfaaz hi nahi haiN janaab...sach kaha hai parveen komal ji ne ki ''Ek Ek sheir sou sou ashrfee lutane ke kabil hai'' ...zor daalne par bhi sahi lafz nahi mil rahe bas janaab meri taraf se daad hi daad...qubuul farmaaiye...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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Ek khoobsurat aur rawaaN dawaaN ghazal par aapki khidmat mai daad hazir hai mashaAllah se kya rawaani hai aapki is ghazal ki tamaam aashaaroN ne dil mai ghr kar lia, khoob aur bhut hi khoob, likhte rahiye aur mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye apne kalaamo se, mashaAllah se bhut acha kehte hain aap, Allah kare zor e qalam aur ziyada
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12th August 2010, 03:28 PM
MASHALLAH!!...
Ek behad khoobsurat ghazal per dil ki gehraayiyoN se daad qubool farmaaiye Qadeer sahab..
Der se ghazal per reply dene ke liye maafi ki talabgaar huuN,bas is ghazal per fursat se reply karna chahti thi, isiliye der hogayi.
har sher qabil-e tareef hai...
bade khoobsoorat khayaalaat haiN aapke ...
Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
mujhe sabhi ashaar acche lage
per yeh do ahaar dil ke bohat Qareeb rahe !
Insha Allah aapke Qaif meiN aur taraQQii hogii !
yuhi mehfil raushan karte rahiye.........
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14th August 2010, 02:01 AM
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Bohat hi dil fareb ghazal se bazm ko nawaaza hai aapne qadeer saahab .. har sher ek se badh kar ek raha hai .. aapki shayri aapke ilm aur jazbatoN ko dikhaati hai .. mujhe behad pasand aayi aapki ye nayi kavish ... dheroN mubarakeN ...
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kunal saheb aadab ,,
Ap jaise ahle ilm ko meri haqeer si khaawish pasand aai ye meri liye baai's e faqr hai .. Apki dad tabarukh se kamm nahi .. badle me bus dua de sakta hon .. allah apko khush rakhe ... shad o aabad rahen ..
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14th August 2010, 07:45 PM
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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..
Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de
yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de
Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de
Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de
Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
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qadeer sahab...apki ghazal mai padta hi raha...padta hi raha .....
kamaal ki adaigi hai sahab........
Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de
is sher ko to najaane kitni baar paD liya.........kuch baat hai is sher me.....
kuch aisa jo khula hai phir bhi khulta nahi.......
apka maqta bemisaal hai....
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
isko padte padte jaane kab mann bhatak gaya.....ek hi tarah se ravaa hai shayad is liye...pata nahi
kabhi aah lab se nikal gayi kabhi askh aankh se dhal gaye....ab ye sher yaad iske saath saath mann me ravaa ho gaya to saaf baat hai ki koi na koi bahut badi baat is sher me hai..........asie hi koi sher kisi bade sher ke saath juDta nahi
shayad maine isse acchi ghazal sdc par nahi padi..........
bus matle ka 'deep' zara ..bahut thodi uljhan paida karta hai mere...
but what the heck........
bahut shukriya share karne ke liye......
bahut dher saari daad....
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14th August 2010, 07:49 PM
isi beher me ghulam ali sahab ki gaayi ek ghazal post kar raha hu.......aap zarur suniye aur qadeer sahab ki ghazal us dhun me gungunaiye.....
is ghazal ka mazaa das gunaa ho jayega.......
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UbwRqUUHULc
ye bahut uncommon beher hai.....is beher me ghazal sunna bahut jaldi naseeb nahi hoga.....is mauke ka sab faida uthaaye aur isko zarur gungunaaye
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27th August 2010, 03:19 AM
Subhan_allah mere bhai yaqeen mano to meri aukaat hi nahi ke main kuch kahu is khoobsurat peshkash ke aage..........is sher ko mera salam mere bhai.
Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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27th August 2010, 10:58 PM
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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..
Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de
yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de
Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de
Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de
Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
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wahhhhhhhhhh.........wahhhhhhhhhhhhh........wahhhh hhhhhhhhhhh... kya baat hai dear... aapki baat dil se nikali aur hum sab ke dilo tak pahuch gayi... dil chhu liya aapne... dil se daad hazir hai... yuhi likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye...
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mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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28th August 2010, 03:17 AM
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wah..............kya khoob likha hai aapne, ek ek lafz tareef ke kabil hai, muje sabhi sher behad acche lage, maine es gazal ko aaj kum se kum 10-12 baar pada, ek baar padkar phir dil kahta hai ki ek baar aur pad liya jaye, khoobsurat gazal par dil se daad hazir hai, maqta to masha-allah gazal ki jaan hai.
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sunita saheba aadab ,,
tashakkur ke liye alfazon se qaasir hon .. sub apki pakiza nazron ka kamal hai baaqi to khuch khaas nahi gareeb ki takhleeq me .. apki mahubbaton ka behad shukriya .. umid hai mustaqbil me bhi issi tarhan hausla afazia farmati rahengi app .. apki mahubbaton ke awz bus dua de sakta hai ye gareeb .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe .. shaad o aabad rahen ...
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28th August 2010, 03:20 AM
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qadeer aadaab...
aa to gaya hooN, kyuNki padh kar bina daad diye jaana gawaara na hua...lekin soch maiN ye raha hooN ki kin alfaaz meiN is ghazal aur aapki kalam ki tareef karuN...mere paas alfaaz hi nahi haiN janaab...sach kaha hai parveen komal ji ne ki ''Ek Ek sheir sou sou ashrfee lutane ke kabil hai'' ...zor daalne par bhi sahi lafz nahi mil rahe bas janaab meri taraf se daad hi daad...qubuul farmaaiye...
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vikram bhai aadab ,,
apne hamesha se nachiz ki hausla afzai ki hai .. allah hi apko iska ajar de sakta hai mai bus dua kar sakta hon apke haq me .. dad ke liye azd mashkoor o mumnoo ..apke alfaz taluqath ko masboot banane jaise hain .. ye bhi ap hi ke shaqsiyat ka hissa hai warna to gareeb iska qattai mustahiq nahi .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..
apka bhai
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28th August 2010, 03:22 AM
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Ek khoobsurat aur rawaaN dawaaN ghazal par aapki khidmat mai daad hazir hai mashaAllah se kya rawaani hai aapki is ghazal ki tamaam aashaaroN ne dil mai ghr kar lia, khoob aur bhut hi khoob, likhte rahiye aur mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye apne kalaamo se, mashaAllah se bhut acha kehte hain aap, Allah kare zor e qalam aur ziyada
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aslam bhai aadab ,,
apko ghazal pasand aai yun laga mahenat rang laai .. dad ke liye sarapa sipaas hon .. allah apko khush rakhe ..
apka bhai
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28th August 2010, 03:27 AM
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MASHALLAH!!...
Ek behad khoobsurat ghazal per dil ki gehraayiyoN se daad qubool farmaaiye Qadeer sahab..
Der se ghazal per reply dene ke liye maafi ki talabgaar huuN,bas is ghazal per fursat se reply karna chahti thi, isiliye der hogayi.
har sher qabil-e tareef hai...
bade khoobsoorat khayaalaat haiN aapke ...
Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
mujhe sabhi ashaar acche lage
per yeh do ahaar dil ke bohat Qareeb rahe !
Insha Allah aapke Qaif meiN aur taraQQii hogii !
yuhi mehfil raushan karte rahiye.........
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zainy saheba aadab ..
takhir ke liye mazrath ..
zarre ko aftaab , tinke ko taaj , qatre ko samandar ,, har shai ko ik saan izzat dena koi ap se sikhe .. allah ye sifat sub ko ata kare ..
ap jaisi sukhan shinaas ki daad ghazal ki kamiyabi ki sanad hai .. apni khushi ko alfazon ka jama pahena is khadar mushkil pahele kabhi na tha .. apki dad sar ankhon pe sar ankhon pe huzoor ....dil ki gaheriyun se dad dekar apne dil me ghar kar liya .. apke husn-e-zaan ko gareeb ka salam .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..
khadim
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28th August 2010, 03:32 AM
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qadeer sahab...apki ghazal mai padta hi raha...padta hi raha .....
kamaal ki adaigi hai sahab........
Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de
is sher ko to najaane kitni baar paD liya.........kuch baat hai is sher me.....
kuch aisa jo khula hai phir bhi khulta nahi.......
apka maqta bemisaal hai....
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
isko padte padte jaane kab mann bhatak gaya.....ek hi tarah se ravaa hai shayad is liye...pata nahi
kabhi aah lab se nikal gayi kabhi askh aankh se dhal gaye....ab ye sher yaad iske saath saath mann me ravaa ho gaya to saaf baat hai ki koi na koi bahut badi baat is sher me hai..........asie hi koi sher kisi bade sher ke saath juDta nahi
shayad maine isse acchi ghazal sdc par nahi padi..........
bus matle ka 'deep' zara ..bahut thodi uljhan paida karta hai mere...
but what the heck........
bahut shukriya share karne ke liye......
bahut dher saari daad....
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zidd sahab aadab ,,
ghazal pe apka tabsira gareeb ke liye faqr ka baais bana .. apke alfaz apki shaqsiyat ko bayan karte hain .. meri is haqeer si takhleeq ne apko is khadar mutasir kiya ye meri subse badi kamiyabi hai .. ..mai tashakkur ke liye alfazon se qaasir hon .. ye sub apki mahubbat hai jo ap is tarhan nawazte ho warna haqeeqath to yahi hai ke apke aage hamari koi bisaat nahi .. matle ke mutaliq jo apne farmaya hai wo bilkul sahi hai .. mai inshallah koi surath dhond longa .. allah apko khush rakhe ..
talib e ilm
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28th August 2010, 03:33 AM
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Subhan_allah mere bhai yaqeen mano to meri aukaat hi nahi ke main kuch kahu is khoobsurat peshkash ke aage..........is sher ko mera salam mere bhai.
Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
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sajid sahab aadab ,,
sub apki mahubbat hai mere bhai ..kyun sharmindah karte ho .. apki dad meri liye kissi tabarukh se kamm nahi ... allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..dua me yaad rakhiyega ..
apka bhai
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28th August 2010, 04:13 AM
Hey Abdul me sirf itna kehna chahti hu ke mujhe apki ye shayri behad pasand ayi.....apne bohot gehray se aur behad umdah likha hai.....daad kabool kijiye aur ese hi likhte rahiya....kush rahiye.....
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28th August 2010, 04:40 AM
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Hey Abdul me sirf itna kehna chahti hu ke mujhe apki ye shayri behad pasand ayi.....apne bohot gehray se aur behad umdah likha hai.....daad kabool kijiye aur ese hi likhte rahiya....kush rahiye.....
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asifa saheba aadab ,,
itna kahe ke apne kitna ahesaan kiya hai shayad hi apko iska ilm na ho....Ik arse baad kissi ne mujhe abdul kaha hai .. ..maine apko PM karne ki koshish bhi ki magar naa jane kyun mujhe permission nahi hai ke apko PM kar sakon .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..
dua go
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21st September 2010, 12:37 PM
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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..
Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de
yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de
Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de
Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de
Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de
Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de
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ji super'b creation.............
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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26th September 2010, 04:37 PM
lamha saheba aadab ,,
takhir ke liye mazrat khaw ho ... apki dad meri liye faqr ka baaic hai .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..
dua go
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ji super'b creation.............
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radhika saheba aadab ,,
takhir ke liye mazrath ..banda mashkoor o mumno hai .. allah apko khush rakhe ..
dua go
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