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Koi Yaad fir se Rula na De ( Qadeertoopchi) - 8th August 2010, 02:05 AM

yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de


Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de



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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de


Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de


Qadeertoopchi
bahut khub

ahsash ko bahut ache sabdo me likha hai

daad hajir hai


yah bahut hi achi lagy

Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


   
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8th August 2010, 02:36 AM

Qadeer Sahab AadaaB!

Masha Allah janab kya kahne hai aapke, Is Gazal ko ek mukammal ayaam tak aapne behad achche aur khubsurat khayaaloN ke saath,

Janab hum aapki is umdaa aur dil jeet lene wali koshish per bus daad de sakte hai.....

Wah janab sabhi sheroN ki adaaygi kamaal ki rahi, nehad khoob laga har sher.... ek ki tarif na karuN aisa bhi koi sher nahi hai aapki is kalaam meiN dil se daad kabool kijiye.....

Bazm meiN aate rahiye....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez......


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8th August 2010, 03:12 AM

Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de

ponchh deti hai, sanwaar deti hai, jhaad deti hai,
qadeer bhai
aapki toofani gazal sabke tambu ukhad deti hai.

Ek Ek sheir sou sou ashrfee lutane ke kabil hai.


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8th August 2010, 11:07 AM

Qadeer saaHeb:

namaste!

aik naGhz Ghazal paRhne ko mili.. mai.n aapka be-had ShuKraGuzaar huuN! maqtaa mujhe bahot hi pasand aayaa.. dil se daad!

KhuSh rahe.n.. apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de


Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de



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Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de


bahut khoobsurat gazal h qadeer ji...
daad kubul keejiye...

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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de


Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de



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bahut khoob sabhi ashar ek se ek badhkar hain dil se daad kubul karen yun hi bazm ko roshan karte rahen
duaon ke saath



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Qadeer Bhai.......matle se maqte tak bahut khoob lage .......aapki ghazal ke sabhi ashaar.....ek se badh ke ek........ ! tahe dil se daad hazir hai... yunhi likhte rahen...

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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..





Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de





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bahut khub

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daad hajir hai


yah bahut hi achi lagy

Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


shakuntala saheba aadab

apne ahesas pasand farmaye banda ahesan bandh raha .. allah apko khush rakhe ..


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Qadeer Sahab AadaaB!

Masha Allah janab kya kahne hai aapke, Is Gazal ko ek mukammal ayaam tak aapne behad achche aur khubsurat khayaaloN ke saath,

Janab hum aapki is umdaa aur dil jeet lene wali koshish per bus daad de sakte hai.....

Wah janab sabhi sheroN ki adaaygi kamaal ki rahi, nehad khoob laga har sher.... ek ki tarif na karuN aisa bhi koi sher nahi hai aapki is kalaam meiN dil se daad kabool kijiye.....

Bazm meiN aate rahiye....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez......

khaawish sahab aadab ,

apki taherir is talib e ilm ke hausle bada rahi hai ,,sub apki nazron ka kamal kamal hai sahab baaqi hum kya hamari tukbandi kya .. dad o tahseen ke liye azhd mashkoor o mumnoo hon .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe shad o abad rakhe ..

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Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai

Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


ponchh deti hai, sanwaar deti hai, jhaad deti hai,
qadeer bhai
aapki toofani gazal sabke tambu ukhad deti hai.


Ek Ek sheir sou sou ashrfee lutane ke kabil hai.
parveen sahab aadab ,,,

apki inhi mahubbato.N ka tufail hai jo khuch kahene ki jasarat kar liya karta hon ..apki mahubbaton ka behad shukar guzaar hon...

izzath o hausla afzai ke liye saraapa sipaas hun .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


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Qadeer saaHeb:

namaste!

aik naGhz Ghazal paRhne ko mili.. mai.n aapka be-had ShuKraGuzaar huuN! maqtaa mujhe bahot hi pasand aayaa.. dil se daad!

KhuSh rahe.n.. apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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apki dad paakar dil bagh bagh ho gaya aur ghazal ko jila bhi mil gaya .. apki mahubbaton ka behad shukriya ..umid hai aage bhi issi tarhan apni mahubbaton se nawazte rahenge .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


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Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de

bahut khoobsurat gazal h qadeer ji...
daad kubul keejiye...

take care..
shipra saheba aadab ,,

apko ghazal pasand aai yun laga meri mahenat rang laai .. dad ke liye mashkoor o mumnoo hon .. inayath banaye rakhen .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


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radhe radhe

bahut khoob sabhi ashar ek se ek badhkar hain dil se daad kubul karen yun hi bazm ko roshan karte rahen
duaon ke saath

radhe radhe ,


apne hamesha se meri hausla afzai ki hai .. apki mahubbaton ka behad shukriya sahab .. dad ke liye mashkoor o mumnoo hon .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


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Qadeer Bhai.......matle se maqte tak bahut khoob lage .......aapki ghazal ke sabhi ashaar.....ek se badh ke ek........ ! tahe dil se daad hazir hai... yunhi likhte rahen...

duaaon ke saath...

naresh sahab aadab ,,

apki badi maherbani jo apne is nachiz ki taqleeq ko kissi qabil samjha aur apni mahubbaton se nawaza ..dad ke liye mashkoor o mumnoo hon .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de


Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de



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wah..............kya khoob likha hai aapne, ek ek lafz tareef ke kabil hai, muje sabhi sher behad acche lage, maine es gazal ko aaj kum se kum 10-12 baar pada, ek baar padkar phir dil kahta hai ki ek baar aur pad liya jaye, khoobsurat gazal par dil se daad hazir hai, maqta to masha-allah gazal ki jaan hai.

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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de


Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de



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'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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Ek khoobsurat aur rawaaN dawaaN ghazal par aapki khidmat mai daad hazir hai mashaAllah se kya rawaani hai aapki is ghazal ki tamaam aashaaroN ne dil mai ghr kar lia, khoob aur bhut hi khoob, likhte rahiye aur mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye apne kalaamo se, mashaAllah se bhut acha kehte hain aap, Allah kare zor e qalam aur ziyada


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MASHALLAH!!...

Ek behad khoobsurat ghazal per dil ki gehraayiyoN se daad qubool farmaaiye Qadeer sahab..

Der se ghazal per reply dene ke liye maafi ki talabgaar huuN,bas is ghazal per fursat se reply karna chahti thi, isiliye der hogayi.

har sher qabil-e tareef hai...

bade khoobsoorat khayaalaat haiN aapke ...


Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de

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mujhe sabhi ashaar acche lage

per yeh do ahaar dil ke bohat Qareeb rahe !

Insha Allah aapke Qaif meiN aur taraQQii hogii !


yuhi mehfil raushan karte rahiye.........




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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de


Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de



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qadeer sahab...apki ghazal mai padta hi raha...padta hi raha .....

kamaal ki adaigi hai sahab........

Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de



is sher ko to najaane kitni baar paD liya.........kuch baat hai is sher me.....
kuch aisa jo khula hai phir bhi khulta nahi.......

apka maqta bemisaal hai....

Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de


isko padte padte jaane kab mann bhatak gaya.....ek hi tarah se ravaa hai shayad is liye...pata nahi
kabhi aah lab se nikal gayi kabhi askh aankh se dhal gaye....ab ye sher yaad iske saath saath mann me ravaa ho gaya to saaf baat hai ki koi na koi bahut badi baat is sher me hai..........asie hi koi sher kisi bade sher ke saath juDta nahi

shayad maine isse acchi ghazal sdc par nahi padi..........

bus matle ka 'deep' zara ..bahut thodi uljhan paida karta hai mere...

but what the heck........

bahut shukriya share karne ke liye......
bahut dher saari daad....

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isi beher me ghulam ali sahab ki gaayi ek ghazal post kar raha hu.......aap zarur suniye aur qadeer sahab ki ghazal us dhun me gungunaiye.....

is ghazal ka mazaa das gunaa ho jayega.......

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ye bahut uncommon beher hai.....is beher me ghazal sunna bahut jaldi naseeb nahi hoga.....is mauke ka sab faida uthaaye aur isko zarur gungunaaye

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Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de


Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de


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wah..............kya khoob likha hai aapne, ek ek lafz tareef ke kabil hai, muje sabhi sher behad acche lage, maine es gazal ko aaj kum se kum 10-12 baar pada, ek baar padkar phir dil kahta hai ki ek baar aur pad liya jaye, khoobsurat gazal par dil se daad hazir hai, maqta to masha-allah gazal ki jaan hai.

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aa to gaya hooN, kyuNki padh kar bina daad diye jaana gawaara na hua...lekin soch maiN ye raha hooN ki kin alfaaz meiN is ghazal aur aapki kalam ki tareef karuN...mere paas alfaaz hi nahi haiN janaab...sach kaha hai parveen komal ji ne ki ''Ek Ek sheir sou sou ashrfee lutane ke kabil hai'' ...zor daalne par bhi sahi lafz nahi mil rahe bas janaab meri taraf se daad hi daad...qubuul farmaaiye...


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apne hamesha se nachiz ki hausla afzai ki hai .. allah hi apko iska ajar de sakta hai mai bus dua kar sakta hon apke haq me .. dad ke liye azd mashkoor o mumnoo ..apke alfaz taluqath ko masboot banane jaise hain .. ye bhi ap hi ke shaqsiyat ka hissa hai warna to gareeb iska qattai mustahiq nahi .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


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apko ghazal pasand aai yun laga mahenat rang laai .. dad ke liye sarapa sipaas hon .. allah apko khush rakhe ..


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MASHALLAH!!...

Ek behad khoobsurat ghazal per dil ki gehraayiyoN se daad qubool farmaaiye Qadeer sahab..

Der se ghazal per reply dene ke liye maafi ki talabgaar huuN,bas is ghazal per fursat se reply karna chahti thi, isiliye der hogayi.

har sher qabil-e tareef hai...

bade khoobsoorat khayaalaat haiN aapke ...


Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de

Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de

mujhe sabhi ashaar acche lage

per yeh do ahaar dil ke bohat Qareeb rahe !

Insha Allah aapke Qaif meiN aur taraQQii hogii !


yuhi mehfil raushan karte rahiye.........

zainy saheba aadab ..


takhir ke liye mazrath ..

zarre ko aftaab , tinke ko taaj , qatre ko samandar ,, har shai ko ik saan izzat dena koi ap se sikhe .. allah ye sifat sub ko ata kare ..

ap jaisi sukhan shinaas ki daad ghazal ki kamiyabi ki sanad hai .. apni khushi ko alfazon ka jama pahena is khadar mushkil pahele kabhi na tha .. apki dad sar ankhon pe sar ankhon pe huzoor ....dil ki gaheriyun se dad dekar apne dil me ghar kar liya .. apke husn-e-zaan ko gareeb ka salam .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


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qadeer sahab...apki ghazal mai padta hi raha...padta hi raha .....

kamaal ki adaigi hai sahab........

Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de



is sher ko to najaane kitni baar paD liya.........kuch baat hai is sher me.....
kuch aisa jo khula hai phir bhi khulta nahi.......

apka maqta bemisaal hai....

Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de

isko padte padte jaane kab mann bhatak gaya.....ek hi tarah se ravaa hai shayad is liye...pata nahi
kabhi aah lab se nikal gayi kabhi askh aankh se dhal gaye....ab ye sher yaad iske saath saath mann me ravaa ho gaya to saaf baat hai ki koi na koi bahut badi baat is sher me hai..........asie hi koi sher kisi bade sher ke saath juDta nahi

shayad maine isse acchi ghazal sdc par nahi padi..........

bus matle ka 'deep' zara ..bahut thodi uljhan paida karta hai mere...

but what the heck........

bahut shukriya share karne ke liye......
bahut dher saari daad....

zidd sahab aadab ,,

ghazal pe apka tabsira gareeb ke liye faqr ka baais bana .. apke alfaz apki shaqsiyat ko bayan karte hain .. meri is haqeer si takhleeq ne apko is khadar mutasir kiya ye meri subse badi kamiyabi hai .. ..mai tashakkur ke liye alfazon se qaasir hon .. ye sub apki mahubbat hai jo ap is tarhan nawazte ho warna haqeeqath to yahi hai ke apke aage hamari koi bisaat nahi .. matle ke mutaliq jo apne farmaya hai wo bilkul sahi hai .. mai inshallah koi surath dhond longa .. allah apko khush rakhe ..



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Subhan_allah mere bhai yaqeen mano to meri aukaat hi nahi ke main kuch kahu is khoobsurat peshkash ke aage..........is sher ko mera salam mere bhai.

Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de

sajid sahab aadab ,,

sub apki mahubbat hai mere bhai ..kyun sharmindah karte ho .. apki dad meri liye kissi tabarukh se kamm nahi ... allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..dua me yaad rakhiyega ..


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Hey Abdul me sirf itna kehna chahti hu ke mujhe apki ye shayri behad pasand ayi.....apne bohot gehray se aur behad umdah likha hai.....daad kabool kijiye aur ese hi likhte rahiya....kush rahiye.....
   
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Hey Abdul me sirf itna kehna chahti hu ke mujhe apki ye shayri behad pasand ayi.....apne bohot gehray se aur behad umdah likha hai.....daad kabool kijiye aur ese hi likhte rahiya....kush rahiye.....

asifa saheba aadab ,,


itna kahe ke apne kitna ahesaan kiya hai shayad hi apko iska ilm na ho....Ik arse baad kissi ne mujhe abdul kaha hai .. ..maine apko PM karne ki koshish bhi ki magar naa jane kyun mujhe permission nahi hai ke apko PM kar sakon .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


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yaarane bazm meri ik adna si khaawish apki nazar umid hai apni aara se nawazenge ..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de


Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de



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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye

Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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wahhhhhhhhhh.........wahhhhhhhhhhhhh........wahhhh hhhhhhhhhhh... kya baat hai dear... aapki baat dil se nikali aur hum sab ke dilo tak pahuch gayi... dil chhu liya aapne... dil se daad hazir hai... yuhi likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye...

lamha saheba aadab ,,

takhir ke liye mazrat khaw ho ... apki dad meri liye faqr ka baaic hai .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..

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ji super'b creation.............

radhika saheba aadab ,,

takhir ke liye mazrath ..banda mashkoor o mumno hai .. allah apko khush rakhe ..


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