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Love Udas rahta hun - 31st August 2010, 02:48 PM
UDAS RAHTA HUN



TUMHE KHABAR HAI KI AB MAI UDAS RAHTA HUN
BIKHARTI TOOTTI HAYAT LIYE FIRTA HUN

PALAK JO BAND KI VO MUSKARATE PAAS MILE
USI CHHUAN KA MAI EHSAAS LIYE FIRTA HUN

AANKH ME ASHK AUR IS DIL ME UNKI YAAD LIYE
BAS EK UMMID- E- VAFA SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

BAHANE KARKE MUJHE CHHOD GAYA TOO LEKIN
TERI KASAM MAI TUJHE SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

AJEEB DARD HAIN KHUSHIYON SE NIKAL AYE HAIN
UNHEN SAMETE HUE SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

NA JANE NEENDon SE KYON DUSHMANI HUI KRISHNA
KHULI PALAK PE JAISE KHWAB LIYE FIRTA HUN

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31st August 2010, 03:25 PM
My Dear Krishna Ji!

Aap to janab bahr mein kahte hain magar isbaar kaise chook ho gayee. Ye ghazal aur bhi khoobsurat ho sakti hai agar aap ise dobaara aik nazar dekh len aur iski bahr ki ghalatiyan khatm kar den phir aap dekhen k ye ghazal kya qayaamt dhaati hai. Meri guzaarish par aap tawajjo denge aisa mera yaqeen hai.

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UDAS RAHTA HUN

TUMHE KHABAR HAI KI AB MAI UDAS RAHTA HUN
BIKHARTI TOOTTI HAYAT LIYE FIRTA HUN

PALAK JO BAND KI VO MUSKARATE PAAS MILE
USI CHHUAN KA MAI EHSAAS LIYE FIRTA HUN

AANKH ME ASHK AUR IS DIL ME UNKI YAAD LIYE
BAS EK UMMID- E- VAFA SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

BAHANE KARKE MUJHE CHHOD GAYA TOO LEKIN
TERI KASAM MAI TUJHE SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

AJEEB DARD HAIN KHUSHIYON SE NIKAL AYE HAIN
UNHEN SAMETE HUE SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

NA JANE NEENDon SE KYON DUSHMANI HUI KRISHNA
KHULI PALAK PE JAISE KHWAB LIYE FIRTA HUN

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31st August 2010, 03:58 PM
bhot achi kosish lagi krishna ji bus pehla sher kuch samajh nahi aaye baki ke ehsas bhot hi khubsurat hai.N

ye sher khub raha

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bahut achchi koshish hai.... yuhi likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye....

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My Dear Krishna Ji!

Aap to janab bahr mein kahte hain magar isbaar kaise chook ho gayee. Ye ghazal aur bhi khoobsurat ho sakti hai agar aap ise dobaara aik nazar dekh len aur iski bahr ki ghalatiyan khatm kar den phir aap dekhen k ye ghazal kya qayaamt dhaati hai. Meri guzaarish par aap tawajjo denge aisa mera yaqeen hai.

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bhot achi kosish lagi krishna ji bus pehla sher kuch samajh nahi aaye baki ke ehsas bhot hi khubsurat hai.N

ye sher khub raha

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bahut achchi koshish hai.... yuhi likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye....

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UDAS RAHTA HUN



TUMHE KHABAR HAI KI AB MAI UDAS RAHTA HUN
BIKHARTI TOOTTI HAYAT LIYE FIRTA HUN

PALAK JO BAND KI VO MUSKARATE PAAS MILE
USI CHHUAN KA MAI EHSAAS LIYE FIRTA HUN

AANKH ME ASHK AUR IS DIL ME UNKI YAAD LIYE
BAS EK UMMID- E- VAFA SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

BAHANE KARKE MUJHE CHHOD GAYA TOO LEKIN
TERI KASAM MAI TUJHE SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

AJEEB DARD HAIN KHUSHIYON SE NIKAL AYE HAIN
UNHEN SAMETE HUE SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

NA JANE NEENDon SE KYON DUSHMANI HUI KRISHNA
KHULI PALAK PE JAISE KHWAB LIYE FIRTA HUN

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UDAS RAHTA HUN



TUMHE KHABAR HAI KI AB MAI UDAS RAHTA HUN
BIKHARTI TOOTTI HAYAT LIYE FIRTA HUN

PALAK JO BAND KI VO MUSKARATE PAAS MILE
USI CHHUAN KA MAI EHSAAS LIYE FIRTA HUN

AANKH ME ASHK AUR IS DIL ME UNKI YAAD LIYE
BAS EK UMMID- E- VAFA SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

BAHANE KARKE MUJHE CHHOD GAYA TOO LEKIN
TERI KASAM MAI TUJHE SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

AJEEB DARD HAIN KHUSHIYON SE NIKAL AYE HAIN
UNHEN SAMETE HUE SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

NA JANE NEENDon SE KYON DUSHMANI HUI KRISHNA
KHULI PALAK PE JAISE KHWAB LIYE FIRTA HUN

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Krishna Ji ... aapki tehreer ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe... dil ko chhuu gaye... yunhi likhti rahen aage bhi ... dil se daad hazir hai ... khush rahen...

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nice creation krishna jee......keep it up... i like it very much.....daad kubool kijiyega..
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash, krishna saheb daad qubuul kijiyega...

'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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Krishna Ji ... aapki tehreer ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe... dil ko chhuu gaye... yunhi likhti rahen aage bhi ... dil se daad hazir hai ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....
naresh mehra saheb,aapki daad sir aankhon par,aapki duayen sath hain to koshish jari rahegi.bahut-bahut shukriya
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nice creation...............keep it up.

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krishna jee
radhe radhe

ek achhi peshkash par dil se daad
duaon ke saath

Aapka Apna
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radhe radhe

ek achhi peshkash par dil se daad
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Ishk saheb radhe radhe, aapne pasand kiya mujhe aur kya chahiye.aapki daad aur duaon ka bahut- bahut shukriya. ek sher load karte waqt choot gaya tha aapki khidmat me pesh hai

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UDAS RAHTA HUN



TUMHE KHABAR HAI KI AB MAI UDAS RAHTA HUN
BIKHARTI TOOTTI HAYAT LIYE FIRTA HUN

PALAK JO BAND KI VO MUSKARATE PAAS MILE
USI CHHUAN KA MAI EHSAAS LIYE FIRTA HUN

AANKH ME ASHK AUR IS DIL ME UNKI YAAD LIYE
BAS EK UMMID- E- VAFA SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

BAHANE KARKE MUJHE CHHOD GAYA TOO LEKIN
TERI KASAM MAI TUJHE SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

AJEEB DARD HAIN KHUSHIYON SE NIKAL AYE HAIN
UNHEN SAMETE HUE SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

NA JANE NEENDon SE KYON DUSHMANI HUI KRISHNA
KHULI PALAK PE JAISE KHWAB LIYE FIRTA HUN

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krishna ji achha likha hai, aise hi likhte rahie par udaas mat hona
   
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krishna ji achha likha hai, aise hi likhte rahie par udaas mat hona
Rashmi ji aapko achchha lga aur meri udasi par bhi nazar gayee,aapki duaon ka bahut- bahut shukriya.mai likhne ki koshish karta rahoonga
khushi apne hath me nahi hoti Rashmi ji koshish ki ja sakti hai---
fir ek bar shikriya.

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KHULI PLAK PE KOEE KHWAB LIYE FIRTA HUN
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UDAS RAHTA HUN



TUMHE KHABAR HAI KI AB MAI UDAS RAHTA HUN
BIKHARTI TOOTTI HAYAT LIYE FIRTA HUN

PALAK JO BAND KI VO MUSKARATE PAAS MILE
USI CHHUAN KA MAI EHSAAS LIYE FIRTA HUN

AANKH ME ASHK AUR IS DIL ME UNKI YAAD LIYE
BAS EK UMMID- E- VAFA SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

BAHANE KARKE MUJHE CHHOD GAYA TOO LEKIN
TERI KASAM MAI TUJHE SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

AJEEB DARD HAIN KHUSHIYON SE NIKAL AYE HAIN
UNHEN SAMETE HUE SATH LIYE FIRTA HUN

NA JANE NEENDon SE KYON DUSHMANI HUI KRISHNA
KHULI PALAK PE JAISE KHWAB LIYE FIRTA HUN

krishna
dosto ek sher jo load karte waqt chhoot gya tha aapki khidmat me pesh hai

TAMAM UMR TO GUJRI HAI BARISHON ME MERI
MAGAR MAI FIR BHI TERI PYAS LIYE FIRTA HUN

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NA JANE NEENDON SE KYON DUSHMNI HUEE krishna
KHULI PLAK PE KOEE KHWAB LIYE FIRTA HUN
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