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Aao Diwali Manaye Hum..........( Ghayel ) - 4th November 2010, 12:40 PM

Yek kalam maine barso pehle likha tha, tab shayed yeh tak pata nahi tha ke sher o shayri ke kya usool hai aur yaqeen janiye aaj bhi pata nahi hai.........Diwali ek khushi ka mauka hai aur mera yeh kalam shayed aapki is khushi ko bemaza kare jiske liye main aapse mafi mangna chahta hu........par main samajhta hu ke shayro ne hamesha har pehlu se apni baat kahi hai aur jaha tak koshish ki hai sach kehne ki koshish ki hai..........ek sach main bhi aapke sabke samne lekar hazir hua hu......yeh kalam kisi samudaye ya kisi dharm ke khilaaf nahi likha gaya hai........yeh kalam us mazloom ki diwali ko bayaan karta hai jispar zulm hua hai.

Aao diwali manaye hum
Khushiyo ka mauka hain khushiya manaye hum

Kabhi dharm kabhi jati kabhi bhasha ke nam par ladei.N
Phir bhi kehte ho diwali hai aao hath milaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum......

Jala ke auro ke gharo ko is diwali me
Kis muh se apne gharo ko sajaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum........

Is diwali soya kisan ka ghar ek sath kha ke zehar
Hame isse kya aao bachcho ko apne mithaee khilaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum......

Koi marathi koi punjabi koi tamil to koi bengali
Aao nikle is diwali ek hindustani dhoond laye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum.........

So raha hain desh mera GHAYEL aaj odhe hue kafan
Aao yaro deepak nahi uski cheeta jalaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum
Khushiyo ka mauka hain khushiya manaye hum

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4th November 2010, 04:11 PM

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Yek kalam maine barso pehle likha tha, tab shayed yeh tak pata nahi tha ke sher o shayri ke kya usool hai aur yaqeen janiye aaj bhi pata nahi hai.........Diwali ek khushi ka mauka hai aur mera yeh kalam shayed aapki is khushi ko bemaza kare jiske liye main aapse mafi mangna chahta hu........par main samajhta hu ke shayro ne hamesha har pehlu se apni baat kahi hai aur jaha tak koshish ki hai sach kehne ki koshish ki hai..........ek sach main bhi aapke sabke samne lekar hazir hua hu......yeh kalam kisi samudaye ya kisi dharm ke khilaaf nahi likha gaya hai........yeh kalam us mazloom ki diwali ko bayaan karta hai jispar zulm hua hai.

Aao diwali manaye hum
Khushiyo ka mauka hain khushiya manaye hum

Kabhi dharm kabhi jati kabhi bhasha ke nam par ladei.N
Phir bhi kehte ho diwali hai aao hath milaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum......

Jala ke auro ke gharo ko is diwali me
Kis muh se apne gharo ko sajaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum........

Is diwali soya kisan ka ghar ek sath kha ke zehar
Hame isse kya aao bachcho ko apne mithaee khilaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum......

Koi marathi koi punjabi koi tamil to koi bengali
Aao nikle is diwali ek hindustani dhoond laye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum.........

So raha hain desh mera GHAYEL aaj odhe hue kafan
Aao yaro deepak nahi uski cheeta jalaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum
Khushiyo ka mauka hain khushiya manaye hum

Sajid Ghayel




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Aao diwali manaye hum
Khushiyo ka mauka hain khushiya manaye hum

Kabhi dharm kabhi jati kabhi bhasha ke nam par ladei.N
Phir bhi kehte ho diwali hai aao hath milaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum......

Jala ke auro ke gharo ko is diwali me
Kis muh se apne gharo ko sajaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum........

Is diwali soya kisan ka ghar ek sath kha ke zehar
Hame isse kya aao bachcho ko apne mithaee khilaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum......

Koi marathi koi punjabi koi tamil to koi bengali
Aao nikle is diwali ek hindustani dhoond laye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum.........

So raha hain desh mera GHAYEL aaj odhe hue kafan
Aao yaro deepak nahi uski cheeta jalaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum
Khushiyo ka mauka hain khushiya manaye hum

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4th November 2010, 05:45 PM

Sajid Bhai ... Happy Diwaali !

Bahut Umdaa Likhaa Hai Aapne ... Tahe Dil Se Daad Hazir hai ... !

Aise hi behtar khayaloN Ke Saath aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

Duaaon ke saath .... !





YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
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Sajid,

bahut khoob bana hai aapka ye kalaam.... kaash is duniya ka har insaan aap hi ki tarah soche, to ye dharti swarg ban jaaye... is behtarin kalaam pe dil se daad hazir hai... yuhi likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye.....

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4th November 2010, 06:56 PM

Aap hindustaani, main hindustaani, hum hindustaani!!!!!!!

ek dum sach'chee baatein.

Diwali mubarak sajid bhai

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sajid sahab aadab ,,

apki nazm mutacir karti hai .. ik taraf jahan maujoda halat ka karab bayan kiya hai wahin dusri taraf watan ko ik jahti ka paigam deti apki ye nazm shaandar o jaandar hai .. fun aur aisa kamal-e-fun bus ap hi ki shaqsiyat ka hissa hai.. apke umdah khayal yaqeenan dad o mubarak baad ke mustahiq hai.N ..dad khubool ho .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


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Yek kalam maine barso pehle likha tha, tab shayed yeh tak pata nahi tha ke sher o shayri ke kya usool hai aur yaqeen janiye aaj bhi pata nahi hai.........Diwali ek khushi ka mauka hai aur mera yeh kalam shayed aapki is khushi ko bemaza kare jiske liye main aapse mafi mangna chahta hu........par main samajhta hu ke shayro ne hamesha har pehlu se apni baat kahi hai aur jaha tak koshish ki hai sach kehne ki koshish ki hai..........ek sach main bhi aapke sabke samne lekar hazir hua hu......yeh kalam kisi samudaye ya kisi dharm ke khilaaf nahi likha gaya hai........yeh kalam us mazloom ki diwali ko bayaan karta hai jispar zulm hua hai.

Aao diwali manaye hum
Khushiyo ka mauka hain khushiya manaye hum

Kabhi dharm kabhi jati kabhi bhasha ke nam par ladei.N
Phir bhi kehte ho diwali hai aao hath milaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum......

Jala ke auro ke gharo ko is diwali me
Kis muh se apne gharo ko sajaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum........

Is diwali soya kisan ka ghar ek sath kha ke zehar
Hame isse kya aao bachcho ko apne mithaee khilaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum......

Koi marathi koi punjabi koi tamil to koi bengali
Aao nikle is diwali ek hindustani dhoond laye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum.........

So raha hain desh mera GHAYEL aaj odhe hue kafan
Aao yaro deepak nahi uski cheeta jalaye hum

Aao diwali manaye hum
Khushiyo ka mauka hain khushiya manaye hum

Sajid Ghayel


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6th November 2010, 11:59 AM

Sajid Saheb,

Main yakeenan aap k jazbaat ki
tareef karooN ga....

DuaooN k saath ijaazat,


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SAJID BHAI

HAPPY DIWALI......

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