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4th February 2012, 05:28 PM
dosto , meree shaayri men romance kabhee nahee rahaa . aaj koshish kar rahaa hu ki kuch rumaanee andaaz men likh saku. main apne maqsad men kis had tak qaamyaab rahaa? iska faislaa karna aapke hatho men hai.
aapke faisle ka intazaar rahega.........................
aankh ashqo se gar ubal jaaye.
dil teraa mom sa pighal jaaye.
seep men boond jaise pal jaaye,
dur* men aashiq tera ye dhal jaaye.
teree yaade hai meree saanso men,
saans toote to ye amal jaaye.
jaate jaate zaraa mudo to sahee,
dil isee baat pe bahal jaaye.
aankho aankho men raat hotee hai,
raat bhar gugtagoo ye chal jaaye.
teree baahon men dam nikal hai rahaa,
maut kuch aur der tal jaaye.
kyun UFAQ mujhse baato baato men,
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4th February 2012, 10:05 PM
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dosto , meree shaayri men romance kabhee nahee rahaa . aaj koshish kar rahaa hu ki kuch rumaanee andaaz men likh saku. main apne maqsad men kis had tak qaamyaab rahaa? iska faislaa karna aapke hatho men hai.
aapke faisle ka intazaar rahega.........................
aankh ashqo se gar ubal jaaye.
dil teraa mom sa pighal jaaye.
seep men boond jaise pal jaaye,
dur* men aashiq tera ye dhal jaaye.
teree yaade hai meree saanso men,
saans toote to ye amal jaaye.
jaate jaate zaraa mudo to sahee,
dil isee baat pe bahal jaaye.
aankho aankho men raat hotee hai,
raat bhar gugtagoo ye chal jaaye.
teree baahon men dam nikal hai rahaa,
maut kuch aur der tal jaaye.
kyun UFAQ mujhse baato baato men,
naam muh se teraa nikal jaaye.
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5th February 2012, 02:14 PM
aankh ashqo se gar ubal jaaye.
dil teraa mom sa pighal jaaye.
tera dil ....
bahut acha matlaa hai ....
seep men boond jaise pal jaaye,
dur* men aashiq tera ye dhal jaaye.
teree yaade hai meree saanso men,
saans toote to ye amal jaaye.
yaar is sher pe kya kahun main............... saans toote to ye amal jaye ... aahaa ahaa ahaaa swaad aa gaya pyare............... tumhari shayeri mujhe zinda kar deti hai......... jio jio
jaate jaate zaraa mudo to sahee,
dil isee baat pe bahal jaaye.
jaate jaate zara mudo ..dekho....
dil isi baat pe "saNbhal" jaye .... kuch yun ... khoob hai ..... khooob
aankho aankho men raat hotee hai,
raat bhar gugtagoo ye chal jaaye.
teree baahon men dam nikal hai rahaa,
maut kuch aur der tal jaaye.
ahaa ahaa .... kyaa khoob hai.. aise hi likho.... tum muhabbat ke liye ho muhabbat hi likho ........
kyun UFAQ mujhse baato baato men,
naam muh se teraa nikal jaaye.
hahhah... sahi sahi hai ... khoob maqtaa hai ... chote miyaaN ............
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5th February 2012, 06:02 PM
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aankh ashqo se gar ubal jaaye.
dil teraa mom sa pighal jaaye.
seep men boond jaise pal jaaye,
dur* men aashiq tera ye dhal jaaye.
teree yaade hai meree saanso men,
saans toote to ye amal jaaye.
jaate jaate zaraa mudo to sahee,
dil isee baat pe bahal jaaye.
aankho aankho men raat hotee hai,
raat bhar gugtagoo ye chal jaaye.
teree baahon men dam nikal hai rahaa,
maut kuch aur der tal jaaye.
kyun UFAQ mujhse baato baato men,
naam muh se teraa nikal jaaye.
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aapka ye aashiqaana qalaam mere dil ko bahut bhaaya janaab uffaq saheb...
saare sher hi badhiya haiN...meri jaanib se daad o mubaaraqbaad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega...
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6th February 2012, 12:46 PM
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dosto , meree shaayri men romance kabhee nahee rahaa . aaj koshish kar rahaa hu ki kuch rumaanee andaaz men likh saku. main apne maqsad men kis had tak qaamyaab rahaa? iska faislaa karna aapke hatho men hai.
aapke faisle ka intazaar rahega.........................
aankh ashqo se gar ubal jaaye.
dil teraa mom sa pighal jaaye.
seep men boond jaise pal jaaye,
dur* men aashiq tera ye dhal jaaye.
teree yaade hai meree saanso men,
saans toote to ye amal jaaye.
jaate jaate zaraa mudo to sahee,
dil isee baat pe bahal jaaye.
aankho aankho men raat hotee hai,
raat bhar gugtagoo ye chal jaaye.
teree baahon men dam nikal hai rahaa,
maut kuch aur der tal jaaye.
kyun UFAQ mujhse baato baato men,
naam muh se teraa nikal jaaye.
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6th February 2012, 01:10 PM
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dosto , meree shaayri men romance kabhee nahee rahaa . aaj koshish kar rahaa hu ki kuch rumaanee andaaz men likh saku. main apne maqsad men kis had tak qaamyaab rahaa? iska faislaa karna aapke hatho men hai.
aapke faisle ka intazaar rahega.........................
aankh ashqo se gar ubal jaaye.
dil teraa mom sa pighal jaaye.
seep men boond jaise pal jaaye,
dur* men aashiq tera ye dhal jaaye.
teree yaade hai meree saanso men,
saans toote to ye amal jaaye.
jaate jaate zaraa mudo to sahee,
dil isee baat pe bahal jaaye.
aankho aankho men raat hotee hai,
raat bhar gugtagoo ye chal jaaye.
teree baahon men dam nikal hai rahaa,
maut kuch aur der tal jaaye.
kyun UFAQ mujhse baato baato men,
naam muh se teraa nikal jaaye.
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aankh ashqo se gar ubal jaaye.
dil teraa mom sa pighal jaaye.
seep men boond jaise pal jaaye,
dur* men aashiq tera ye dhal jaaye.
teree yaade hai meree saanso men,
saans toote to ye amal jaaye.
jaate jaate zaraa mudo to sahee,
dil isee baat pe bahal jaaye.
aankho aankho men raat hotee hai,
raat bhar gugtagoo ye chal jaaye.
teree baahon men dam nikal hai rahaa,
maut kuch aur der tal jaaye.
kyun UFAQ mujhse baato baato men,
naam muh se teraa nikal jaaye.
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dil se daad hazir hai ... yuun hee likhte rahiye ... radhe radhe ............
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aankh ashqo se gar ubal jaaye.
dil teraa mom sa pighal jaaye.
tera dil ....
bahut acha matlaa hai ....
seep men boond jaise pal jaaye,
dur* men aashiq tera ye dhal jaaye.
teree yaade hai meree saanso men,
saans toote to ye amal jaaye.
yaar is sher pe kya kahun main............... saans toote to ye amal jaye ... aahaa ahaa ahaaa swaad aa gaya pyare............... tumhari shayeri mujhe zinda kar deti hai......... jio jio
jaate jaate zaraa mudo to sahee,
dil isee baat pe bahal jaaye.
jaate jaate zara mudo ..dekho....
dil isi baat pe "saNbhal" jaye .... kuch yun ... khoob hai ..... khooob
aankho aankho men raat hotee hai,
raat bhar gugtagoo ye chal jaaye.
teree baahon men dam nikal hai rahaa,
maut kuch aur der tal jaaye.
ahaa ahaa .... kyaa khoob hai.. aise hi likho.... tum muhabbat ke liye ho muhabbat hi likho ........
kyun UFAQ mujhse baato baato men,
naam muh se teraa nikal jaaye.
hahhah... sahi sahi hai ... khoob maqtaa hai ... chote miyaaN ............
bahut khoob ghazal huee hai ...
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jaate jaate zaraa mudo to sahee,
dil isee baat pe bahal jaaye.
wow ........ye movie pe dekhte the
aaj bayaan bazi bhi dekhliye
achhi ghazal hui hai
take care
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saare sher hi badhiya haiN...meri jaanib se daad o mubaaraqbaad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega...
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teree baahon men dam nikal hai rahaa,
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dosto , meree shaayri men romance kabhee nahee rahaa . aaj koshish kar rahaa hu ki kuch rumaanee andaaz men likh saku. main apne maqsad men kis had tak qaamyaab rahaa? iska faislaa karna aapke hatho men hai.
aapke faisle ka intazaar rahega.........................
aankh ashqo se gar ubal jaaye.
dil teraa mom sa pighal jaaye.
seep men boond jaise pal jaaye,
dur* men aashiq tera ye dhal jaaye.
teree yaade hai meree saanso men,
saans toote to ye amal jaaye.
jaate jaate zaraa mudo to sahee,
dil isee baat pe bahal jaaye.
aankho aankho men raat hotee hai,
raat bhar gugtagoo ye chal jaaye.
teree baahon men dam nikal hai rahaa,
maut kuch aur der tal jaaye.
kyun UFAQ mujhse baato baato men,
naam muh se teraa nikal jaaye.
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teree baahon men dam nikal hai rahaa,
maut kuch aur der tal jaaye.
Awesome...!!!!!!
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bahut khoob ... uffak ji
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dil se daad hazir hai ... yuun hee likhte rahiye ... radhe radhe ............
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waah waah waah ufak ji. Intehaayee khoobsurat ghazal. Har sher mein ek dilkash ada hai. Daad o mubarakbaad.
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jaate jaate zaraa mudo to sahee,
dil isee baat pe bahal jaaye.
wow ........ye movie pe dekhte the
aaj bayaan bazi bhi dekhliye
achhi ghazal hui hai
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