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Ghazal: Bahte daryaa sa. - 5th December 2011, 11:17 AM
sdc pariwaar ke sabhee sadasyo ko mera dono haath jodkar namaskar.kaise hai aap sab log? ek bar phir se main apnee ek aur koshish laker aap logo ke saamne hazir hun.aap logo kee beshkimatee raay ka intazaar rahenga.
jab bhi manzil ke sadaao se mai thak jaata hu.
bahte daryaa sa jahaa par hu thithak jaata hu.

jab bhi udhtaa hu falak choone ke hasrat lekar,
mai kisee padh ke tahnee pe atak jaata hu.

harf do pyaar se kah apna banaa lo mujhko,
mai aisee shaakh hu, phoolo se lachak jaata hu.

tumhare dard ke pyaale hai do aakhe meree,
koi kuch yaad dilaata hai chhalak jaata hu.

sard rishte mere jab dil ko kapaa jaate hai,
apne ghutno pe mai sar rakhke dubak jaata hu.

lau ki roshan thi jo raaho men ujaale ke lie,
uske dhuye men kahee khoke bhatak jaata hu.

mai nakhabar teri mahfil men chalaa aaya tha,
bin bulaaya hu yahaa par so "UFAQ" jaata hu.
   
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jab bhi udhtaa hu falak choone ke hasrat lekar,
mai kisee padh ke tahnee pe atak jaata hu.

harf do pyaar se kah apna banaa lo mujhko,
mai aisee shaakh hu, phoolo se lachak jaata hu.

Wah!!...bohat khoob!!.....



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jab bhi manzil ke sadaao se mai thak jaata hu.
bahte daryaa sa jahaa par hu thithak jaata hu.

jab bhi udhtaa hu falak choone ke hasrat lekar,
mai kisee padh ke tahnee pe atak jaata hu.

harf do pyaar se kah apna banaa lo mujhko,
mai aisee shaakh hu, phoolo se lachak jaata hu.

tumhare dard ke pyaale hai do aakhe meree,
koi kuch yaad dilaata hai chhalak jaata hu.

sard rishte mere jab dil ko kapaa jaate hai,
apne ghutno pe mai sar rakhke dubak jaata hu.

lau ki roshan thi jo raaho men ujaale ke lie,
uske dhuye men kahee khoke bhatak jaata hu.

mai nakhabar teri mahfil men chalaa aaya tha,
bin bulaaya hu yahaa par so "UFAQ" jaata hu.
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sdc pariwaar ke sabhee sadasyo ko mera dono haath jodkar namaskar.kaise hai aap sab log? ek bar phir se main apnee ek aur koshish laker aap logo ke saamne hazir hun.aap logo kee beshkimatee raay ka intazaar rahenga.
jab bhi manzil ke sadaao se mai thak jaata hu.
bahte daryaa sa jahaa par hu thithak jaata hu.

jab bhi udhtaa hu falak choone ke hasrat lekar,
mai kisee padh ke tahnee pe atak jaata hu.

harf do pyaar se kah apna banaa lo mujhko,
mai aisee shaakh hu, phoolo se lachak jaata hu.

tumhare dard ke pyaale hai do aakhe meree,
koi kuch yaad dilaata hai chhalak jaata hu.

sard rishte mere jab dil ko kapaa jaate hai,
apne ghutno pe mai sar rakhke dubak jaata hu.

lau ki roshan thi jo raaho men ujaale ke lie,
uske dhuye men kahee khoke bhatak jaata hu.

mai nakhabar teri mahfil men chalaa aaya tha,
bin bulaaya hu yahaa par so "UFAQ" jaata hu.
kyaa likhte ho yaar.................... ghazab ho.......... ek do jagah.... kasar hai

par ... mujhe bhi sikhaa do.............. i am huge fan of urs................
dil choo lete ho...... pata nahi kya kya

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kyaa likhte ho yaar.................... ghazab ho.......... ek do jagah.... kasar hai
aapko mera likha ghazab lagta hai.mere liye isse bada compliment nahee ho sakata. aur rahee baat kasar ke to bhai aapse gujaarish hai aap wo kasar bataa de taaki mai aage kabhi un galtiyo ko na duraahu.
par ... mujhe bhi sikhaa do.............. i am huge fan of urs................
dil choo lete ho...... pata nahi kya kya
aree.....ye kya kah rahe hai bhai? aap jaise behatreen shayar ko mujh jaisa nausikhiyaa kya sikhaaynga? ........mai to khud aapka bahut bada mureed hoon.
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tumheN padh kar apni hi yaad aati hai.......................
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sdc pariwaar ke sabhee sadasyo ko mera dono haath jodkar namaskar.kaise hai aap sab log? ek bar phir se main apnee ek aur koshish laker aap logo ke saamne hazir hun.aap logo kee beshkimatee raay ka intazaar rahenga.
jab bhi manzil ke sadaao se mai thak jaata hu.
bahte daryaa sa jahaa par hu thithak jaata hu.

jab bhi udhtaa hu falak choone ke hasrat lekar,
mai kisee padh ke tahnee pe atak jaata hu.

harf do pyaar se kah apna banaa lo mujhko,
mai aisee shaakh hu, phoolo se lachak jaata hu.

tumhare dard ke pyaale hai do aakhe meree,
koi kuch yaad dilaata hai chhalak jaata hu.

sard rishte mere jab dil ko kapaa jaate hai,
apne ghutno pe mai sar rakhke dubak jaata hu.

lau ki roshan thi jo raaho men ujaale ke lie,
uske dhuye men kahee khoke bhatak jaata hu.

mai nakhabar teri mahfil men chalaa aaya tha,
bin bulaaya hu yahaa par so "UFAQ" jaata hu.
Bahot hi umdaa ... padh ke swaad aa gaya ... bas ek hi baat jahan me aayi ki waah ... waah ustaad waah !!
Aise hi likhte rahiye ... Sadaa khush rahiye ...
Duayein ... aur daad bhi qubool karein !!

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sdc pariwaar ke sabhee sadasyo ko mera dono haath jodkar namaskar.kaise hai aap sab log? ek bar phir se main apnee ek aur koshish laker aap logo ke saamne hazir hun.aap logo kee beshkimatee raay ka intazaar rahenga.
jab bhi manzil ke sadaao se mai thak jaata hu.
bahte daryaa sa jahaa par hu thithak jaata hu.

jab bhi udhtaa hu falak choone ke hasrat lekar,
mai kisee padh ke tahnee pe atak jaata hu.

harf do pyaar se kah apna banaa lo mujhko,
mai aisee shaakh hu, phoolo se lachak jaata hu.

tumhare dard ke pyaale hai do aakhe meree,
koi kuch yaad dilaata hai chhalak jaata hu.

sard rishte mere jab dil ko kapaa jaate hai,
apne ghutno pe mai sar rakhke dubak jaata hu.

lau ki roshan thi jo raaho men ujaale ke lie,
uske dhuye men kahee khoke bhatak jaata hu.

mai nakhabar teri mahfil men chalaa aaya tha,
bin bulaaya hu yahaa par so "UFAQ" jaata hu.
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jab bhi manzil ke sadaao se mai thak jaata hu.
bahte daryaa sa jahaa par hu thithak jaata hu.

jab bhi udhtaa hu falak choone ke hasrat lekar,
mai kisee padh ke tahnee pe atak jaata hu.

harf do pyaar se kah apna banaa lo mujhko,
mai aisee shaakh hu, phoolo se lachak jaata hu.

tumhare dard ke pyaale hai do aakhe meree,
koi kuch yaad dilaata hai chhalak jaata hu.

sard rishte mere jab dil ko kapaa jaate hai,
apne ghutno pe mai sar rakhke dubak jaata hu.

lau ki roshan thi jo raaho men ujaale ke lie,
uske dhuye men kahee khoke bhatak jaata hu.

mai nakhabar teri mahfil men chalaa aaya tha,
bin bulaaya hu yahaa par so "UFAQ" jaata hu.
bahut khoob ... uffaq ji ... dil se daad ... radhe radhe ..............

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jab bhi udhtaa hu falak choone ke hasrat lekar,
mai kisee padh ke tahnee pe atak jaata hu.

harf do pyaar se kah apna banaa lo mujhko,
mai aisee shaakh hu, phoolo se lachak jaata hu.

Wah!!...bohat khoob!!.....


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sdc pariwaar ke sabhee sadasyo ko mera dono haath jodkar namaskar.kaise hai aap sab log? ek bar phir se main apnee ek aur koshish laker aap logo ke saamne hazir hun.aap logo kee beshkimatee raay ka intazaar rahenga.
jab bhi manzil ke sadaao se mai thak jaata hu.
bahte daryaa sa jahaa par hu thithak jaata hu.

jab bhi udhtaa hu falak choone ke hasrat lekar,
mai kisee padh ke tahnee pe atak jaata hu.

harf do pyaar se kah apna banaa lo mujhko,
mai aisee shaakh hu, phoolo se lachak jaata hu.

tumhare dard ke pyaale hai do aakhe meree,
koi kuch yaad dilaata hai chhalak jaata hu.

sard rishte mere jab dil ko kapaa jaate hai,
apne ghutno pe mai sar rakhke dubak jaata hu.

lau ki roshan thi jo raaho men ujaale ke lie,
uske dhuye men kahee khoke bhatak jaata hu.

mai nakhabar teri mahfil men chalaa aaya tha,
bin bulaaya hu yahaa par so "UFAQ" jaata hu.
wah, bahut khoob uffak saheb, ghazal bahut badhiya hui hai...
dil se daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega...

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sdc pariwaar ke sabhee sadasyo ko mera dono haath jodkar namaskar.kaise hai aap sab log? ek bar phir se main apnee ek aur koshish laker aap logo ke saamne hazir hun.aap logo kee beshkimatee raay ka intazaar rahenga.
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jab bhi udhtaa hu falak choone ke hasrat lekar,
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harf do pyaar se kah apna banaa lo mujhko,
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tumhare dard ke pyaale hai do aakhe meree,
koi kuch yaad dilaata hai chhalak jaata hu.

sard rishte mere jab dil ko kapaa jaate hai,
apne ghutno pe mai sar rakhke dubak jaata hu.

lau ki roshan thi jo raaho men ujaale ke lie,
uske dhuye men kahee khoke bhatak jaata hu.

mai nakhabar teri mahfil men chalaa aaya tha,

bin bulaaya hu yahaa par so "UFAQ" jaata hu.
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sdc pariwaar ke sabhee sadasyo ko mera dono haath jodkar namaskar.kaise hai aap sab log? ek bar phir se main apnee ek aur koshish laker aap logo ke saamne hazir hun.aap logo kee beshkimatee raay ka intazaar rahenga.
jab bhi manzil ke sadaao se mai thak jaata hu.
bahte daryaa sa jahaa par hu thithak jaata hu.

jab bhi udhtaa hu falak choone ke hasrat lekar,
mai kisee padh ke tahnee pe atak jaata hu.

harf do pyaar se kah apna banaa lo mujhko,
mai aisee shaakh hu, phoolo se lachak jaata hu.

tumhare dard ke pyaale hai do aakhe meree,
koi kuch yaad dilaata hai chhalak jaata hu.

sard rishte mere jab dil ko kapaa jaate hai,
apne ghutno pe mai sar rakhke dubak jaata hu.

lau ki roshan thi jo raaho men ujaale ke lie,
uske dhuye men kahee khoke bhatak jaata hu.

mai nakhabar teri mahfil men chalaa aaya tha,
bin bulaaya hu yahaa par so "UFAQ" jaata hu.
Waahhh.....Behad umdaa ghazal hui hai.....

nakhabar...ye lafz naheeN khulaa mujh par. BatayeNge to mere ilm meiN bhi izaafa hogaa.

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Waahhh.....Behad umdaa ghazal hui hai.....

nakhabar...ye lafz naheeN khulaa mujh par. BatayeNge to mere ilm meiN bhi izaafa hogaa.


daad ke liye aapka behad shukrguzar hoon.

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harf do pyaar se kah apna banaa lo mujhko,
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wah wah wah jii... kia hi baat hai... dherooN daad
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wah wah wah jii... kia hi baat hai... dherooN daad
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jab bhi udhtaa hu falak choone ke hasrat lekar,
mai kisee padh ke tahnee pe atak jaata hu.

harf do pyaar se kah apna banaa lo mujhko,
mai aisee shaakh hu, phoolo se lachak jaata hu.

tumhare dard ke pyaale hai do aakhe meree,
koi kuch yaad dilaata hai chhalak jaata hu.

bahot khub uff ak sahab
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