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...toh kya hoga - 27th January 2013, 07:24 PM
Unke deedar pe bhi jo barsaat na hui,,
to kya hoga..
Lab khamosh par ankhon se baat na hui, to kya hoga.

Chamchamaate hue sitaare, khushnuma chaand,
Rehmatein falak ki hamare saath na hui,
To kya hoga.

Sandali saansein, makhmali farsh, narm hawayein,
Aise Mehekte phoolon ki saugaat na hui, to kya hoga.

Kalaayiyon ka thartharaana, palkon ka jhukana,
Khwahishon se jo sharm ki maat na hui, to kya hoga.

Sab khwaab hai, sab hasratein hai, saare khayaal 'sushil',
Jo kabhi aisi haseen raat na hui, to kya hoga.

gul ko zamane mein, gul-e-nayaab kehte hai,
kuchh likhne ke pehle aapko aadaab kehte hai.
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16th February 2013, 09:23 PM
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Unke deedar pe bhi jo barsaat na hui,,
to kya hoga..
Lab khamosh par ankhon se baat na hui, to kya hoga.

Chamchamaate hue sitaare, khushnuma chaand,
Rehmatein falak ki hamare saath na hui,
To kya hoga.

Sandali saansein, makhmali farsh, narm hawayein,
Aise Mehekte phoolon ki saugaat na hui, to kya hoga.

Kalaayiyon ka thartharaana, palkon ka jhukana,
Khwahishon se jo sharm ki maat na hui, to kya hoga.

Sab khwaab hai, sab hasratein hai, saare khayaal 'sushil',
Jo kabhi aisi haseen raat na hui, to kya hoga.

Good one sushil ji...........................



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Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...

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thnks - 26th February 2013, 07:53 PM
thnk u zainyji...............................

gul ko zamane mein, gul-e-nayaab kehte hai,
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27th February 2013, 08:20 AM
bahot khoob Sushil jee...... likhte raheN....

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28th February 2013, 11:21 AM
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1st March 2013, 05:05 PM
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Unke deedar pe bhi jo barsaat na hui,,
to kya hoga..
Lab khamosh par ankhon se baat na hui, to kya hoga.

Chamchamaate hue sitaare, khushnuma chaand,
Rehmatein falak ki hamare saath na hui,
To kya hoga.

Sandali saansein, makhmali farsh, narm hawayein,
Aise Mehekte phoolon ki saugaat na hui, to kya hoga.

Kalaayiyon ka thartharaana, palkon ka jhukana,
Khwahishon se jo sharm ki maat na hui, to kya hoga.

Sab khwaab hai, sab hasratein hai, saare khayaal 'sushil',
Jo kabhi aisi haseen raat na hui, to kya hoga.
Sushil Ji Namaskaar,

Aap ko pehli baar pa.Dha. Aapki imagery kamaal ki hai. Bahut khoob. Ye sher kuch khaas lagaa:

"Kalaayiyon ka thartharaana, palkon ka jhukana,
Khwahishon se jo sharm ki maat na hui, to kya hoga."

Bahot hi haseen manzarkashi. Daad qubool farmayeN.

Likhte raheN, khush raheN.
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7th March 2013, 07:00 PM
Thnk u @sameer shad, @silent tears, & @ nadaan...
I really loved ur replies..

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7th March 2013, 07:21 PM
Very Nice, Sushil jee, ..................................

KAVITA NEGI

Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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thnks - 11th March 2013, 11:29 AM
thnks a lot kavita.......................................... .............

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