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24th March 2013, 04:20 PM
Dear members ,
jaisaa ke hum sab jaante hi hain ke mushayra lagbhag start ho gaya hai... members se guzaarish hai ke jis jis ki bhi baari aati jaaye , wo saahebaan pehle apna kalaam yahan post kareN.. new post meiN..... uske baad apna kalaam padheN online... baaki members apni raay yahin comment ke through ya mushyre me mike ke through online hi de sakte hain.... shukriyaa.. Shaad... |
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24th March 2013, 04:54 PM
Sab doston ko mera salaam ,
Main apni masrufiyaat ki wajah se online mushayre me shamil nahi ho pa raha hun, lekin ,ap sab doston aur mushayre ki kamyabi ki duaon ke sath ek nayee ghazal yahan zarur pesh kar raha hun, mulaheza farmayen…. Ghamzadah chehre pe halki si hansi achhi lagi, Ghup andhere mein zara si roshni achhi lagi……. Unki surat aur na unki dosti achhi lagi, Khoon-e-nahaq se jinhen aaloodgi achhi lagi……. Gulshan-e-dil mein nayee ummid paida ho gayii, Darmiyan phoolon ke nanhi si kali achhi lagi……. Yeh junoon-e-ishq mein had se guzar jana tera, Aaj phir mujhko teri deewangi achhi lagi……. Thak chuka tha main samandar ke thapedon se bahot, Dheere dheere ik nadi behti hui achhi lagi……. Likh diya kaghaz pe mehfil ki har ik ladki ka naam, Mujhse ye puchha gaya tha kaun si achhi lagi……. Zindagi phir deen-o-duniya mein ulajh kar reh gayii, Kamsini ke daur mein awaargi achhi lagi……. Jo kahani kehke bachpan mein sula deti thi maan, Wo kahani zindigi mein jab suni achhi lagi……. Sunke mera naam mehfil se chale jate the jo Unko bhi ‘Faizan’ meri shayri achhi lagi……. . . Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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24th March 2013, 04:56 PM
Jo ham ne bheja wo khat kaa jawaab kaisa lagaa
hamaarey hoNt saa taazah gulaab kaisa lagaa Zaraa bataao tumhen is ka tajrubah hai bahot hadoN me rah ke machaltaa shabaab kaisa lagaa tumheN to yaad bhi hoNgey fezaa me hachkoley shikaar pew o jhapaTtaa o’qaab kaisa lagaa bataao naa mujhe lazzat ki sab nayee jehteN dehaan e yaar se ristaa lo’aab kaisa lagaa gulaab aashnaa hoNtoN pe shabnami booNdeN nawaazishaat se mahkaa neqaab kaisa lagaa shabaab e husn ke makhroot zaaichey ki kaho ye apney tarz kaa baaNkaa nawaab kaisa lagaa kaho ki kaisey katey wasl ke haseeN lamhey hamaarey jism ka meethaa azaab kaisa lagaa kaho bhi daastaaN .. hassaas zaaviyoN ki qasam chanaab aap ko merey janaab kaisa lagaa agar kaheen aor post karna aho to plz aap log is ko saheeh jagah post kar lijiye mujhe jitnaa samajh me ayaa wo kardiya aage aap log sanbhalo  |
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24th March 2013, 04:59 PM
Ghamzadah chehre pe halki si hansi achhi lagi,
Ghup andhere mein zara si roshni achhi lagi……. Unki surat aur na unki dosti achhi lagi, Khoon-e-nahaq se jinhen aaloodgi achhi lagi……. Gulshan-e-dil mein nayee ummid paida ho gayii, Darmiyan phoolon ke nanhi si kali achhi lagi……. Yeh junoon-e-ishq mein had se guzar jana tera, Aaj phir mujhko teri deewangi achhi lagi……. Thak chuka tha main samandar ke thapedon se bahot, Dheere dheere ik nadi behti hui achhi lagi……. Likh diya kaghaz pe mehfil ki har ik ladki ka naam, Mujhse ye puchha gaya tha kaun si achhi lagi……. Zindagi phir deen-o-duniya mein ulajh kar reh gayii, Kamsini ke daur mein awaargi achhi lagi……. Jo kahani kehke bachpan mein sula deti thi maan, Wo kahani zindigi mein jab suni achhi lagi……. Sunke mera naam mehfil se chale jate the jo Unko bhi ‘Faizan’ meri shayri achhi lagi……. waah waah bhai kiya kahne badee peyaari ghazal hai kuchh ashaar to aise hain jin ko dawaam haasil ho jaana chaahiye bhai yaqeen kijiye mazaa aa gaya aap ka kalaam parhe ke allaah kare zore qalam aor zeyaadah |
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24th March 2013, 05:02 PM
dostoN ek Ghazal jo peSh kee thee pehle fir se aap sab ke saath yahaaN baaNT rahaa huuN
mulaa'iizaa farmaaiiye ab Zindagee meiN meri koee KhwaahiSheN baaQee nahiiN jiss ke liye thee KhwaahiSheN wo lauT ke aayee nahiiN Ye pyaar kyaa haii cheez ees meiN bhalaa kyaa baat haii? maiN faasalaa raKhtaa huN ke ees sey mi’ree yaaree nahiiN Ke dosatoN ne thaa kahaa tuu pyaar karnaa naa kabhee Jab vaar ye kartaa hai to jaataa kabhee Khaalee nahiiN wo chaahatee hongee mujhe Khud se bhi zyaadaaH haii yaqeeN Shaayad tabhee ussne mi’ree kasmeN kabhee Khaayee nahiiN maiN huuN safar wo jiss meiN saaye bhee nahiiN aate naZar Khud humsafar huuN Khud hi kaa meraa ko’ee saathee nahiiN Ye Zindagee ik raaz haii meeThaa bhi haii kaDwaa bhi haii dil se jiyo to baat kya!! par dil hi to raaZee nahiiN Uljhaa nahiiN haaraa nahiiN Shikwaa nahiiN taNhaa nahiiN maiN “JOSH” huuN maayoos ho kar Zindagee kaaTee nahiiN haii joSh meiN to joSh kee baateN nah kar ey! “JOSH” tuu Shaayar hai tuu Shaayar hi reh daryaa hai tuu maajhee nahiiN |
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24th March 2013, 05:03 PM
waahhhh janaab fezan..... bahot khoob kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.. mazaa aa gayaa.....
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24th March 2013, 05:06 PM
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24th March 2013, 05:27 PM
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bahut khoob ghazal kahi.......wah |
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24th March 2013, 05:42 PM
bewajah ..bewajah...
haaN bewajah ...na ho Judaa bewajah ..bewajah.. haaN bewajah...na ho Khafaa maiN chaahuN tujh ko tu chaaheN mujh ko rab ko haii pataa merii haNsii tu tu merii dunyaa merii tuu duaa-(2) haaN merii tuu duaa... KhaamoShii deKho mujh meiN kyuuN Chhaa rahiiN haii dooriyaaN donoN meiN hi kyuuN baDh rahiiN haii raasate KhaahishoN ke simaTne lage haiN haath thaame magar fir bhi chalte raheN haiN KhuShiyoN ka chaltaa raheN silsilaa Silsilaa...... Silsilaa... bewajah ..bewajah... haaN bewajah ...na ho Judaa bewajah ..bewajah... haaN bewajah ...na ho Khafaa maiN paauN tujh ko tu paayeN mujh ko saNg rahe sadaa chaahat merii tu tu merii raahat dil meiN tuu hi basaa- (2) haaN dil meiN tuu hi basaa.. bewajah na ho judaa... na ho Khafaa na ho Judaa...! |
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24th March 2013, 06:31 PM
Aayee hai terii yaad bahot muddatoN ke baad,
Main phir hhuaa barbaad , bahot muddatoN ke baad. Circket si ho gayee hai merii zindgee jaana, Hoon tanha o Nabaad bahot muddatoN ke baad. ik pal me kooch kar gayee /duniyaaa se wo chidiyaa, Mujrim huaa saiyaad bahot muddatoN ke baad. Guzre tere kooche se hainSaaqi kuch is kadar, Hum ban gaye Ilhaal bahot muddaton ke baad. Aaye jo Nazar tum to machalne lage ArmaaN, Zindaa huii fariyaad bahot Muddaton ke baad. Sochaa ke chupaa loge sab raaz dostoN se, Rone lage ho Shaad bahot muddatoN ke baad. |
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24th March 2013, 07:14 PM
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Her ek sher lajawaaab.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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24th March 2013, 07:23 PM
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Bohat khoob Hassas sahab................. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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24th March 2013, 07:26 PM
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Bohat achcha lagaa aapko sunker....u have great voice... Ab tou aap sab ko sunne baar baar mushaira rakhna padega..... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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24th March 2013, 07:27 PM
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Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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24th March 2013, 08:30 PM
Arvind ji, Danny ji, Pradhyuman ji, Zidd sahab, Maikash ji, Dhaval bhai, Masood sahab, praneeta, Ananth ji,Ahmad bhai,Shaad sahab..
Thank you all for being a part of this mushaira.... Bohat achcha lagaa aap sab ko sunker.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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24th March 2013, 10:41 PM
Uffffffff maiN miss kar gaya...
Faizaan Sahaab Masood Sahaab, Shaad Sahaab Dhaval Bhai aap logoN ke yeH khoobsurat kalaam padhkar hi inki khoobsurati ka ahsaas ho raha hai.. But I missed by my mistake... Koshish karuNga agla mushayra atend karuN.. Keep arrange next mushayra very soon... |
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25th March 2013, 08:23 AM
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regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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25th March 2013, 09:49 AM
sabhee dostoN kaa maiN tah-e-dil se ShuKriyaah adaa kartaa huuN aap sab ne un paloN ko yaadgaar banaa diyaa mere liye ... yeh meraa pehlaa mauqaa thaa jab maiN muShaa'iire meiN Shaamil huaa... aur Shayri Pariwaar ne yeh mauqaa diyaa mujhe bahot hi KhuShii huii.... be-Shaq kuChh GhaltiyaaN bhee huiii isske liye maiN aap sab se mwaafii bhee maangtaa huuN poorii Team ki taraf se... par aage se jo bhee GhaltiyaaN huii hai uss mein sudhaar kaise laa sakte haiN wo bhee zaruur sochenge...
par sach kahuuN dil se bahot hi mazaa aayaa aap sab ko sun kar.. aik alag hi ehsaas hotaa hai ki jin ki Ghazal.. nazm ko aap paDhte aayeN ho unse baat karne kaa aur unki aawaaz sunne kaa anmol mauqaa mileN... hum sabhee alag alag jaGah se haiN par fir bhee saath hai Shayri Pariwaar ke Zar'iiye hum sab aik doosre se juDe huye haiN ees baat kaa mujhe sukooN aur garv donoN hai aik baar fir se aap sab kaa bahot bahot ShuKriyaah fir se zaruur milenge KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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25th March 2013, 09:50 AM
ShuKriyaaH ShuKriyaaH ey mi'ree ziNdagee Chheen lee jo merii har khuShee har KhuShee chaar din thi milee jo ti'ree *ham-damee fir kisii se mi'ree duShmanee naa hu’ee *ham-damee - dostee dil wafaadaar hotaa nahiiN har dafaa seeKh le maan le baat haii ye sahee chaahatee aur kyaa haii nazar aag see Khaak mujhko *saraapa to haii kar chukee *saraapa - sar se pa'er taq deKhne ko mileN baaGh meiN gul hi gul *Khaar ko baat ye Zor se haii chubhee *Khaar- kaaNTaa *Shams par naa sahee chaaNd par liKh kabhee Kaun sii baat pe haiN sitaare dukhee?? *Shams - sUraj chaaNdanee aapko DhooNDhne chal paDee DhooNDhne "JOSH" ko aa gayee *teeragee *teeragee - Darkness |
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25th March 2013, 09:51 AM
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25th March 2013, 09:54 AM
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  ab aap hi mujhe channe ke jhaaD par chaDhaa rahen haiN... ShuKriyaah ShuKriyaah sab ko mil kar aur sab ko sun kar mujhe bhee bahot achChhaa lagaa... aage aur bhee kaamyaab honaa hai to taiyaar rahiye ees ke liye duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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25th March 2013, 09:55 AM
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25th March 2013, 09:55 AM
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25th March 2013, 10:24 AM
Aadaab sabhi dostoN aur members,
kal jo bhi kuch huaa hai wo Shayri dot com ki history ka sabse yaadgar din raha hogaa... main kehna chahunga jis kisi mitr ne isme chook ki hai, yaqeenan usne bahot badee cheez miss ki hai...... main aabhari hoon hamaare doston kaa jinhone waqt nikaala aur hamaare saath maujood rahe.... doston ka naam main likhna chahunga yahaan jinse ye mushayre ka program safal ho saka hai.... sabse pahle arvind vyas saahab (mushayre ki jaan they janaab) fir hamaare Danny bhaiyaa (thodaa sharmile hain) par bhai agli baar se sharam nahi chalegii... Zidd saahab.... (aawaaz me bhi damm hai, par bola bahot kamm hai) Maikash bhai (aawaz hi suinkar maikashi chaa gayee) bhai next time aapko sunaaebina jane nahi denge.. Dhaval bhai (he is a real rock star, yaqeen nahi hai khud aa ke dekhiye agli baar) Zainy jee (Mohtarma zainy jee..  )Pradhyuman bhai... (amaa loot liyaa mehfil ko aapne, khoob rang jamaya bhai ) Ahmad Hyderabadi bhai... (bhai mike sudhar gaya aapka.. hehehhehe) Masood hassaas bhai.. (bhai is baar aapko sun nahi sake magar ummeed hai a gli baar jab aap aaenge to aisi kuch technical problem na ho insha allah, shukriyaa jo aap tashreef laaye) Praneeta jee and anant jee...... sachkahun to i missed u both , sun nahi saka, idhar se bhi kuch disturbance ho gaya tha.... Aur finally aapka khadim .......... Shaad. magar jitno ko bhi suna, baat ki, mahol jama diya aap sab ne doston... main dil se shukrguzaar hoon aap sab ka jo is yaadgaar din ko banane me aap sab ne hame sahyog kiyaa aur apna keemti waqt us jagah ko diyaa jo bas aap logon ke dam se hi chal rahi hai..... Aglee baar se koshsoh rahegii ke is baar jo thodii bahotbhool chook ho gayee hai use door kiya jaae... aur ye mushyra safalta ke paaydaan pe chadhta rahe..... shukriyaa tahe dil se..... Shaad... |
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25th March 2013, 02:59 PM
Aadaab wa Tasleemaat Bhaieeo wa Behno!
Kal jo kuch pal aap sabkay saath guzaaray, one of the highlights of my happy times kahoon to baat chchotee hogee! Mayn aap sabki maazrat ka taalib hoon ki zyaada waqt shareek nahee ho saka, aur apna kalaam na paysh kar paanay par bhi aapsab ki maazrat chahoonga! Danny Bhaee, Arvind Jee, Masood Bhaee, Dhaval Bhaee, Bismil Bhaee, Zidd Saahab, Zainy Behna, Shoaib Bhaee, Maikash bhaee aap sab ko sunkar bayhad khushee huee.... maano zindgee ki ayk tamanna kuchh had tak poori hueee. Danny bhaee aap ko jaysa tasavvur kiya thaa aapki awaaz bilkul waysee hee muhtaram aur shafaqqat bharee payee, muaaf keejayga aapsay sahee baat nahee kar paaya! Iska mujhay afsos rahayga! Dhaval Bhaee, MashaAllah aap bayhad gifted shakqs hayn is baat mayn koee shak nahee, aapki tarannum bharee payshkash nay dil jeet liya! Bismil bhaee aapsay ayk baday arsay say raabta nahee raha laykin kal aapki awaaz mayn aapkay kalaam ko sun yay shikayat bhi door hogayee! Aaap bayhad khushgawaar shaqs mahsoos huay aur aapko sun bayhad khushee huee!! Sameer Bhaee aur Zainy Behna, aap dono ko sun aysa laga goya mayray apnaon say mil rahaa hoon. Shaad bhaee aapki kaavishaon nay samaa baandhnay mayn kamee na kee! Afsos mayn aur dayr ruk paataaa! Anyways InshaAllah Allah paak aur bhi mawqay ataa karayga! Ommeed haye Allah Paak say ki Yay silsila aagay bhi aur bhi kaamyaabee aur taraqqi haasil karayga! Thank You All Once Again!!! Ahmad |
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25th March 2013, 05:23 PM
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namaste! aap Shaamil huye dil ko baDii hi KhuShii huii... agli baar aur bhee behtar koShiSh hongee .. bas aap sab kaa saath yuuNhi miltaa raheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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25th March 2013, 07:47 PM
Online Mushaayere MeN Shirqat Karne Waale Sabhi MiTroN Ko
Meri Aor Se Haardik Badhaaii .... !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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25th March 2013, 08:00 PM
waah faizaan saaheb ... waah
aapki shayri ke to hum pehle se hi kaayal haiN daad Qubool farmaaeiN bahut khoob masood saaheb behtareen ghazal shayad agli baar sun sakuN aapko daad haazir hai .. Qubool farmaaeiN dhaval bhai .. ye kalaam pehle bhi dil pe chaa chuke haiN .. iss baar humne mauka gawaaN diya aapko sun ne ka par agli baar aisa na ho ye hi dua karenge ..apna khyaal rakheiN daad Qubool farmaaeiN shaad bhai ... daad se pehle aapko mubaarakbaad bahut badi zimmedaari nibhaii aapne .. mujhe behad afsoos raha yahaN mauzood na rahne ka .. shayad agli baar naseeb kaam kar jaaye behtareen ashaar rahe aapke .. aapke bhi apna alag hi andaaz hai .. mizaaj aashikana hai to jachte haiN aap pe ye .. daad haazir hai .. Qubool farmaaeiN apna khyaal rakheiN guzaarish karunga jin sahebaan ne kalaam parha ho vo post kareiN aur mahroom membraan ki tishnagii door kareiN |
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26th March 2013, 11:00 AM
aapki beintehaan muhabat, aur pazeeraai se dil mamnoon ho gaya kshitij bhai..... aapne jo izzat bakshi hai uske liye main aapa tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon....
but ek baat sach kahun bhai.. we missed u alot.......  hope ke next time u will be there......... take care Shaad... |
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26th March 2013, 11:50 AM
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namaste! aage aur bhee bahot kuChh seeKhnaa hai bas aap saath dete rahiyengaaKhuSh rahiye aapka ~Dhaval |
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31st March 2013, 11:49 PM
i missed it due to some unavoidable engagements..lekin sab ko yahan pha'd kar boht boht maza ayaa...... sabhi ko dheeron daad.... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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1st April 2013, 11:21 AM
bahot bahot shukriyaa Hassan bhai.. agli dafaa aapkiii aamad ka intzaar rahega... bahot jald hum fir se announcement karenge agle musahre ka.... tab tak intzaar kareN.. aur ksii acchi si ghazal ka majmooN socheN........
apna khayaal rakkheN.... khush rahiye Shaad... |
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1st April 2013, 02:45 PM
Shoaib bhai!
aainda mushairay ka be-sabri se intezaar rahe ga.... Khush rahiye..apna khiyal rakhiye.. Allah hafiz tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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