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wo gul hai gul khilana chaahta hai - 12th January 2013, 02:30 AM
eyk haliki phulki ghazal sdc ke ahbaab ki nazr


wo mujh ko warghalaanaa chaahta hai
diye ki lao baRhaana chaahta hai

mujhe uNgli thamana chaahta hai
magar pahloo bachana chaahta hai

mujhey pal pal jalana chaahta hai
sazaa bhi shaaeraanah chaahta hai

jisey who toRtaa hai muskuraa kar
usee dil me Thekaanah chaahta hai

wo rakhta hai nazar tirchee hamesha
magar pakka nishaana chaahta hai

wo qaatil hai ye sab hi jaantey hain
usey phir bhi zamaanah chaahta hai

merey pahloo me baithaa hai khafa saa
wo har dhab se sataanaa chaahta hai

mujhe baahoN me apni qaid kar ke
paseene me nahana chaahta hai

bahaaroN ka pata detaa hai maosam
koyi ab muskuraana chaahta hai

mujhe paighaam detaa hai nazar sey
wo gul hai gul khilana chaahta hai

ye dil bas husn ka rasiya nahi jee
adaa bhi kaaferaanah chaahta hai

naya hai daor aor hassas teywar
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eyk haliki phulki ghazal sdc ke ahbaab ki nazr


wo mujh ko warghalaanaa chaahta hai
diye ki lao baRhaana chaahta hai

mujhe uNgli thamana chaahta hai
magar pahloo bachana chaahta hai

mujhey pal pal jalana chaahta hai
sazaa bhi shaaeraanah chaahta hai

jisey who toRtaa hai muskuraa kar
usee dil me Thekaanah chaahta hai

wo rakhta hai nazar tirchee hamesha
magar pakka nishaana chaahta hai

wo qaatil hai ye sab hi jaantey hain
usey phir bhi zamaanah chaahta hai

merey pahloo me baithaa hai khafa saa
wo har dhab se sataanaa chaahta hai

mujhe baahoN me apni qaid kar ke
paseene me nahana chaahta hai

bahaaroN ka pata detaa hai maosam
koyi ab muskuraana chaahta hai

mujhe paighaam detaa hai nazar sey
wo gul hai gul khilana chaahta hai

ye dil bas husn ka rasiya nahi jee
adaa bhi kaaferaanah chaahta hai

naya hai daor aor hassas teywar
naye charkey lagaana chaahta hai

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14th January 2013, 04:02 PM
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eyk haliki phulki ghazal sdc ke ahbaab ki nazr


wo mujh ko warghalaanaa chaahta hai
diye ki lao baRhaana chaahta hai

mujhe uNgli thamana chaahta hai
magar pahloo bachana chaahta hai

mujhey pal pal jalana chaahta hai
sazaa bhi shaaeraanah chaahta hai

jisey who toRtaa hai muskuraa kar
usee dil me Thekaanah chaahta hai

wo rakhta hai nazar tirchee hamesha
magar pakka nishaana chaahta hai

wo qaatil hai ye sab hi jaantey hain
usey phir bhi zamaanah chaahta hai

merey pahloo me baithaa hai khafa saa
wo har dhab se sataanaa chaahta hai

mujhe baahoN me apni qaid kar ke
paseene me nahana chaahta hai

bahaaroN ka pata detaa hai maosam
koyi ab muskuraana chaahta hai

mujhe paighaam detaa hai nazar sey
wo gul hai gul khilana chaahta hai

ye dil bas husn ka rasiya nahi jee
adaa bhi kaaferaanah chaahta hai

naya hai daor aor hassas teywar
naye charkey lagaana chaahta hai

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Aaj SDC me Aaya Aur Nazar Aap Ki Is KHubsurat GHazal Par Parri....
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Bahot Lutf Mila Aap Ki Ye Ghazal Parh KAr....

Dheron Daad Qabool Farmaaiye

KHush Rahiye

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20th January 2013, 11:36 AM
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20th January 2013, 06:05 PM
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eyk haliki phulki ghazal sdc ke ahbaab ki nazr


wo mujh ko warghalaanaa chaahta hai
diye ki lao baRhaana chaahta hai

mujhe uNgli thamana chaahta hai
magar pahloo bachana chaahta hai

mujhey pal pal jalana chaahta hai
sazaa bhi shaaeraanah chaahta hai

jisey who toRtaa hai muskuraa kar
usee dil me Thekaanah chaahta hai

wo rakhta hai nazar tirchee hamesha
magar pakka nishaana chaahta hai

wo qaatil hai ye sab hi jaantey hain
usey phir bhi zamaanah chaahta hai

merey pahloo me baithaa hai khafa saa
wo har dhab se sataanaa chaahta hai

mujhe baahoN me apni qaid kar ke
paseene me nahana chaahta hai

bahaaroN ka pata detaa hai maosam
koyi ab muskuraana chaahta hai

mujhe paighaam detaa hai nazar sey
wo gul hai gul khilana chaahta hai

ye dil bas husn ka rasiya nahi jee
adaa bhi kaaferaanah chaahta hai

naya hai daor aor hassas teywar
naye charkey lagaana chaahta hai

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Kyaa Nayaab Ashaar Nikaale HaiN ..... HaseeN

DilKash Ghazal Huii Janaab ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!



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Aap wakeyii bahut achha likhte haiN ..

Kuch ashaar to halke fulke the aur jo nahi the unka to kya kahna ..

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eyk haliki phulki ghazal sdc ke ahbaab ki nazr


wo mujh ko warghalaanaa chaahta hai
diye ki lao baRhaana chaahta hai

mujhe uNgli thamana chaahta hai
magar pahloo bachana chaahta hai

mujhey pal pal jalana chaahta hai
sazaa bhi shaaeraanah chaahta hai

jisey who toRtaa hai muskuraa kar
usee dil me Thekaanah chaahta hai

wo rakhta hai nazar tirchee hamesha
magar pakka nishaana chaahta hai

wo qaatil hai ye sab hi jaantey hain
usey phir bhi zamaanah chaahta hai

merey pahloo me baithaa hai khafa saa
wo har dhab se sataanaa chaahta hai

mujhe baahoN me apni qaid kar ke
paseene me nahana chaahta hai

bahaaroN ka pata detaa hai maosam
koyi ab muskuraana chaahta hai

mujhe paighaam detaa hai nazar sey
wo gul hai gul khilana chaahta hai

ye dil bas husn ka rasiya nahi jee
adaa bhi kaaferaanah chaahta hai

naya hai daor aor hassas teywar
naye charkey lagaana chaahta hai

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