8th May 2004, 08:02 PM
hiiiiiii,
aapne bahut achha likha hai.mujhe aapki ye line
bahut achhi lagi.......USE bhulayein bhi to.......satati
par ek baat maano meri aap.......
SACHHA PYAR WAHI HAI,JISME NA KOI UMIID,
NA KOI SIKAYAT HO,USKI HAR KHUSHI APNI HO.
USKE GAM ME AANKHE NAM HO,WOH JAHA BHI RAHE,
KHUSH RAHE,BAS MAAGO YEHI DUAAYE.
waise aapki aur meri kahani ek hai,payar karke bhi payar na paaya hum woh badnseeb hai.kuch galat likh diya ho to sorry.
bye take care.
muskaan.
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