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Love Tuta Hua Dil................... - 30th July 2004, 07:26 PM
TUTE HUAE PAYMANE MEIN JAAM NAHI JAATA,

ISHQ KE MARIZ KO ARAM NAHI AATA,

AYE DIL TODNE WALE TUNE YEH TO SOCHA HOTA,

KI TUTA HUA DIL KISIKE KAAM NAHI AATA
   
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hiee - 4th August 2004, 05:04 PM
hi punit,

howz u

thanks for praising.........i felt good that u liked my sher ........ aur bolo........u r jain.............right.........which shwetamber or digamber.?????????


anyways.....what do u do........

enough do reply,

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DEar priyankaji,

sahi likha hai. aap khush raho yeh prarthna hai meri bhagvan se....

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lagat hai ke aap is cheez se vakif hai ke TUTA HUA DIL KISI KE KAAM NAHI AATA"
lekin bohut khoob likha hai.
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25th November 2007, 03:14 PM
hello mr. sirjeee..... well glad to see u on my thread and want to thank you that becaue of u i visited this site again .... ur sher is really good.... and thanks once again...
   
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Smile hello - 26th November 2007, 11:26 AM
Hi priayanka,
bahut achhi shayri hai tumharee
tumhaare is aankhe timtimati billi ko dekh kar dil khush ho gaya................
puraane din yaad aa gaye.........................................
jagmagaate aur jhilmilaati shayri.com ke din....................

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30th November 2007, 05:44 PM
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Hi priayanka,
bahut achhi shayri hai tumharee
tumhaare is aankhe timtimati billi ko dekh kar dil khush ho gaya................
puraane din yaad aa gaye.........................................
jagmagaate aur jhilmilaati shayri.com ke din....................

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hey hi buddy !!! great man u r still here .... welll happy to hear from u.... and ya your foot line is really motivating ... anyways see ya....
   
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Hi priayanka,
dil toota h to aawaj to nahi aati par bina shabd palko ke bandhan tod ke aasuo ka selab utar aata h. phir dil chahta h ki aasuo ka ye selab ko kisi apne ki baho me bahe jane de.
or dil to tab bi tutta h jab apna mil kar door jara hota h...
kash aapka dil IInd condition me toota ho.
to chita mat kijiye vo bi jaldi milna chahta hoga.........
   
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1st December 2007, 10:24 PM
Dard ka ehsas janna hai to pyar kar ke dekho

Apni aankhon main kisi ko utar kar dekho

Chot un ko lage gi aansoo tumhein aa jayein ge

Ye ehsas janna ho to dil haar kar dekho
   
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3rd December 2007, 10:58 PM
Pyaar ki aanch se to patthar bhi pighal jata hai,


sache dil se sath de to naseeb bhi badal jata hai,


Pyaar ki rahon par mil jaye sacha hamsafar,


To kitna bhi gira hua insaan bhi sambhal jata hai.

AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam
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3rd December 2007, 11:49 PM
Hiiii priyanka !!!!
this is prashant ...i just joined the shayri .com n as i login i saw u r composing ...n as i read u r thought i m really impressed ...literaly u r a gret poet ..keep writing ..all d best

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3rd December 2007, 11:50 PM
Zindgi mili hai magar jine ka hosla nahi

Pyasa hu samnay hai sagar magar peene ka hosla nahi

Dil me hai bahut kuch magar unse kuch kehne ka hosla nahi

Zakham dekhe hai khaye hai par khamosh hu

Dard ke dar se unhe seene ka hosla nahi

Do kadmo par hai manzil rah bhi phoolon bhari hai

Magar tera daman chor kar jane ka hosla nahi

Raat hai tanhi hai tu hai or sirf me hu

Magar tujhe haat lagane ka hosla nahi

Tujhe pana na mumkin to nahi bahut muskil hai

Magar mujhe me tujhe bhul jane ka hosla nahi

Chlate jana musalsal chalet jana hai aadat meri

Ruk kar piche dekhne ka hosla nahi
   
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Love 4th December 2007, 09:40 PM
Kyun pyaar karne ki hadein hoti hein,

Kyun dil dene ki waje hoti hein,

Kyun jazbaaton ko dabana padta hai,

Kyun iss dil ko samjana padta hai,

Kyun har dil ko ye mehsoos nahin hota,

Kyun sabko ye manzoor nahin hota,

Kyun dil se dil nahin milta,

Kyun pyaar ka phool nahin khilta,

Kyun dil ke naghme dil nahin gaata,

Dil mein kya hai ye keh nahin pata,

Kya dil dene ki yahi saza hai,

Kya pyaar karne mein yahi mazaa hai?

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14th December 2007, 06:14 AM
hey priyanka how r u i hope you r fine you dont know me but i just read that shayri and i send you a message. by the way kya app muje bata sakti hai k aap ka dill kyu tuta hua hai, i know k kisi k personel matter me dhayan nahi dena chahiye but still i want to know that aap k sath esa to kya hua hai if you can.......... i hope you will gonna reply

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27th January 2008, 06:09 PM
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Hi priayanka,
dil toota h to aawaj to nahi aati par bina shabd palko ke bandhan tod ke aasuo ka selab utar aata h. phir dil chahta h ki aasuo ka ye selab ko kisi apne ki baho me bahe jane de.
or dil to tab bi tutta h jab apna mil kar door jara hota h...
kash aapka dil IInd condition me toota ho.
to chita mat kijiye vo bi jaldi milna chahta hoga.........

hey sanyog... tum to bahot senti ho gaye... janab na to humara dil toota hai na hi koi tension hai..... huzoor yeh sirf shayari hai ... pasand aayi ho to shukriya... or na aayi ho to batayiyega agli baar achi likhne ki koshish karungi....



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Hiiii priyanka !!!!
this is prashant ...i just joined the shayri .com n as i login i saw u r composing ...n as i read u r thought i m really impressed ...literaly u r a gret poet ..keep writing ..all d best

prashant

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27th January 2008, 06:13 PM
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hey priyanka how r u i hope you r fine you dont know me but i just read that shayri and i send you a message. by the way kya app muje bata sakti hai k aap ka dill kyu tuta hua hai, i know k kisi k personel matter me dhayan nahi dena chahiye but still i want to know that aap k sath esa to kya hua hai if you can.......... i hope you will gonna reply

bub bye and tk Cr
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sher likhne ka matlab ye nahi hota ki u have undergone that situation... sometimes its just on the mood..... like if u see some film and u feel sad so .... no probs in my life... its pretty cool and rocking...
   
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