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15th February 2010, 09:34 AM
mulakaaton ka daur badhne laga hai dheere dheere
mohabbat ka surur chadhne laga hai dheere dheere
dooba rahta hoon uske tasavvur me main
dil se mayusi ka daur jhadne laga hai dheere dheere
raah-e-ishq me unki wafa se dil aashna hai
chahat par hi unki adhne laga hai dheere dheere
fizaon me ulfat, hawaon me romaniyat hai
chehra rangat pakadhne laga hai dheere dheere
paya hai maine uski mohabbat ko jabse
kismat pe apni 'ishk' akadhne laga hai dheere dheere
Aapka Apna Ishk
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15th February 2010, 10:45 AM
fizaon me ulfat, hawaon me romaniyat hai
chehra rangat pakadhne laga hai dheere dheere
hahahaha............
koshish acchi hai ishk saheb, kaafi mushkil kaafiya chuna hai aapne...is sher ko tou badi mushkil se banaya hoga aapne........
Khair yeh sher aapke liye.......
Hua'a yeh kya isay ,ke ghayal hua'a khud hi ishk,
Ishk per ishk ka asar badhne laga hai dheere dheere
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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15th February 2010, 11:40 AM
Ishq Jii,,
Aik achii koshish per daad kabool karieN.....
Younhi likhtay rahiye,,
DuaooN k saath,,
Aap ka...
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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15th February 2010, 12:11 PM
Kya baat hai dost......!!
Tahe dil se.. daad deta hun yaar... its really nice.. kafi jazbaton me bandh ke likhi hai apne yeh ashare.. waise toh aapke har sher achhe hai... par inn do ne dil chhu liya...
kafi achhi Qlam hai aapki... yuh hi mehfil sazate rahe.. duwao ke sath
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
fizaon me ulfat, hawaon me romaniyat hai
chehra rangat pakadhne laga hai dheere dheere
paya hai maine uski mohabbat ko jabse
kismat pe apni 'ishk' akadhne laga hai dheere dheere
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15th February 2010, 05:34 PM
zainy jee
radhe radhe
koshish ko sarahne ka shukriya ... aap logon ka aise hi saath milta rahega to
yakeenan mai kuchh jaroor seekh jaunga..aise hi saath deti rahiye
aapka apna
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16th February 2010, 10:00 AM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
Ishq Jii,,
Aik achii koshish per daad kabool karieN.....
Younhi likhtay rahiye,,
DuaooN k saath,,
Aap ka...
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Hassan bhai
radhe radhe
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16th February 2010, 04:33 PM
Achcha hain.........yeh sher achcha laga
paya hai maine uski mohabbat ko jabse
kismat pe apni 'ishk' akadhne laga hai dheere dheere
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
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17th February 2010, 09:45 AM
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Kya baat hai dost......!!
Tahe dil se.. daad deta hun yaar... its really nice.. kafi jazbaton me bandh ke likhi hai apne yeh ashare.. waise toh aapke har sher achhe hai... par inn do ne dil chhu liya...
kafi achhi Qlam hai aapki... yuh hi mehfil sazate rahe.. duwao ke sath
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omi bhai
radhe radhe
hausla afzai ka shukriya dost aapne mere likhe ko pasnad kiya bahut bahut shukriya aise hi saath dete rahen koshish karoonga ki isse bhiachha likh saken
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
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17th February 2010, 10:16 AM
Nice One.............!
fizaon me ulfat, hawaon me romaniyat hai
chehra rangat pakadhne laga hai dheere dheere
tahe dil se daad hazir hai....
yunhi likhte rahen....khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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18th February 2010, 09:34 AM
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Achcha hain.........yeh sher achcha laga
paya hai maine uski mohabbat ko jabse
kismat pe apni 'ishk' akadhne laga hai dheere dheere
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sajid bhai
radhe radhe
meri rachna ko padna aur pasand karne ka shukriya aise hi saath dete rahiye
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24th February 2010, 10:04 AM
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Nice One.............!
fizaon me ulfat, hawaon me romaniyat hai
chehra rangat pakadhne laga hai dheere dheere
tahe dil se daad hazir hai....
yunhi likhte rahen....khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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naresh bhai
radhe radhe
tareef ka shukriya..aise hi saath nibhaate rahe
Aapka Apna Ishk
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24th February 2010, 01:40 PM
dooba rahta hoon uske tasavvur me main
dil se mayusi ka daur jhadne laga hai dheere dheere
fizaon me ulfat, hawaon me romaniyat hai
chehra rangat pakadhne laga hai dheere dheere
ishk ji
aisa hi hota hai aksar jub pyaar ho jata hai dheere dheere
it's too real & too good...........
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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3rd March 2010, 09:59 AM
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dooba rahta hoon uske tasavvur me main
dil se mayusi ka daur jhadne laga hai dheere dheere
fizaon me ulfat, hawaon me romaniyat hai
chehra rangat pakadhne laga hai dheere dheere
ishk ji
aisa hi hota hai aksar jub pyaar ho jata hai dheere dheere
it's too real & too good...........
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radhika jee
radhe radhe
kalaam ko pasand karne ka shukriya...aise hi saath deti rahen
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3rd March 2010, 04:24 PM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
mulakaaton ka daur badhne laga hai dheere dheere
mohabbat ka surur chadhne laga hai dheere dheere
dooba rahta hoon uske tasavvur me main
dil se mayusi ka daur jhadne laga hai dheere dheere
raah-e-ishq me unki wafa se dil aashna hai
chahat par hi unki adhne laga hai dheere dheere
fizaon me ulfat, hawaon me romaniyat hai
chehra rangat pakadhne laga hai dheere dheere
paya hai maine uski mohabbat ko jabse
kismat pe apni 'ishk' akadhne laga hai dheere dheere
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Ihsq ji, bahot hi achhae ehsason ko alfaaz diye hain aapne. Ishq kariye, karaaiye, ehsaason mein doob jaiye aur duba jaayie. Likhte rahiye, Khush rahiye, aabaad rahiye aur dad kubul karte rahiye!
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4th March 2010, 09:13 AM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
mulakaaton ka daur badhne laga hai dheere dheere
mohabbat ka surur chadhne laga hai dheere dheere
dooba rahta hoon uske tasavvur me main
dil se mayusi ka daur jhadne laga hai dheere dheere
raah-e-ishq me unki wafa se dil aashna hai
chahat par hi unki adhne laga hai dheere dheere
fizaon me ulfat, hawaon me romaniyat hai
chehra rangat pakadhne laga hai dheere dheere
paya hai maine uski mohabbat ko jabse
kismat pe apni 'ishk' akadhne laga hai dheere dheere
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bahut khoob..............
dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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4th March 2010, 03:37 PM
Ishk sahab Aadaab!
Janab aapki koshish badi kabile tarif lagi ahsaas behad sahin aur khubsurti s bayan kiye hia aapne sabhi sher achche hai..... likhate rhaiye,
Khush rhaiye....
Apna khayal rakhiye.....
Khuda hafez........
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9th March 2010, 09:38 AM
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Ihsq ji, bahot hi achhae ehsason ko alfaaz diye hain aapne. Ishq kariye, karaaiye, ehsaason mein doob jaiye aur duba jaayie. Likhte rahiye, Khush rahiye, aabaad rahiye aur dad kubul karte rahiye!
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mann bhai
radhe radhe
kalaam ko pasand karne ka shukriya..aise hi saath dete rahen
Aapka Apna Ishk
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10th March 2010, 05:03 PM
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bahut khoob..............
dilip
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12th March 2010, 01:05 PM
sameer bhai
hausla afzai ka shukriya..aise hi saath dete rahen
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17th March 2011, 12:41 AM
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Aapka Apna Ishk
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17th March 2011, 01:33 AM
Radhe radhe, Rajender Bhayi...!
Aap ki iss " dheere dheere " waali shaayri bahut pyaari si lagi...!
Ek sher hamari taraf se...!
Ek nazar kya dekh liyaa mehbooba ne muDkar
Masti maiN hosh uDne lagaa hai dheere dheere
Likhte raheiN
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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17th March 2011, 09:12 AM
bahot khoob Rajinder saahab.... ek baar fir aapne apni qaabiliyat ka lohaa manwaya hai..
behad nafees kalaam raha hai yeh... likhte rahen.. meri taraf se mubarakbaad qubool farmaaeN..
shukriyaa
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17th March 2011, 12:13 PM
Beautiful Poetry,, Sub'haan Allah
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19th March 2011, 02:45 PM
paya hai maine uski mohabbat ko jabse
kismat pe apni 'ishk' akadhne laga hai dheere dheere
nice lines....
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19th March 2011, 10:23 PM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
mulakaaton ka daur badhne laga hai dheere dheere
mohabbat ka surur chadhne laga hai dheere dheere
dooba rahta hoon uske tasavvur me main
dil se mayusi ka daur jhadne laga hai dheere dheere
raah-e-ishq me unki wafa se dil aashna hai
chahat par hi unki adhne laga hai dheere dheere
fizaon me ulfat, hawaon me romaniyat hai
chehra rangat pakadhne laga hai dheere dheere
paya hai maine uski mohabbat ko jabse
kismat pe apni 'ishk' akadhne laga hai dheere dheere
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bhooot hi bhadiya zabardast hai
aisi hi likhte rahye bhut hi bhadiayaa likha hai apne humesha ki tarah
appka dost yasir
यूँ छुए रूह हमारी की चरंगा चरंगा हर जर्रा खुर्शेदे-आलम-ताब
हर बेकस मज-ज़ुब रूह को उसके रब से जोड़ दे
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20th March 2011, 01:03 PM
kishore bhai
radhe radhe
bahut bahut shukriya bhai .. rachna ko sarahane kaa ...
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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20th March 2011, 10:16 PM
sham na saver isk ka jaal bhichne laga hai dheere dheere
utar kar dil me lahu jigar me samane laga hai dheere dheere
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21st March 2011, 06:54 PM
bahut khoob....................thanks for sharing.........................
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23rd March 2011, 11:25 PM
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bahot khoob Rajinder saahab.... ek baar fir aapne apni qaabiliyat ka lohaa manwaya hai..
behad nafees kalaam raha hai yeh... likhte rahen.. meri taraf se mubarakbaad qubool farmaaeN..
shukriyaa
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Shaad bhi ... taareef aur mubaaraqbaad kaa bahut bahut shukriya .. aainda bhi aise hi milte rahiye .. !
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26th March 2011, 02:34 PM
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mulakaaton ka daur badhne laga hai dheere dheere
mohabbat ka surur chadhne laga hai dheere dheere
dooba rahta hoon uske tasavvur me main
dil se mayusi ka daur jhadne laga hai dheere dheere
raah-e-ishq me unki wafa se dil aashna hai
chahat par hi unki adhne laga hai dheere dheere
fizaon me ulfat, hawaon me romaniyat hai
chehra rangat pakadhne laga hai dheere dheere
paya hai maine uski mohabbat ko jabse
kismat pe apni 'ishk' akadhne laga hai dheere dheere
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Rajinder jii, sabhi ashiyaar acche lage.
regards
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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3rd April 2011, 08:56 AM
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bahot khoob Rajinder saahab.... ek baar fir aapne apni qaabiliyat ka lohaa manwaya hai..
behad nafees kalaam raha hai yeh... likhte rahen.. meri taraf se mubarakbaad qubool farmaaeN..
shukriyaa
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shaad bhai ... saraahane aur hauslaa afzaai kaa bahut bahut shukriya ... !
Aapka Apna Ishk
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7th April 2011, 06:20 PM
IshQ sahab,
AAdab, bahot hi achchi peshkash thi aapki...dil se daad kubul kijiye..
Keep it up...
Rashid
Quote:
Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
mulakaaton ka daur badhne laga hai dheere dheere
mohabbat ka surur chadhne laga hai dheere dheere
dooba rahta hoon uske tasavvur me main
dil se mayusi ka daur jhadne laga hai dheere dheere
raah-e-ishq me unki wafa se dil aashna hai
chahat par hi unki adhne laga hai dheere dheere
fizaon me ulfat, hawaon me romaniyat hai
chehra rangat pakadhne laga hai dheere dheere
paya hai maine uski mohabbat ko jabse
kismat pe apni 'ishk' akadhne laga hai dheere dheere
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Tu AndheroN -ujaaloN me mila kar mujhko
Zindagi ab to sawaloN me mila kar mujhko
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RADHE RADHE
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1st April 2012, 05:28 PM
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Originally Posted by A Falling Tear
Beautiful Poetry,, Sub'haan Allah
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aap ka bahut bahut shukriya ... radhe radhe ...............
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