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misc couplets - 10th November 2014, 01:32 PM

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Ab aapki adakri mai wo baat na rhi..
Ab humaari shayri mai wo baat na rhi..

Roz milte hai wahi purane zakhm..
Ab is zamaane mai wo baat na rhi..

Ab bas aawaz h aur fakat kya..
Ab in dhadkano mai wo baat na rhi..

Ab to cheen lena hi paane ka tarika hai..
Ab duaon mai wo baat na rahi...

Has dete hai hum ab ye soch kar..
Ab muskarane mai wo baat na rhi..

Roothna bhi ab roothna kahan rha..
Sahiba ab manane mai wo baat na rhi..

Shama ye soch k khud bujh gyi..
Ab parvaano mai wo baat na rhi..


Ae neend teri firaak mai h Seher..
Ki ab zindgaani mai wo baat na rhi..
   
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10th November 2014, 01:34 PM

Ek sach chipaya hai humne..
Khud ko yakeenan samjhaya hai humne..

Tumko bhul jaane k khatir..
Khud ko bhi bhulaya hai humne..

Aaina bhi humse hunar mange..
Khud ko aisa bikhraaya hai humne..

Tumhare saamne muskarane ko..
Khud ko bada rulaya hai humne..

Is dil e shehr mai roz diwali hui..
Tere khaton ko kishton mai jalaya hai humne..
   
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10th November 2014, 01:42 PM

Ab roz ibabdaton mai sar jhuka deta hu..
Dua mai rooh se khud ko baddua deta hu..

Ki tere baad bhi mujhme kuch alag na lage..
Aankein roti hai jab bhi labon ko hasa deta hu..

Kharab aadton ko durust karne ka bs tarika hai..
Khud mai ruthta hu khud ko mana leta hu....

Khush rehna kb zaruri tha khush dikhna hi zaruri hai..
Ghar mai kitna andhera ho dar pe lekin dia jala deta hu..

Ab bas ek hi saza khud humne hai muqarrar ki..
Roz yaad karta hu roz bhula deta hu..
   
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11th November 2014, 10:59 PM

Ghar wahi rehte hai bas rang badalte rehte hai...
Log nahi badlte bas naqaab badalte rehte hai..

Bada ajeeb istemaal hai hunar ka yaha par..
Chulhe thande hai lekin ghar jalte rehte hai..

Kahi Kisaan ka beta pyaasa hai aur badal sukhe..*
Kahi bhuk se maa ki aankhon se sawan baraste rehte hai..

Wo daur aur tha jab bachpan mai tang galian thi..
Ab galion mai tang bachpan bhatkte rehte hai..

Mai arq mai dooba hu tu kyu na hu..
Yahan rishte zard hai lekin log jalte rehte hai..
   
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11th November 2014, 11:02 PM

*kisaan k liye usk fasal bhi baccha hai.. bundelkhnd ka dhyaan hisme..
   
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Lightbulb 11th November 2014, 11:05 PM

dost, aapne yeh jo ehsaas share kiye hai...bahut acche lge hame, aap enko aik hi thread par post kareNge to yeh ehsaas members ki nazar meiN nahi aayeNge, aap har shayri ke liye aik alag thread bana kar post kijiye...

aur haaN, agar aap bura na maane, to aapse poochna tha, ki kya yeh aapki apni likhi shayri hai...agar aapki likhi hue hai to bahutttttttt khoobsurat likhte hai aap, aur agar kisi aur shayar ki hai to please har shayri ke neeche us shayar ka naam ya phir "Note Mine" jaroor mention kijiye...taaki asli shayri ko uski likhi shayri ki wahh wahhhii mil sake

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11th November 2014, 11:11 PM

Ek jagah isliye ki bhul jata hu kya likha hai.. aur likha to khud hai.. kuch sudhaar ho to zarur bta dijiyega.. shukria
   
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