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Love yaad atey hein mujhey.... - 7th January 2009, 01:02 PM

mey abhi tak na bhola paya wohi soghat ke din...
yad atey hein mujhey apney wo halaat wo din...

aj bhi tujh ko mey pehley sa chahta hu magar ...
khud ko jb bhool chuka tha wo the jazbaat ke din..

me haqiqat me to tujh se nahi mil paya magar...
yad karta hu mey khwabo me mulaqat ke ke din...

teri tasveer jo dekhi to dil ne yaad kia...
wohi pholoun ke nazarey wohi barsaat ke din...
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31st January 2009, 08:23 PM

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mey abhi tak na bhola paya wohi soghat ke din...
yad atey hein mujhey apney wo halaat wo din...

aj bhi tujh ko mey pehley sa chahta hu magar ...
khud ko jb bhool chuka tha wo the jazbaat ke din..

me haqiqat me to tujh se nahi mil paya magar...
yad karta hu mey khwabo me mulaqat ke ke din...

teri tasveer jo dekhi to dil ne yaad kia...
wohi pholoun ke nazarey wohi barsaat ke din...
bohat khuub likha hai aap ne.. aap kii Ghazal behad achchhi hai... paDh kar lutf aaya... sabhi sher achche lage... yuun hi likhate rahe.n

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acha hai - 31st January 2009, 08:23 PM

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mey abhi tak na bhola paya wohi soghat ke din...
yad atey hein mujhey apney wo halaat wo din...

aj bhi tujh ko mey pehley sa chahta hu magar ...
khud ko jb bhool chuka tha wo the jazbaat ke din..

me haqiqat me to tujh se nahi mil paya magar...
yad karta hu mey khwabo me mulaqat ke ke din...

teri tasveer jo dekhi to dil ne yaad kia...
wohi pholoun ke nazarey wohi barsaat ke din...
aap khob likhte hain , koshish jari rakhiye , kuch jagho'n par correction ki zaroorat mahsoos ho rahi hai , dubara dekh lein ,


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