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31st March 2005, 08:50 AM
HI FRNDS,
EK LADKI KI ZUBAAN HAI YE DOSTON TO PLZ READ WO MILA BHI HUMSE AUR CHALA BHI GAYA, ZINDAGI KA SILSILA MAGAR CHALTA HI GAYA, CHAHA JITNA BHULA DU USE, WO DIL ME UTNA BASTA HI GAYA, BHULE TO NAHI MAGAR CHUPA DIYA HUMNE, KAHE TO SHAYAD SAB KUCH LOOTA DIYA HUMNE, SAMJHAYA BHI KHUD KO KI WO BEWAFA THA, MAGAR WO BEWAFA HUMEIN WAFA SIKHA GAYA, WAFA BHI AISI JO SIRF USKE LIYE THI, MAGAR USSE DOOR REHNA HI HAMARI KISMAT THI, CHAHA BAHUT BULA LU USE USI WAQT AWAAZ DEKAR, MAGAR YE WAQT BHI RETH SA HATHON SE FISALTA GAYA, GINE TO NAHI MAGAR KAI DAUR GUZAR GAYE, DOST BADLE,PYAR BADLA AUR MANJAR BADAL GAYE, SOCHTE THE HUM KAISE JEE SAKENGE TERE BINA, MAGAR TERA INTEZAR HUME JINA BHI SIKHA GAYA. I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine} 
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31st March 2005, 10:11 AM
Kya likha hai mere Dost....
Bilkul lajawaab kar diya...... Mujhe bahot pasand aaya.... Aise hi likhte rehna...... Ajmal Tumne Chaha hi nahin Chahne Walon ki Tarha... |
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thanks for the compliments bas aapka saath raha to zaroor likhenge thanks again keeeeeep reading I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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Hiiiii Dard -
31st March 2005, 10:28 AM
I m here dard
Wah .. umda peshkash hai GINE TO NAHI MAGAR KAI DAUR GUZAR GAYE, DOST BADLE,PYAR BADLA AUR MANJAR BADAL GAYE, SOCHTE THE HUM KAISE JEE SAKENGE TERE BINA, MAGAR TERA INTEZAR HUME JINA BHI SIKHA GAYA. la-jawaab jeene waalon se kaho,chaand sitaaron ke liye jeena padta hai kuch zakhm uthane ke liye izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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31st March 2005, 04:56 PM
Jubinn ji!
bahot dilkash aur behtarin....rachna hai! sachh bahot bahott,,,umda! GINE TO NAHI MAGAR KAI DAUR GUZAR GAYE, DOST BADLE,PYAR BADLA AUR MANJAR BADAL GAYE, SOCHTE THE HUM KAISE JEE SAKENGE TERE BINA, MAGAR TERA INTEZAR HUME JINA BHI SIKHA GAYA. i jst luved this one....though the whole gazal is js FAB! tc..keep it up  komal! |
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31st March 2005, 04:56 PM
WO MILA BHI HUMSE AUR CHALA BHI GAYA,
ZINDAGI KA SILSILA MAGAR CHALTA HI GAYA, CHAHA JITNA BHULA DU USE, WO DIL ME UTNA BASTA HI GAYA, BHULE TO NAHI MAGAR CHUPA DIYA HUMNE, KAHE TO SHAYAD SAB KUCH LOOTA DIYA HUMNE, SAMJHAYA BHI KHUD KO KI WO BEWAFA THA, MAGAR WO BEWAFA HUMEIN WAFA SIKHA GAYA, WAFA BHI AISI JO SIRF USKE LIYE THI, MAGAR USSE DOOR REHNA HI HAMARI KISMAT THI, CHAHA BAHUT BULA LU USE USI WAQT AWAAZ DEKAR, MAGAR YE WAQT BHI RETH SA HATHON SE FISALTA GAYA, GINE TO NAHI MAGAR KAI DAUR GUZAR GAYE, DOST BADLE,PYAR BADLA AUR MANJAR BADAL GAYE, SOCHTE THE HUM KAISE JEE SAKENGE TERE BINA, MAGAR TERA INTEZAR HUME JINA BHI SIKHA GAYA. Behad khoobsurat Jubin!! U r writing more n more beautiful every day... Meri daad kubool kar lena.... Doo keep writing.... TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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31st March 2005, 06:35 PM
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thanks karan thanks I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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31st March 2005, 06:36 PM
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thanks for the support and compliments komal keeeeeeeeep reading I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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31st March 2005, 06:37 PM
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thanks pukit sahab thanks a lot I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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31st March 2005, 07:54 PM
HEY JUBIN NICE AGAIN BUDDY
SACH MEIN KAISE LIKHTE HU ITNA ACHA KUCH RAAZ HUME BHI BATA DO REALLY JUBIN UR WORDS WAS REALLY HEART TOUCHING. HAR GUM MEIN MUSKURANA SIKHA DIYA HUME TUNE HAR MUSHKIL MEIN HASANA SIKHA DIYA TUNE WAFA KI BAATEIN KARTE THE HUM AB BEWAFAI KA AFSANA KEHNA SIKHA DIYA TUNE UNFORGETABLE SIMRAN ~~~***~~~***~~~*** ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ju PaL mIlE uSs PaL kO jEe lO sHaYaD kAl Ho Na Ho...... love is seeing yourself in someone's eyes and finding yourself in somebody's heart!!!!!(*-*) (¨`·.·´¨) Always `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ ITS STATE OF MIND..... |
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1st April 2005, 09:26 AM
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thanks for the compliments ham to aap logon ke saamne kuch nahi hai keeeeeep reading I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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1st April 2005, 05:22 PM
hey jubin
awesome...!! is ladki mein main khud ko paati hoon tumne aisa kuch kaha hai jo mein mehsoos karti hoon sonal |
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1st April 2005, 05:53 PM
its ur thinking jubin aap humse acha hi likhte hai
lakin ek baat hai dard duno ka barabar hai unforgetable simran ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ju PaL mIlE uSs PaL kO jEe lO sHaYaD kAl Ho Na Ho...... love is seeing yourself in someone's eyes and finding yourself in somebody's heart!!!!!(*-*) (¨`·.·´¨) Always `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ ITS STATE OF MIND..... |
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1st April 2005, 06:00 PM
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mujhe khushi hai ki main aisa kuch likh paya jo aapse relate karta hai I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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ha dard ke daur se to dono guzre hai to dard ek tarah ka hi hoga na thanks again I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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hi -
1st April 2005, 08:09 PM
wah bahut hi khoob likha aapne..
BHULE TO NAHI MAGAR CHUPA DIYA HUMNE, KAHE TO SHAYAD SAB KUCH LOOTA DIYA HUMNE, SAMJHAYA BHI KHUD KO KI WO BEWAFA THA, MAGAR WO BEWAFA HUMEIN WAFA SIKHA GAYA, kuch kahunga ispar sirf post reply hi samjhiyega Agar Seekh li hoti tumne wafa to hum bewafa na kahlate, Aaye the tere dar par wafa lekar, bewafai saath na liye jaate... bye tanha |
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1st April 2005, 08:39 PM
zubin ...
koi shaq naHI accha likha hai .... bohat accha lag raha hau tumhara yahan aise likhna tumhare kalaam ko padh ke kuch yaad aa gaya .,... suna tha yahiN kahiN khwab dekhe bhi nahi aur toot gaye wo humse mile bhi nahi aur rooth gaye.. hum jaagte rahe aur duniya soti rahi.. ek barish thi jo satn humare roti rahi... shayad aapko pasand aaye ... meri daad teh dil se kabool karna ... apna khayal rakhte hue likhte rehna aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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1st April 2005, 10:07 PM
Nice one Jubin, I think you sent this to me before right! I like reading it again... keep writing* TC
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2nd April 2005, 10:19 AM
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apna naam zaroor bataye nice words by u too keeeeeeeep reading and writing I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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aapko mera likha pasand aaya jaan kar bahut khushi hui aapki daad kabul ki kunal ji kalam ne saath diya to likhte rahenge arz hai- saath dete vo agar to hamari zindagi sawar gayi hoti khushiyo se hamne apni khali jholi bhar li hoti unki bewafai ke baad socha tha mar jaye par saath kalam na deti to shayad hamne khudkhushi kar li hoti.... I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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thanks again I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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wow jubin ji, i wish i could write like you, bohot acha likha hai, wht i have gotten from life is to try to forgetthe person jisne meray saath bewafaii ki, pehle tho aisa meri zindagi main nahin tha, laikin koi 2 weeks pehle ki baat hai jab kisi nain meray saath bhi bewafayee ki...i was completely depressed, but im trying to get my life back on track without that person »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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ham kaha itna accha likhte hai acchi likhawat padhni hai to rohin sahab,pulkit sahab,kunalji,meenaa didi in ki padhiye ham to jazbaat bayaan karte hai vo to aisa likhte hai ki kalam rone par majboor ho jati hai ha ab to zindagi chal rahi hai unki yaad me par i will get back to normalcy again thanks mukhra ji I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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3rd April 2005, 08:42 AM
jubin ji,
your shayri is very good, yes rohin bhai, meena di, and all are good, but you are good too you have written wht was in your heart, and you never know when it could turn into something completely spectacular aur main tho abhi sirf shayri ki duniya main new hoon, so i have a long way to go take care mukhra »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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first of all very srry for replying u late. i was in hell of a condition so was unable to reply u before. aaj tumhara yeh kalam pada,acha laga.sach mein dil ko chu gaya.is kalam ne mujhe mere dost se bhichadne yaad dilaya, so felt like replying u ahead. really awesome n well written dear. i had read it before too. u posted it on the other site too. well wow wat a depth of thoughts in ur post. sach mein jab pehle padi thi tab iska ehsaas kuch kam hua tha, magar aaj is kalam ko pad ke sach mein aapne dost ko khone ka gam ka ehsaas hua.gr8 as usual n one more thing buddy.its gud to see tht u are writing so well n watever u wished tht all shud reply u,look now everyone has showered their love for u. keep going buddy. all the best for future too. aap kya jano kya hota hai dard judai ka humse yeh poocho kaisa haal hota hai tanhai ka maut ko laga lete hai majboor hokar gale yaaron aisa hota hai hasher jab bhi hota hai,ruswai ka! |
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bahut khoob likha hai dost bakayi dil se likha hai
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khair is behes ko yahi khatam karte hai aur aapse bas itni hi guzarish hai saaath dete rehna I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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3rd April 2005, 10:01 PM
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thanks for all the support and love u have given me thanks I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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keeeeeeep reading I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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fantastic smile n make others also smile those sparkling eyes A 100 watt smile the majestic walk the cheerful talk truly charming personality Guess,thats enough abt me :D |
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keeeeeeeeeep reading.......aur bhi posts hai I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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9th April 2005, 04:35 PM
HuM Ne To KhaiR TuJh Se ShiKaYaT KaBhi Na ki
AiSa Nahi Ke Dil Ne BaGhaWaT KaBhi Na Ki KiS HaaL MaiN Hai TeRe SaTaYe HoYe GhaReeB TuNe Yeh PooChNe Ki ZehMaT KaBhi Na Ki MehSooS Kia KaRe Ga Woh AuRoN Ke DaRD Ko JiS Ne KhuD ApNe Aap Se UlFaT{MuHaBbat } KaBhi Na Ki.......... . ApNA AsGheR...... leave, But not our hearts. |
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9th April 2005, 06:34 PM
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asgher sahab aapki tareef me to shabd bhi kam padh jaye bahut khooob isi tarah likhte rehna I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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9th April 2005, 06:52 PM
wah jubin ji aap ne to ek ladki ke dard ko itni aasani se aur itne khubsurati se pesh kiya hai ki har ek ladki ise apni khud ki kahani samajhne lagegi.thanks for giving us the pleasure to see such a wonderful poetry do carry on writing such wonderful poems.
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thanks for the compliments ye to aap logon ka saath hai is liye ham yaha hai bas saath dete rehna I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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18th April 2005, 03:48 PM
Bahut khub...........bahut sahi farmaaya aapne Jubin ji
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18th April 2005, 08:29 PM
too good .........sachchai hai iss poem main ...........
sabka gum dekh ke hum apna gum bhull gaye ............... ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++== har khushi ek dard ke saaye main hota hai har gum ek khushi ke saaye maine hota hai jaise subhh ke baad raat or raat ke baad savera hota hai  . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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19th April 2005, 01:16 AM
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keep reading I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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thaks for reading I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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19th April 2005, 05:05 PM
ek behtareeen pic
which i thought matches with the lines above do tell me u r views I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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