Aurat ko banaaya hoga

karan q · **Aurat ko banaaya hoga -** 24th February 2005, 03:26 AM

ek kalaam aurat ke naam:-

Aurat ko banaaya hoga

Haan maine bhee ek duniya ki kalpna ki hai,
Wo duniya jissme mamta na rahi ho, wo mardon ki duniya jissme rishte na rahe houn, jab insaan insaan nahi janaawar huaa kerte honge, koi kissi ka khyaal na rakhta hoga, ek duniya aise bnaai hogi khuda ne or phir pachtaaya hoga lekin phir usse aurat ka khyaal aaya hoga, or jab usse jameen per aane ki fursat na mili ,
Iss duniya ki dekhbhaal ke liye ussne aurat ko bnaaya hoga,

Haan mujhe yakeen hai kuch aisa he huaa hoga,
Meri parikapnaaon ke ird-gird ek sansaar banaa hoga,
Jab ponga pandit but-kade me baith ker , khuda lagte honge
Jab dharm ki dukaano per baliyaan or logon ke sir chadhte honge
Jab khuda apne bandon ka haal dekh ker ghabraaya hoga
Mujhe yaheen hai………….
Iss duniya ki dekhbhaal ke liye ussne aurat ko bnaaya hoga

Aurat jissne apne her kirdaar ko bakhoobi nibhaaya,
Aurat jissne janaawar ko insaan bnaaya,
Jissne zindgi ko rishton ka sangeet diya,
Jissne sanskaar bnaaye,or hansker her gum ko dbaaya
Jab apni duniya ki haar per khuda sharmaaya hoga
Mujhe yakeen hai
Iss duniya ki dekhbhaal ke liye ussne aurat ko banaaya hoga,

Karan.q

Parul · 24th February 2005, 03:38 AM

Wah karan, kya baat hai! Nice one buddy, keep writing......

arpan_jot · 24th February 2005, 02:19 PM

karan ji..
this is diffrent side of ur personality...i like it....but i really think quite diffrently from u..being a woman....
i agree with u regarding her patience,scrifice but its always a men who actually inspires her n tell her abut her own strength....i agree she is great...but i think greater the person who understnds her n make her feel proud of hersel....men n women r complement to each other......i think i shudnt go beyond this....

punjabi chh ek shayar ne keha hai...

ek Kaaid toh duji Kaaid chh pahunch gyee hein...
Kee khateya mehndi laa ,vattna maal ke...........

n other side some one said....

khuda ki ibadat na jis ne kee,na uss ko mana...
khuda khush hai uss se ke ussne apni khala ko pehchana....

its really very sesitive issues.....itna bold mein likhna nahi chahati....kiyun ke...

asaan te jobaan rute marna...
tuur jana aseen bhare bhrayee...

jobaan rute ashiq marde ya koyi karmaan wala...
donaa uttee jassi jave aaj da ehh jhaan.....

ya pher...

kregya kbuul andera na roshni mujhe...
ajeeb raste pe lake maregyee yeh zindgi mujhe...

nadi ke uss par se jo roz sunayi deti hai...
maar hee degyee woh bansuri mujhe...

pichle janam mein aag baan ke jlaye hongee phuul meine...
ke zindgi phuul ke iss liyee mili mujhe.....

baras jati sawan baan ke kisi dil ke registaan pe...
bahut tadpa na ayee woh shayari mujhe.........

regards,
Arpan

sharifa_786 · 26th February 2005, 04:50 AM

Hi karan,

Bahoot achha laga padhkar ki aaurat ki is duniya me kya ahmiyat hai....keep it up....

komal5 · **hi! -** 26th February 2005, 11:17 AM

hi..karan...gr8 2 read such thing...! its really a sensitive thought..js wanna say tht like men n women r like "lock n key"..
loses their importance if r alone.
tc
komal

karan q · **Hii arpan -** 27th February 2005, 01:08 AM

Tumhare replly ka replly karun..
Ye bhee sahi hai.. but as compare to your replly
mere sweet to nahi ho sakte
Sacchi bot he changa likhde ho tusi
Punjabi vich jedi gallan tusi kainde ho..
dil vich lag jandiyaa ne
Kadi likho kuch apne baare vich
saanu vi te pata challe enne change change replly likhan vaale insaan de baare vich.. Appa tvannu janiye to kinu pata ke khud ka pata mil jaave
Write more about you*
your repllys are imprassive really
izzajat
karan.q

shadow · 27th February 2005, 01:22 PM

The way of man is logic and intellect so it seems to be a desert, while the way of woman is of emotions so no doubt it looks garden. Both are supporting not conflicting....
Aadmi aur aurat alag nahi hai
Dono ke dil mein jaanko tho bair nahi hai
Kuch paaye kuda ko pyaar mein
Tho kuch payein hai use apne aap mein

Kuch zyada bol diya tho mauf karna Karan bhai just flow of thoughts triggered from your writing....

arpan_jot · 28th February 2005, 11:49 AM

Karan ji...
kiyun aap sharminda karte hein....

ashqaan di khadi zindgi...
saah sohneyaan toon mangne udaree...sajnaan de lare..
ke ashqaan di kahdi zindgi....

ya..

shayad kise lyee mein bhi birkh bnaa ..
isse lyee khdaan haan iss dupehaar andaar....

ya phir app mere bare mein yeh samjh lo ke......huuummm...

Kya poochte ho meri daastaa'n,
kabhi hoon yahaa'n kabhi hoo'n vahaa'n
Mera baadlo'n sa haal hai
kabhi baras gaya kabhi taras gya

app mujhe na jane toh achha hai.....

dil driya smunroon dhungee...
kayun dilaan diyaan jane...
ohee mere dill vich vseyaa..
ohh na pyar pchanee.....

byee
take care...
Regards,
Arpan

ali_rehman · 1st March 2005, 11:18 AM

yes its nice keep it up

Sonakshi · 1st March 2005, 02:01 PM

So nice of u Karanji

karan q · **uuuuuuuuuffff itne repllys -** 1st March 2005, 06:27 PM

Aaaaahhh aurat ke liye kuch lafz kahe
Or Sach me Itna accha responce
Saari site ki ladkiyon ne karan tumhari mehfil ka raasta ikhtiyar ker liya
khair ye bhee khoob rahee... kuch naye chehre bhee dekhne ko mil gaye.. waise these are my feelings for women
mere kuch doston ne kahaa aurat or aadmi dono ek doosre ke bina adhoore hain.. Magar yahaan mai kehna chaahunga
Aadmi hinsa ka roop hai or aurat ahinsa ka pratiroop
Augar Auraton ke samaaj ki kalpana ki jaaye to yakeenan ki ja sakti hai.. Ek mahakta huaa,sansaar.. Na burai na ladaai jhagde
Kyunki auraton ka kaam sirf cheekhne chillane se chal jata hai
lekin augar mardon ke samaaj ki kalpana ki jaaye to aisa nahi hai
Kyunki....
mard ko gussa aaye to wo chillata nahi hai
gale kaat-ta hai, khoon bahata hai,mard shasak hai
or aurat jeevan ki aadheen
Rishton ke phool bagair aurat ke khil nahi sakte
or yakeenan .. Auraton ki sankhya badha di jaaye duniya me
utni he hinsa cum hoti chali jaayegi.....
issliye mai kabhee nahi maanta ki aurat mard ke bina adhoori hai
Aurat jeevan daayi hai..... wo mard ko jeevan deti hai
or aakhir me .. her mard aurat ka he aadheen hai
izzajat
karan.q

shadow · 2nd March 2005, 06:43 AM

Karan bhai, shayad aapne teek se deka nahi, cheek na chilana tho sirf shuruwat mein hota hai. Maante hai, patience toda zyada hai uske baad tho dono marne per hi utar aate hai. Anyway exagerations allowed, no problem. Humareliye chaand tho resource hai, koobsurat tho hai hi LOL ....

karan q · **Hii meri parchayi -** 2nd March 2005, 08:54 PM

mere saaye..
Aurat ke hazaar roop hain ... aaj kuch bure chehre waali auraten bhee hain,you may talk about prostitues .. doosron ke ghar ujaadne waali .. we call them vamp, But always remember her ek vamp ke picche 100 devil hote hain .. Aurat ke roop jaise bhee hain sab aadmi ki vajah se hain..hawas aadmi me hai,ashanti aadmi me hai,laalach aadmi me hai... yehi sab aurat me augar utpann hota hai to sirf aadmi ke kaaran.. Nahi to aurat chaahe koi bhee ho kaisee bhee so,sirf izzjat chaahti hai,
maine kahaa augar mai kalpana karoon sirf aurat ke sansaar ki to wo sambhav hai khushbu ka chaman bann jaaye,
Magar mardon ke samaaj ki kalpana karoon to khoon ki nadiyon ke siwaa kuch nazar nahi aata...
mard to hum bhee hain,Magar hum shayar hai.. or shayar ka dil kudrat ka hota hai.. jo sahi ko sahi or galat ko galat kehta hai..mere bhai augar zindgi ki kasuti me khud ko bhee galat thehrana pade to karan.q picche nahi hatega bas yahi kahega

akser karan jaan boojh ker galtiyaan kiya karta hai
ye soch ker ke kaheen wo khuda na ho jaaye

izzajat
karan.q

romana · **hi -** 3rd March 2005, 07:09 AM

hello karan bhia

kaise ho aap, hw sweet

kiya kaho yeh to samjh mai nahi aa raha hai but i think its a great poem gives us an insite into ur personality and hw u value the love and affection of a woman. Its a very intresting but a very complicated topic. jab loog kehte hai ke mard ke bina aurat adoori hai aur aaurat ke bina mard to wahi vo yeh bi kehte hai ke agar unki zindagi ma koi aurat aaye to bilkul waisi ho jaisi vo chahte hai and if this doesnt happen than there are always alot of problems. mere khiyal mai it doesnt make a difference whether its a man or a woman, they both should be respected equally but some men take women or their affection for granted or they use it against them just to get wot they want. i think men react differntly to women to most situations and they dont like it if it gets on top of them but dere r others who dnt mind it i mean dere r some women who r same.

neway bhia i think that ur way of thinking is very sweet and pure so keep writting beautiful poems and i m sorry for not replying early as u know i m usually d last person to b seen on the posts dat is if i eva manage to read them.

shadow · 07:25 AM

Karan bhai it is just that I see each person constitute the whole and the proportions of characteristics are set differently. Jo aap aurat aur aadmi ke bare mein kahe hai, us se koi shikayat nahi bas yeh sochta hoon ki yeh difference ka boundary is like TRUE and FALSE. There were very great men and still there are many who go beyond the attributes described by you for woman.
Vamps, aurat aur aadmi sabi ek hi tarah bane hai, vamp yahi darshati hai ki under circumstances aurat woh ban jaati hai jo uska andar chuppa hua tha. If we take example of Gandhi ji and Hitler, both subjected to stress, pain and suffering of self and other people, adopted different characteristics (Avoiding the point of what is good and what is bad). So basically generalising leads to bifurcation and the systems like caste, relegions etc....
Basically what I wanted to tell is, the chracteristics are dormant in both men and woman, just what is nurtured by individual gives the characteristic....
Akser saaye bewakoofi ke, is duniya ke saamne rakte hain
Taaki koi chiraag, is saaye ke pehchaan mita de....
nJoy

K@J@L · 3rd March 2005, 09:17 AM

hye karan this is my second reply to you...

your writing power is amazing...

you dont believe that i never reply any body soon...

but in your writing one type of attraction is there...

jaha tak main samaj payi hoon.. you are so positive..

its really very good to any body to develope a good thinking level like you................

karan q · **Hiii romana -** 4th March 2005, 12:35 AM

Hello romana..
Cum he aati ho humari mehfil me
Tumne jo kahaa bilchul sahi kaha...
LEkin dekhna ...mard or aurat me bahot fark hai
kissi ki shaan na ghat jaye issliye aisee baaten ki jaati hain ki dono ek doosre ke bina adhoore hain.. And besicly When they both gel together.. They do produce a new life as well but why in amarica ..Bacche ki pehchaan usski ma ke naam se hoti hai?
Because she is the lone owner of a child she can feel the pain of ecstacy which males can't...
Aadmi ki fitrat badi ajeeb hoti hai.. usska sara jeevan suvidha or apni Ego ko kaayam karne me guzarta hai
EK aadmi apni aadhi zindgi apni ek ego ko banaane me laga deta hai ,or baaki ki bachi zindgi ussi image to barkaraar rakhne me marrne ke kareeb pahunchta hai to maluum padta hai .. koi image thee he nahi.. Sab usska khyaal thaa.. Her aadmi ye sochta hai ki jo kuch bhee wo kar raha hai.. saari duniya ussko dekh rahee hai,usske apne khyaal hain.. wo apne khayaalon ka raja or hero hota hai...i wil find you sevreal wifes who allow their husband to have extra marrige or affair.. But you try to find a single man ...
Sometimes they are not worth of being comeplete husband and can't fullfill the each and every wish of their wife and yet .. they try to bound their way.. They use female's like Their own property .. yeah today .. many people believe in giving freedom to their wife .. But have a look at it .. You will find the boundations in freedom as well... if you will remove man from this earth 90% crime ..will dissappear,we may dream sometimes aisee duniya ho vaisee duniya ho.. Sab pyar karen.. kOi kissi ko maare na...
things like that .. lekin aadmi ke rehte kuch bhee sambhav nahi
Wo kabhee bhee kaisa bhee ho sakta hai
Aaj ki ladkiyaan pehle jaisee nahi rahi .. Dabaa ker bewakoof banati hain aadmiyon ko... That is what i like
Mujhe bhee sympathy nahi hoti inn logon se...
meri nazar me mard wo he hai jo sach ka saamna kare
Aadmi ko aaina dikaogi .. to wo kahega Itna ghatiya aks .. ye kaun hai .. Tum kahogi ki ye aap ho... he will kill you
Ander se he may know that you are right .. But straghte way i will polish things by blaming you for things or your attitude
My first believe ....any human is wrong to the point he do not accept that he is wrong... The time he accept the point he become right... Once you accept your mistake's means every thing is visible now.. you can sense what is happening and what should happen.... And then life become very easy and simple
Aati raha karo...baby doll
Apna khyaal rakhna
izzajat
karan.q

karan q · **hii kajol -** 4th March 2005, 12:47 AM

Well my pleasure that i got your replly
as well as your sweet compliments
But let me make a point .. The matirial i wrote
Is for .. mother sister wife Jo bhee roop hain aurat ke
Not for girls
But you can say .. every girl is carrying the quality
to reach the lavel of god.. but There is a big but
There comes some arts ..
Art of dying ..art of forgiveness...art of loving
My believe .. Love is always avilable for girls
And attrection is always avilable for guys
When can die for A girl in months
But girls can live for a guy for ages
The best thing about girl is ...
She always give her self to a man.......
she always secrifise her own identity
And fallow the way man want her to be..
sometimes she do succeed ...sometimes she got failer
But yet .. It is not easy to secrifise your self for someone
You know from months or years,i will find you sevreal womens who can carry long life relationships without any physical terms.many housewifes who can do it,if they have to but
Find me a one hubby who can carry each and every wish of his wife for 30 years without having physical relationship..No you may not find easily Because when they give something ..they want allot as well..Man is a businessman...he is always doing business in his bedroom as well..everywhere.. just go deep and you will find They do business with their childrens as well
But women... She keep giving ...don't even know what they will get..Aaj ki duniya me bhee her tarah ki aurat hogi .. but the besic of aurat is devi... She is carrying a great soul in her self.
far far supirior To men..Man may need to shought but ask to them can they survive if females wont be around ?

there is a couplet in my latest poerty

mandir me buton ko mai khuda samjha kiya
Do pairon ke jaanwar ko maine aadmi samjha

izzajat
karan.q

romana · **hi -** 4th March 2005, 05:18 AM

hi karan

ehm i think dat had a ver loud and clear msg attachd o it neway i think u r rite aur jo tum kehte ho ke aaj ki ladkiya mardo ko bewaqoof banati hai to kiya uske liye tum unko blame kar sakte ho magar kabhi kabhi aurtai aur mard doono hi bato bato mai hi kise ke dil ko tood jaate hai par kabhi aisa lagta hai ke aap kisi ko jaane bina bina bi samjhte ho jaise ke humare dost i mean shayri.com ke dost. kisi ki poems par ke unke dil ka haal ya vo kaisa mehsoos karte hai kaha ja sakta hai but at the same time potry can reflect a persons own personality. aab aapko dekho kabhi aapki poetry itni serious aur dukhi hoti hai ke aankhai bar aaye kabhi hansa deti hai aur kabhi insaan ko sochne pe majboor kar deti aur dat shows dat u r a confident person aap ko agar choot lage ya koi problem ho to aap mai itna strength hai ke aap usko face kar sako but some men find dat hard to cope with because they want things to go the way they plan em.

neway
i m off i think ab mai serious ho rahi ho is baat ko le ke
tc
bye

karan q · **romana again -** 4th March 2005, 11:16 AM

Dear serious Hone me kya rakha hai?
Sirf masti karo zindgi me,treat each and every moment Like a You treat a sick man who is about to die.. Augar kissi bimar insaan ke paas jao .. jo kabhee bhee marrne wala hai.. uss waqt chaahe wo kitna bura hai... dil kehta hai ki bechare ki her tamanna poori ho jaaye..WO tumko jo kahega.. maanne ko dil kerta hai.. kyunki tum jaante ho .. wo iss duniya se jaane waala hai

Humari zindgi ka lamha lamha humse kuch maang raha hai.. Her pal ki same condition hai.... jaane waale or jaker kabhi na aane waale ... ye pal hain.. jo kuch bhee tumse maangte hain
inhe de do.. Or mera yakeen ye tumse tumhari hansi ke siwa kuch nahi maangenge
Add more flavours in your life...Jahaan taq shayri ki baat kahi tumne to yaad rahe.. 100 me se 99 tukband hote hain.. When you want to feel the person through his shayri... You must know who is a real poet and who is tukband.. Kyunki...real poerty is far diffrent then tukbandi
lafzon ke jod se shayari bann to jaati hai
Magar jab tak khoon na milaao to asar nahi aata
Jab lafz jajbaaton me doob doob ker niqalte Hain or shayri ka raasta ikhtiyaar kerte hain.. Tab samajh aata hai ki shayri kya cheez hai.. According to me.. shayri wo jisska nasha sir chadh ker bole.. ye kya ki padh liya wah wah kiya or bhool gaye ..
Aisee shayri yahaan cum he milti hain.. read praveen shakir or waseem barelvi ahmad faraaz , they use to write real poertys
Anyway .. hats of to you.. Atleast you try to think or learn
nahi to log kehte hain .. kya padi hai.. jo chal raha hai chalne do
Aati rehna or kaheen khoo na jana...meri shayri ke rang bayaan kerne ka shukriya
izzajat
karan.q

Dazzling_divvya · **hii karanji -** 18th March 2005, 05:47 PM

kitni wah aapke naam ki jayen kum hai
sach kahun to jawab nahi aapka
bas padhti hu to kho jati hu
kya likhte hainaap bas lajawab
likhte rahiye or muskurate rahiye
your fan
divvya

karan q · **Hiiiii divvya -** 23rd March 2005, 06:13 AM

Wah mujhper na ki jaaye
Aurat per ki jaaye
ya phir khuda per
jissne use banaya hai
Khair ... I like the way .. you compliment my poerty
izzajat
karan.q