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Mat dhaiye khud pe koi sitam chupke chupke -
22nd October 2016, 11:38 PM
Mat dhaiye khud pe koi sitam chupke chupke
De dijiye humko saare alam chupke chupke Milte hi kat rake hum se nikal jate ho tum Pucho na kaise sambhalte hain hum chupke chupke Taseer meri muhabbat ki shayad eh hi hai Jhunjhlate ho tanha tum dum ba dum chupke chupke aaawara badal nahin hain jo udjayenge hum karte chalo hum pe nazre karam chupke chupke mat soch mujh ko teri khoobsurat hain aankhen udjayegi neend warna sanam chupke chupke naasaaz halat ne uf kardiya jeena mushkil aur mat badhaiye furqat ka ghum chupke chupke Likhne kahaan deti kuch teri yadon ki jumbish Naaashna ho raha hai qalam chupke chupke Tark-e -taalluq karoge to mar jayenge hum dhoka hi hoga agar do ge ghum chupke chupke tum intezaar-e-muhabbat men mat toot jao khao nahin tanha koi qasam chupe chupke aye hum nasheen tuu khataon ki parwah mat kar Parwaaz rakhte hain saare bharam chupke chupke Some meaning Sitam- charge Alam- pain/ sorrow Taseer- Impact Dum b dum- time-to time Naasaaz- sick Uf- Oh Furqat- Separation Jumbish- Vibration Naashna- Strange By Mujeeb Parwaaz |
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24th October 2016, 07:01 AM
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Waaah bahot khoob peshkash mujeeb sahab Likhte rahein.. Aate rahein.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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24th October 2016, 03:32 PM
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waahh kyaa andaaz e bayaan dekhne milaa hai aapkeis kalaam me...... bahut hi dilfareb kalaam huaa hai.. daad qubol kijiye Shaad........ |
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26th October 2016, 01:02 PM
Bohut bohut shukriya Madhu Saheba....Qalam bhale hi naashna hojaye...zahen aur dil shayerana bane rehna zaruri hai....
 ....kyon ke is se ghazal ya koi kavita ki soch bana kar bhi insaan cheerful reh sakta hai....mental stress se khud ko door rakh sakta hai....aur do aashna log bhi ek duje se naashna nahin hona chahiye chahe koi bhi baat beech men kyon na hojaye......I mean matanter bhale ho mananter na ho. huh...main kuch ziyada to nahin bolraha hun.. Cheers! Duaon ke saath Mujeeb |
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26th October 2016, 01:11 PM
Adaab Sameer Sahab....aap ki daad main ne dil se qubool ki.....bohut bohut shukriya aap ka...andaaze bayan to shayerana/ ashiqana hai...kya karen apni tabiyet aur apne mezaaj hi aise hain.
Khush rahiye...duaon men yaad rakhiye....mere kalaam padhte rahi..aur apn kalaam se hamen lutf andooz karte rahiye.... Khuda hafiz Aap ka dost Mujeeb |
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26th October 2016, 04:32 PM
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Mujiib ji...............bahut khoobsurat ehsaas aur bemisaal bayaani...!! .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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27th October 2016, 11:49 AM
Aaap ki nawazish hai Sunita ji....bohut bohut shukriya.
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