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Chahat - 21st July 2014, 04:38 PM

meri to muhabbat tejarat nahin hai
to phir kyon tumhen mujh se chahat nahin hai

na ho khush bujha kar diye ko hawa tu
teri to jalane ki taqat nahin hai

mujhe jaam mat do judai ke gham ka
meri aur pineki halat nahin hai

bitha kar kisi ko bhi baam-e-falak par
zameeN par girana sharafat nahin hai

baam-e-falak -- On the top of the sky

tumhen laut jana hai to laut jao
hamari taraf se ijazat nahin hai

tumhen samne dekh kar sochta hun
kahin ru-b-ru to qayamat nahin hai

hai kya fayeda mal-o-daulat se khud ko
agar zindegi hi salamat nahin hai

eh awaaz Parwaaz haq baat ki hai
muhabbat men koi baghawat nahi hai.


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21st July 2014, 04:50 PM

Bahut achcha likhne ho.....janaab......kuch misre to ustaado wale kah diye Tumne.....
hanaari taraf se ijaazat nahi hai

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21st July 2014, 05:06 PM

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meri to muhabbat tejarat nahin hai
to phir kyon tumhen mujh se chahat nahin hai

na ho khush bujha kar diye ko hawa tu
teri to jalane ki taqat nahin hai

mujhe jaam mat do judai ke gham ka
meri aur pineki halat nahin hai

bitha kar kisi ko bhi baam-e-falak par
zameeN par girana sharafat nahin hai

baam-e-falak -- On the top of the sky

tumhen laut jana hai to laut jao
hamari taraf se ijazat nahin hai

tumhen samne dekh kar sochta hun
kahin ru-b-ru to qayamat nahin hai

hai kya fayeda mal-o-daulat se khud ko
agar zindegi hi salamat nahin hai

eh awaaz Parwaaz haq baat ki hai
muhabbat men koi baghawat nahi hai.


By Mujeeb Parwaaz
Masha Allah bohat khoob mujib sahab

shayed pehli baar aapko padh rahi huun

Intehyi khoob surat ghazal per dil se dheron daad qubool kijiye

Yuhi likhte rahiye




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22nd July 2014, 09:57 AM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut badhiya ghazal kahi hai sahab..


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Bahut achcha likhne ho.....janaab......kuch misre to ustaado wale kah diye Tumne.....
hanaari taraf se ijaazat nahi hai

Ghazal Ke ashaar achchey huye hai......aapme kuch baat zaroor hai...reps ++++
Aap ki hausla afzai ka bohut bohut shukriya...

ek sher arz kar raha hun

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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut badhiya ghazal kahi hai sahab..
Aap ki tareef ka shukriya......mujhe khushi hai ke aap ko ghazal pasand aai.
isi tarah merfe kalam padhiye aur meri hausla afzai kijiye.
   
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30th July 2014, 11:46 AM

Aap ki nawazish ka bohut bohut shukriya.

Ek sher dekhiye....

kisi ki nazar ka jo bismil nahin hai
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waah waah Vry Vry Nice Ghazal......................................Reps++ ++
   
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30th July 2014, 04:17 PM

waaaah, Mujibsaab...........
behterin se behterin alfaazoN se bharii hai yeh ghazal... ek purjosh aur ravaan davaan ghazal pe dilse dheroN daad qubul kijiye.....
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30th July 2014, 04:21 PM

WWWWWWAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH !!!! Behad hi khoobsurat rawaan aur gehri fiqr se saji huwee shaandaar ghazal par bahaut bahaut si daad aur dheron mubaarakbaad Mujeeb sahab !!!!!! Bas maza aa gaya padh ke !! Superb !!


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Aap ki daad mere liye badi inayat hai.

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2nd August 2014, 11:24 AM

Aap ka bohut bohut shukriya
Bas yun hi mujh ko padhte rahiye aur dua men yaad rakhiye.
Aur apne kalam se hamen nawaazte rahiye.
   
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Bhut Khoob likha hai. ...Hr Sher dil ko choota hua.....Congrats....

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Late reply ke liye sorry...Nazneen ji.

Aap ki daad men fact hai, compliment hai, greeting hai.....Exaggeration nahin...
Dil khush hota hai...aur bada shauq hota hai aap ko padhne men...phir chahe oh aap ke kalam hon....ya phir koi bayaan !!

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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob, bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai Mujeeb saheb.


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Bohut bohut shukriya Iftakhar Sb.

Yun hi saath dete rahiyega.

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Bohot.......bohot.....bohot....badhiya

Kya joor hai aapki kalam me......waaaaaaaaah
" hamari taraf se ijazat nahi hai" kya likha hai bhai waaaaah...maza aaa gaya apki gazal padh kar.

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Bahut ghahre ehsaas...very nice gazal mujeeb ji...
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meri to muhabbat tejarat nahin hai
to phir kyon tumhen mujh se chahat nahin hai

na ho khush bujha kar diye ko hawa tu
teri to jalane ki taqat nahin hai

mujhe jaam mat do judai ke gham ka
meri aur pineki halat nahin hai

bitha kar kisi ko bhi baam-e-falak par
zameeN par girana sharafat nahin hai

baam-e-falak -- On the top of the sky

tumhen laut jana hai to laut jao
hamari taraf se ijazat nahin hai

tumhen samne dekh kar sochta hun
kahin ru-b-ru to qayamat nahin hai

hai kya fayeda mal-o-daulat se khud ko
agar zindegi hi salamat nahin hai

eh awaaz Parwaaz haq baat ki hai
muhabbat men koi baghawat nahi hai.


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Wah Wah...pur asar jaNaab

Dhero daad qubool kareiN, aapke har sher par tahe dil se waah nikli

aage bhi bazm yunhi roshan karte rahiYeGaa..



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wah wah waah!

har ek sher pur asar.......................khanjar sa seene mein utarta hua.

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