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16th June 2008, 03:54 AM
Ghazal
Himmat-ae-iltija bhi nahin
Zabt ka hausla bhi nahin
Kal talak thae wafa kae afsanae
Taeri duniya main ab,wafa bhi nahin
Ab to khali sa hogiya hai ae dil
Dil main baqi,koi gila bhi nahin
Kaesae lautae bahar ka mausam
Ab wo khusboo bhari,hawa bhi nahin
Saans laetae hain phir bhi,aaj talak
Zindagi tujh sae hum,khafa bhi nahin
Daaman-ae-sabr thaam lo bardh ker
Ae na kehna kahin,Khuda bhi nahin
RAZ kal tak thae zindagi main zam
Zindagani main ab,maza bhi nahin
zam,,,,,deeply attatched
Razia Yasmeen RAZ
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16th June 2008, 09:34 AM
Razia jee:
aadaab!
subHa-subHa bazm meiN aate hi aapki taazaah Ghazal naZar nawaaz hu'ii.. dil to Shaad Shaad ho gayaa itani umdaah Ghazal ko paRh ke... poori Ghazal bahot hi Khuub haii.. do Sher dil ko be-had pasaNd aaYeN...
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Kaesae lautae bahar ka mausam
Ab wo khusboo bhari,hawa bhi nahin
Daaman-ae-sabr thaam lo bardh ker
Ae na kehna kahin,Khuda bhi nahin
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mere dil se niklii hu'ii daad-o-mubaaraqbaad qabUl keejiYeNgaa..!!KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN!!
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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hi dhaval -
16th June 2008, 03:27 PM
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Razia jee:
aadaab!
subHa-subHa bazm meiN aate hi aapki taazaah Ghazal naZar nawaaz hu'ii.. dil to Shaad Shaad ho gayaa itani umdaah Ghazal ko paRh ke... poori Ghazal bahot hi Khuub haii.. do Sher dil ko be-had pasaNd aaYeN... mere dil se niklii hu'ii daad-o-mubaaraqbaad qabUl keejiYeNgaa..!!KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN!!
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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hi
dhaval
khush raho
duaoan nae taeri mujhae khush kiya
ae merae dost taera bahut shukriya
kae terae bazm main mujh ko sab kuch mila
milgiyaa piyaar ek haseen silsila
waesae kuch bhi nahin main,mujhko maloom hai
phir bhi daetae ho herdum mujhae hausala
taera ehsaan hai,meherbani hai taeri
shukriya,shukriya,shukriya,shukriya
maangoon apnae khuda sae main ae herdum dua
wo karaega hamaesha tumhara bhala
razia
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16th June 2008, 03:49 PM
Wow! Beautiful!
Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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16th June 2008, 05:29 PM
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Wow! Beautiful!
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hi
khush-numa hai zindagi
bae-khudi hi bae-khudi
sara rakh kae kiya karaen
baant daen sabhi khushi
piyaar main bahar hai
phooloan main hai tazgi
dost bungayae ho tum
ae tumhari sadgi
khalam mujhae azeezter
yehi hai maeri aashiqi
yehi hai maera raahber
lutaoan ispae jaan bhi
zaban hai chup to RAZ kiya
bhali hai maeri khamushi
razia yasmeen RAZ
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16th June 2008, 05:34 PM
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Originally Posted by yasmeenraaz
Ghazal
Himmat-ae-iltija bhi nahin
Zabt ka hausla bhi nahin
Kal talak thae wafa kae afsanae
Taeri duniya main ab,wafa bhi nahin
Ab to khali sa hogiya hai ae dil
Dil main baqi,koi gila bhi nahin
Kaesae lautae bahar ka mausam
Ab wo khusboo bhari,hawa bhi nahin
Saans laetae hain phir bhi,aaj talak
Zindagi tujh sae hum,khafa bhi nahin
Daaman-ae-sabr thaam lo bardh ker
Ae na kehna kahin,Khuda bhi nahin
RAZ kal tak thae zindagi main zam
Zindagani main ab,maza bhi nahin
zam,,,,,deeply attatched
Razia Yasmeen RAZ
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bahut khoob .... Lajwab ghazal hai .... daad kabool kijye
karon tareef kese tere traane ki
pee dali her botel humne maikhane ki
kahien na mila khumaar teri ghazal jesa
bus yehi waja hai mere laut aane ki
Mujeeb
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16th June 2008, 05:44 PM
Himmat-ae-iltija bhi nahin
Zabt ka hausla bhi nahin
Kal talak thae wafa kae afsanae
Taeri duniya main ab,wafa bhi nahin
wakay bahot khoobsurat likha hai aapne.......jaise haqiqat bayan ho rahi ho..........
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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16th June 2008, 10:11 PM
Saans laetae hain phir bhi,aaj talak
Zindagi tujh sae hum,khafa bhi nahin
RAZ kal tak thae zindagi main zam
Zindagani main ab,maza bhi nahin
bohat hi zaberdast likhte rahiye yunhi khush rahain
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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18th June 2008, 03:36 PM
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Originally Posted by zainy
Himmat-ae-iltija bhi nahin
Zabt ka hausla bhi nahin
Kal talak thae wafa kae afsanae
Taeri duniya main ab,wafa bhi nahin
wakay bahot khoobsurat likha hai aapne.......jaise haqiqat bayan ho rahi ho..........
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hi zainy
khush raho
tum nae bilkul sahi kaha
aansoo hain humdard hamarae
is duniya main jhootae saarae
jab bhi ghum sae dil tha boajhal
khushiyaan hum sae hoi jo oajhal
saarae log hoyae paraayae
aansoo hain humdard hamarae
aansoo nae hi saath nibhaya
koi hamarae saath na aaya
chupkae,chupkae ae beh aayae
Aansoo hain humdard hamarae
khush raho
love
razia
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18th June 2008, 03:44 PM
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Saans laetae hain phir bhi,aaj talak
Zindagi tujh sae hum,khafa bhi nahin
RAZ kal tak thae zindagi main zam
Zindagani main ab,maza bhi nahin
bohat hi zaberdast likhte rahiye yunhi khush rahain
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hi
tum nae tteek kaha
zaat bhi apni,apni kahan hai
jaesae paraya saara jahan hai
khud sae hoyae hain door yahan sab
chahat hai per,chah kahan hai
saari fiza hai dhundli dhundli
ab to aagae sirf dhuwaan hai
RAZ yahan hai jung ka mahaol
Na to aman hai,na hi aman hai
love
razia
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18th June 2008, 03:53 PM
salaam Yasmeen saaHiba,
kaisi haiN aap? ummeed hai k bahot Theek hoNgi
aapkii yeh Ghazal bhii bahot pasand aayii. seedhe saadhe alfaaz emn pur-asar baat kah dii aapne. dil ko chho lene waale jajziye pesh kiye haiN. ek achchhii Ghazal kahne par merii jaanib se dili mubaarakbaad qubool kijiye. share karne ke liye shukria.
yeh ash'aar nisbatan ziyaada pasand aaye
Himmat-ae-iltija bhi nahin
Zabt ka hausla bhi nahin
Kal talak thae wafa kae afsanae
Taeri duniya main ab,wafa bhi nahin
Ab to khali sa hogiya hai ae dil
Dil main baqi,koi gila bhi nahin
Kaesae lautae bahar ka mausam
Ab wo khusboo bhari,hawa bhi nahin
tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul
maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz
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18th June 2008, 05:31 PM
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salaam Yasmeen saaHiba,
kaisi haiN aap? ummeed hai k bahot Theek hoNgi
aapkii yeh Ghazal bhii bahot pasand aayii. seedhe saadhe alfaaz emn pur-asar baat kah dii aapne. dil ko chho lene waale jajziye pesh kiye haiN. ek achchhii Ghazal kahne par merii jaanib se dili mubaarakbaad qubool kijiye. share karne ke liye shukria.
yeh ash'aar nisbatan ziyaada pasand aaye
hi
mukhlis khush raho
aek ghazal tumhari nazar
ger khubool ho
wafaparst hain ,wafaoan kii baat kertae hain
tumharae wastae,duaoan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi to shor -sharabae main doob jatae hain
kabhi to mustt hawaoan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi to dil main utter atae hain,birchiyan bunker
kabhi to meetti nigahoan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi to khar diyae jatae hain dil ko maerae
kabhi kabhi to gulaboan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi ae tordtae hain dil ko khilonoan ki tareh
kabhi kabhi to ae chahoan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi kabhi to andharoan main jhoank daetae hain
kabhi kabhi ae ujaloan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi to RAZ chupatae hain,aabroo ki tareh
kabhi to RAZ isharoan ki baat kertae hain
razia
Himmat-ae-iltija bhi nahin
Zabt ka hausla bhi nahin
Kal talak thae wafa kae afsanae
Taeri duniya main ab,wafa bhi nahin
Ab to khali sa hogiya hai ae dil
Dil main baqi,koi gila bhi nahin
Kaesae lautae bahar ka mausam
Ab wo khusboo bhari,hawa bhi nahin
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hi
mukhlis khush raho
aek ghazal tumhari nazar
ger khubool ho
wafaparst hain ,wafaoan kii baat kertae hain
tumharae wastae,duaoan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi to shor -sharabae main doob jatae hain
kabhi to mustt hawaoan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi to dil main utter atae hain,birchiyan bunker
kabhi to meetti nigahoan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi to khar diyae jatae hain dil ko maerae
kabhi kabhi to gulaboan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi ae tordtae hain dil ko khilonoan ki tareh
kabhi kabhi to ae chahoan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi kabhi to andharoan main jhoank daetae hain
kabhi kabhi ae ujaloan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi to RAZ chupatae hain,aabroo ki tareh
kabhi to RAZ isharoan ki baat kertae hain
razia
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18th June 2008, 05:47 PM
salaam Yasmeen saaHiba,
waah, bahot Khoob, subHaan Allah, marHabaa: yeh vo chand alfaaz haiN jo be-saaKhta zabaan se adaa ho gaye aapkii yeh Khoobsoorat, dil-kash, murass'a aur dil-aavez Ghazal paRh kar aur phir us pe sone pe sohaagaa yeh k ise aapne merii nazar kii hai...Allah! kahiiN nazar na lag jaaye...masha Allah.
aapkii shaa'irii masha Allah se bahot hii pur-asar aur dil ko chhoo lene waalii hotii hai. Allah kare zor-e-raqam aur ziyaada
Allah Haafiz
faqat muKhlis
MuKhlis
Quote:
Originally Posted by yasmeenraaz
wafaparst hain ,wafaoan kii baat kertae hain
tumharae wastae,duaoan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi to dil main utter atae hain,birchiyan bunker
kabhi to meetti nigahoan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi to khar diyae jatae hain dil ko maerae
kabhi kabhi to gulaboan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi kabhi to andharoan main jhoank daetae hain
kabhi kabhi ae ujaloan ki baat kertae hain
kabhi to RAZ chupatae hain,aabroo ki tareh
kabhi to RAZ isharoan ki baat kertae hain
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tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul
maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz
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